Date: April 24, 2007 02:00 pm Title: The Beach
aaaaaaah hahaha. OH my god I laughed out loud at the end. amazing stuff here.
Date: April 23, 2007 10:19 am Title: The Beach
Now that is some ending. Yes what will happen to Jim next?;)
Date: April 22, 2007 02:53 pm Title: The Beach
Oh, dear. Hold on tight everyone, it's gonna be a bumpy ride. (twss)
Date: April 22, 2007 12:00 pm Title: The Beach
Oh my God EEEK! And HA! This is awesome. How to recover from that one...
Date: April 22, 2007 09:32 am Title: The Beach
ha, the end made me laugh. i loved it, keep it coming
Date: April 22, 2007 06:37 am Title: The Beach
Oh my. I DEFINITELY wouldn't mind seeing this happen. I can't wait to read more.
Please be gentle with poor Jim...he's just a man after all.
A man in love.
Date: April 21, 2007 09:18 pm Title: The Beach
Oh, please, oh, please . . .
(Couldn't tell you exactly what I'm begging for--just anything to follow this up! That was beautiful, and I laughed so hard through a couple parts! Love the Phyllis/Karen match.)
Date: April 21, 2007 08:46 pm Title: The Beach
Am I the only one who wants to say this?:
Two men enter, one man leaves!
Good job, Creed.
8 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 08:05 pm Title: The Beach
It's great so far, but you probably want to put spoiler warnings on it. Some people are even sensitive about knowing the episode title.
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the heads up-- looks like the mods already fixed it.
Date: April 21, 2007 07:57 pm Title: The Beach
OH MY GOD! I love it when jim's body makes the calls, his brain is too slow on the uptake. This is so so so so great. I mean more now!
Date: April 21, 2007 07:53 pm Title: The Beach
OH SHIT! I said it out loud before Jim even thought it. Wow, awkward city!
Date: April 21, 2007 07:21 pm Title: The Beach
OMG, I can't believe you went there! Poor, poor Jim. I will of course be tuning into the next chapter to see what happens...
Date: April 21, 2007 07:19 pm Title: The Beach
OH MY GOD! I love it when jim's body makes the calls, his brain is too slow on the uptake. This is so so so so great. I mean more now!
Date: April 21, 2007 06:44 pm Title: The Beach
AW! Pam gave Jim a hard on. It must be a good sign! LMAO!
So...I love where this is going! Update soon please!
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 06:41 pm Title: The Beach
LOLLL. Poor Jim @ the last part. Ah, poor dude. Really enjoying this! Keep it up!
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 06:34 pm Title: The Beach
LMAO omg!!! i love this
Please write more sooon!
10 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2007 06:27 pm Title: The Beach
is jim 15?! karen should just give up now because the lower contingent of Team Halpert has spoken. (dawesome, by the way) enough said. update soon!
Date: April 21, 2007 06:08 pm Title: The Beach
Well, on the plus side, doesn't that mean he's ready to be up and about? I mean, um... he's healed. Yeah, healed. Feeling better. Ready to have a ball. Damn!
I enjoyed this, especially Karen's meanness, Phyllis pinning Karen, and the Booze Cruise callback.
I laughed at the end!!! Maybe Jim can convince Karen that this is the kind of thing which always happens when you're recovering from getting jabbed in the nuts. Spontaneous Hardening of the Genitalia. I'm sure Jim can think up a better name for the reaction. Karen has bought every other piece of crap he's told her so far, right?
Date: April 21, 2007 06:04 pm Title: The Beach
geez. Poor Jim. him and his penis are just not having a good day.