Date: May 24, 2007 08:00 am Title: It was Tuesday.
I don't care about exciting. This is REAL. Oh, Pam. And oh, Jim, for making it normal and Tuesday :) Oh. I don't have many words other than that. But once again, wonderful wonderful wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much. I've had this feeling that she's having and it's a tough one to capture. I'm glad you liked it ;-)
Date: May 23, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Prologue: How is New York?
so good. so, so good.
Date: May 23, 2007 08:46 am Title: It was Tuesday.
I really like this story...I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet or not.
Anyway, I thought this chapter felt very appropriate given all that has happened to Pam in such a short period of time.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 07:25 am Title: It was Tuesday.
This is perfect. I think this was the absolute perfect way for them to transition back into Dunder Mifflin and the work week, and really, the real world. I really love this story; even if it takes 3 months to update, I'll read it and love it. Thanks so much for writing. :)
Author's Response: lol aw thank YOU for reading.
Date: May 23, 2007 06:55 am Title: It was Tuesday.
Aww, a glimpse of 'normal'. Bonus points for annoying Dwight AND getting Michael out of the office!
Date: May 23, 2007 06:32 am Title: It was Tuesday.
no, i really like that it's just her trying to get back to normal. you totally feel that after a huge crisis, and you wrote it very well.
Date: May 23, 2007 05:08 am Title: It was Tuesday.
I'm so glad you're updating!
“His tires are totally locked,” he informed her, his smile now not only visible but audible in the stretch of his vowels. Oh, perfect! This describes exactly that certain tone he uses when he's being funny. Very nice, the way Jim being Jim is what gets her back to normal.
Date: May 22, 2007 11:47 pm Title: It was Tuesday.
No, I think that this was just right. Jim would be with it enough to know that he needed to keep it normal and calm for a little bit (esp. after the last ch. in his case!) and let Pam chill for a few days before getting in to things with her. Good call.
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2007 11:35 pm Title: It was Tuesday.
No, I think it's perfect. The range of emotions is exciting, even if there's no sex. There doesn't always have to be sex, ya know! (Okay, that's a lie. There does always have to be sex. But it doesn't have to appear in every chapter, so I think you're okay.)
Date: May 22, 2007 10:36 pm Title: It was Tuesday.
I really liked the not-exciting-ness of this chapter. I think it was a good way to show how in tune with Pam Jim is and how she is scared, but he gets that. And any prank is tons of fun. And as always, superbly written.
Still loving this! Thanks!
Author's Response: ugh thank you so much for reviewing this chapter. I was freaking out about posting it and wondering if the direction of it was all wrong. Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!!!
Date: May 17, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Torturously realistic
ah. sigh. wonderful smuff... Can't wait for more, as always!
Author's Response: thank you ;-) trying to get it together for the next chapter, but I'm a little bit distracted by the actual JAM we have going on right now lol
Date: May 17, 2007 12:00 pm Title: Torturously realistic
Oh dear lord.
this story is amazing.
I do love the way you write.
=)
Date: May 17, 2007 06:19 am Title: Torturously realistic
WOW. i'm with jim on this:
that dream was hot... and they hadn't even gotten to the actual sex!
i really like that he's just at home now, trying to figure out how to react to what happened to them over the weekend. i mean obviously things are different now, but what does that mean for monday at work? and they've been SLEEPING together for like 4 nights... yeah... i can't wait to see where this goes next. i love this fic :)Author's Response: thanks! Yeah we'll see how the transition goes to being back in Scranton. The next chapter is already in the works, so stay with me ;-)
Date: May 17, 2007 04:18 am Title: Torturously realistic
She wrapped herself around him like he was a pillar and she was a vine.
That? That is lovely imagery. Wow. This is a bit of a departure in tone from the other chapters, but it totally works. No "TWSS" intended, but you're definitely building up to something really, really good.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought it was about time to introduce the sex factor. I've sort of been avoiding it except for a few mentions here and there, but I think that since they're finally back in Scranton and Jim was finally alone in his house...let's get sexy, right? lol. thanks for the review.
and that's what she said.
Date: May 16, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Torturously realistic
That's not the end is it?? Not with pretend smut right? We're gonna get REAL smut right? lol. Oh man the last two chapters were great as usual! I really have enjoyed this story so much. Please say it ain't over though!
Author's Response: Uh...clearly not over. Real smut is pending...like two chapters away. I just couldn't resist smutting it up a LITTLE. lol sorry for the tease.
Date: May 16, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
I have no words to tell you how amazingly gorgeous this story is. Every line is so, so beautiful, and the depth of emotion and insight and detail are just stunning. Each chapter leaves me breathless. I can see both of them so clearly moving through this, especially the way you described Jim confessing - so exactly yes! Anyway, seriously amazing. I never want it to end!
Author's Response: lol thanks. it feels like it's never going to, but I'm sure eventually I'll be content with where they are and it'll end itself. Thanks for the compliments, I'm so glad you're enjoying each chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 11:28 am Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
I looooooooooooooooooooove this story. I just spent the past hour and a half probably reading all the chapters. It's amazing. I can't wait to read the rest of it! :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! I'll try to keep it coming ;-)
Date: May 16, 2007 08:06 am Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
Just wanted to check in & let you know that this is one of my current favorite stories -- very inventive premise, and UST so thick you could cut it with a spork. And poor tortured Jim is just delicious. I hope he gets a break soon.
Author's Response: lol well said! a spork! I love it. And don't worry, Jim's break is on the way.
Date: May 16, 2007 07:17 am Title: It's what you do to me.
Liked it? Hated it? Lay it on me.
Liked it! Consider yourself laid!
That's what she said....
I blame this on the lack of sleep. I'll shut up now and finish reading.
Author's Response: HAHA nice! Hey, I wrote my newest chapter on two hours of sleep, so I feel you. Love your reviews. Thanks.
Date: May 16, 2007 07:04 am Title: Phantom Bruises
The thought that finally convinced him to do so was that Fancy New Jim Halpert was an asshole.
That made me giggle. LOL. I'm loving this by the way. So sad for Pam, but sometimes it does take something so tragic to finally bring people together. This is so very well written that I can't stop reading even though it's 9 am and I've had no sleep in almost 24 hours lol. Even still, I must continue.
Author's Response: that makes me laugh too. just cause it's soooo true...
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 06:12 am Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
This was just great. Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: thank you
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 05:22 am Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
*sigh* So sweet. I love that you let Pam just be quiet here, and that Jim was OK with that. How can she resist?
Author's Response: god knows I couldn't
Date: May 16, 2007 02:27 am Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
Awesome chapter! Jim's realization and confession were so sweet, so the REAL Jim, that I hope this is who we get back on the show, because I miss him. I'm totally loving this story, can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: ugh I know. Lol I feel like every chapter I'm like "HEY JIM! THIS IS HOW YOU USED TO BE!"
Date: May 15, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
Perfection. Beautiful perfection.
Jim coming to understand himself and Pam here is so well done.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I figured Pam's a little too tired to respond at the moment ;-) she had a tumultuous few days.
Date: May 15, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Goodbye, Rand McNally.
When I really like a fic I go back and read the last chapter. I do that every time you update.
Author's Response:
I do that too! Thanks so much for the compliment