7 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Please don't leave us hanging! I need to know what happens now that Jim has finally told Karen the truth - will he really stay in NY with her until Sunday? Please update soon!
Date: April 26, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
i really hope that she says something like that on "beach day" cuz that would be awesome.
Date: April 24, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loving this so far, especially the knitting section!
Date: April 24, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like how Jim thought a bit about it and then called Pam from NY. Of course, he still wasn't clear enough about what he was thinking, but you can't have everything!
All the Dwight stuff was so good!
I like Karen's response to Jim's big reveal, and the following I found to be so funny:
“Actually, I do want to talk about it.”
Karen was taken aback by his response. It was the first time he had said that.
What will happen next? I'll read whenever you get to it!
Date: April 24, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah, JIM. People need TIME.
Enjoying this!
Date: April 19, 2007 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Karen isn't really paying that much attention to how much attention Jim is giving to Pam. Much like last week's episode, really!
I think you had a little problem in these lines: "She blushed a bit and let her hand fall back into her lap. “I’m beginning to see why teachers used to hit kids with rulers,” he said. “You don’t want to make the same mistake twice when that’s your punishment.”" Is this really what he said, or she said? It seems like it should be she, or maybe that something is missing...?
Maybe Pam and Jim should knit themselves a 2 person sleeping bag. Karen can knit herself a single. What? No good? Works for me.
Anyway, I'm enjoying this.
Author's Response: thanks for the heads up-i read it 10x but something always manages to slip through. the formatting went funny and i thought i had caught it all. fixed!
Date: April 19, 2007 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey i really do love this! Hmm what will hapeen nextt! ahhh
Date: April 19, 2007 10:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Jim knitting? Those long fingers and beautiful hands? I'm in love! BTW -- I like the detail about big needles & yarn for beginner projects so you see some quick progress!
Author's Response: now if only we could get some quick progress in the Jam department... for real. (on tv, that is) :)
Date: April 18, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw. She's nice. But if Pam's only doing it to get to Jim, I almost feel sorry for Karen....almost. Lol
Date: April 18, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun! Cute last 2 lines also!