1 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2021 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ugh. This feels like such a missed opportunity - the idea of the moon bounce being the sort of the thing the two of them in their very it's-okay-to-be-immature-and-enjoy-it-sometimes way would have really been into as a team. I liked this A LOT.
Date: January 16, 2008 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was simultaneously very cute, but very sad. I loved the "ten bucks" part... It about broke my heart right there :(
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! I read "moonbounce", and i immediately thought, this is either going to be smutty or silly. not that i would have protested either, but this was just not what i expected. love, love love, your descriptions as usual, and of course, we had to throw some reality in there. and the bet at the end? yeah, i think i have to go cry into a bucket of ben and jerry's now..
Date: April 14, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, this is sweet but so, so sad. Lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Hope and heartbreak, all in one. I loved this. The childishness enchanted me, as did The Way It Was - Redux. The role reversal was very well executed.
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2007 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm starting to think that these "moon bounce fics" are the best fics of all the fics. =D
This goes up there with one of my favorite stories, ever! So magical but then brought back down to reality. Loved every word of it!
Date: April 13, 2007 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really good and real. Great last line by Jim. Loved this!
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. This was amazing. I was so wanting them to jump last night but even if they did I don't know if it would have been this amazing. And bringing up the bets again, awesome. Wow...just wow.
Date: April 13, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
He lets go of her then and she’s instantly freezing and lonely
I think this is why she called off her wedding. When Jim left, she realized that Roy was never the one who kept her warm. This is sad and lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooohhh, this is so, so good. I have a serious lump in my throat right now.
5 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was so sweet and sad at the same time. Nicely done.
Date: April 13, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
TGFTMBS! (Thank God For The Moon Bounce Story)
I said on LJ last night that if someone didn't immediately write a moon bounce story, I was going to die. Thankfully, I did not have to cross over at this time. Woo!
Loved this. I actually like that you didn't end it on a blissful note, because that way it can work into the canon of the show. I can always imagine that this is exactly how it really happened, without having to write off anything in the show. Great job.
And I LOVE this part:
“So I think the point of the moon bounce is to bounce…”
“Oh, really? They’re not meant for just standing awkwardly like this? Huh.”
So great! LOL!
Date: April 13, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh.... just that little moment by the moon bounce last night made up for so much of the angst.... I love it.
And I loved this. Beautiful. You make it a little easier to hold onto the faith in Jim and Pam. Thanks.
Date: April 13, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah. That was so lovely, but it just made me so sad. Sadly realistic if it were to happen. You have me cursing Jim and Pam now.
Date: April 13, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah. So good. And it feels like something that could really happen on the show, which just makes it all that much more fantastic.
I love all these moon bounce fics. :)
8 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the first paragraph - it speaks of balmy spring evenings + possibility. :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seriously, who wouldn't be excited about a moon bounce? I wanted to just go hopping on that (I will say, that yesterday, I had about ... well, lets just say that I had so much energy, I really did just spend the day bouncing. I really just mean bouncing up and down. i had energy to burn and sitting and standing just wasn't doing it. so i was bouncing.)
And now because of these moon bounce fics, I will only think of romance.
They need to be friends again. Breaks my heart those two.
Date: April 13, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh boy. This is a lovely thing. You know, I've been thinking about a sort of angsty bouncy castle story (how ridiculous does that sound?) myself...but now that I read this, and it's so perfect - I don't know. Favorite line: She's just happy, is all. Simple and lovely and somehow just nails it.
Date: April 13, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Also, I own nothing but love for how excited Jim seemed about the moon bounce. He was so adorable then, wasn't he.
In that brief moment when they were standing in front of the moon bounce yesterday, I was just dying for them to go inside and jump. Even if Greg Daniels has failed me (yet again!) you have made up for it. Great story!
Date: April 13, 2007 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not the millionth moon bounce fic... probably the first quasi-angsty one, though. I like your different spin on things -- more realistic, but still hopeful.
Date: April 13, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! Sad moonbouncy fic! :( I liked Jim's body warming her up though. He's a good pillow.