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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 07:26 am Title: i wanna see it from space

I love how Pam goes and hides in the inflatable castle. Its so simple and its like sweet and funny and stuff. (wow, so descriptive. and stuff)
Poor Pam. That is so rough for her.
I don't want a watermelon, but I still leave a review :P

Author's Response:

There just might be a watermelon on your car sometime....>.>

thanks for the review! glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 08:11 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

ok, and now, i want to go jump off the Scranton Park office building. SO PAINFUL!!! but that's why i loved it!

Author's Response:

Well, there'll be a bouncy castle at the bottom to catch you. =P...thanks so much!

Reviewer: alferz Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 06:31 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

Ow. That hit me right in the griefbone. Wonderfully written!



Author's Response: =] Thanks! So glad you liked it

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 07:59 am Title: i wanna see it from space

Oh, that hurts. The humiliation of being caught, the absurdity of escaping to that big bouncy castle - feeling utterly decimated. I actually held my breath a little when she was in there. Jim speaking so quietly, not knowing what to say, Karen murmuring in the background (adding exponentially to Pam's mortification ) - all so painfully evocative.  I like the simplicity of this ...perfect for how helpless and small Pam felt.

Author's Response: =] Thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it. I've been a fan of yours for a while now...thank you very much!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 12:32 am Title: i wanna see it from space

Oh, that was so painful to read. Not because I didn't like it (which I did), it was just so hard for Pam. This was very real. I could definitely see it happening on the show! Great job!

Author's Response: =] Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 09:37 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

Oh, Pam. This story makes me hate Karen, and even Jim a little bit. That's a tribute to you- they're acting perfectly in-character and perfectly sweet to each other, but I ache for Pam. You portray her beautifully here.

Author's Response: Thanks so much...=] I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 07:34 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

I feel like this actually happened, so sad (which I love)


Author's Response: =] Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: juteux Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 06:48 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

Oh man. Oh PAM. :((( Jim bringing her purse? Oh jeez. My heart, it hurts.

There’s an Ugly Betty marathon starting soon, and she wants to make a stop at Taco Bell before going home.   

Pam's life sounds strangely like mine, only with less Jim.  



Author's Response:

=] Ugly Betty-Taco Bell is becoming a tradition for me. Chalupaaa...anyways, glad you liked it! Thank you!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 06:14 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

Potty-mouth Pam??  Ha!  Unexpected, but then if I saw Karen and Jim kissing, I'd say that, too.  Poor Pam.  :(


Author's Response: =] Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2007 04:51 pm Title: i wanna see it from space

This is a great story.  I always appreciate a well written Pam becuase to me she's the hardest character to write.  And this is a very well written Pam story.  I like how her curiosity (combined with her new boldness maybe) get the best of her, but then when she gets caught, old instincts take over and she runs and hides in the castle and curls up like a kid.  Keep it coming!


Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.

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