Date: May 09, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Juggling Kittens
o man....i am in tears. the line "it gave me you" and the part about giving her something fragile, his heart...that was amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!! It touched me and I wrote it! LOL. Thanks for reading.
Date: May 09, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Juggling Kittens
Mad love for the slow clap! This series so wonderful...I am really loving it. Please write more if you are still into it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! This has been a great experience for me, writing this. And you can never get mad at a slow clap...unless no one else joins in and then you feel stupid!
Date: May 09, 2007 09:04 am Title: Juggling Kittens
I was just thinking about this fic when i got the message that it was updated....loooooooved the chapter, perfect balance of humor and emotion
GREAT JOB!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and hope you continue to read. I try my best to have a mix of both with being too angsty and too syrupy sweet. I hope it;s working. Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2007 09:02 am Title: Juggling Kittens
That was really great - definitely worth the wait!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and I look forward to all your stories as well!
Date: May 09, 2007 07:07 am Title: Juggling Kittens
This story just continues to be absolutely fantastic. (there are a few teensy weensy typos though - just wanted to let you know because it's so awesome I want it to be perfect!)
I love the whole set up you've created and how honest Jim and Pam are with each other. I just flat out adore this story to say the very least. Hopefully there's more to come!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! And as a HUGE fan of your writing, I am humbled. As for the typos, half the time, I type these while my kids are running around playing so I'm a bit distracted. LOL. I will work on trying to be more careful though. =-)
Date: May 09, 2007 03:49 am Title: Juggling Kittens
*sigh* i love this chapter. these two are so precious and i love that the therapist has started joining in on the sarcasm and jokes. it's so much fun and so much happiness all at one time :) i love it.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! I wanted to make the therapist more than just a third party that just sits there. The therapist gets along with them, disagrees with their methods and can point out flaws and strengths. I wanted the therapist to be a true character yet share the opinion of the JAM readers.
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2007 02:12 am Title: Juggling Kittens
LOVE this line:
I hope you didn't think I literally put my heart in the teapot. That's gross Beesely. I love you.
so much it hurts..
Author's Response: Thank you!! I rack my brain trying to figure out how Jim can incorporate humor in even the most opposite situations. That's one of the reasons I love his character.
Date: May 02, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Oh Brother!
Heh - I loved how obviously lost the therapist was in their discussion of their pranks and what goes on in the office. And then to bring it back to the angstiness of the brotherly hatred was a nice contrast. But it was good to see them come to some sort of understanding about it. It's really great to see these real issues come up and how they work through them.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it! I'm trying to make their issues serious enough for counseling but not serious enough for divorce and if need be, not issues they immediately solve but can get past for the time being. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2007 01:57 am Title: Oh Brother!
I really love that jim and pam are so competitive.. just love!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I love when they challenge each other. I have since Jim's challenge to her while playing poker on Casino night.
Date: April 29, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Oh Brother!
Love this fic...great idea and each one is fascinating to read. I hope you won't mind if I quibble with your characterization though. Most of us guys, if we take a beating on the football field, we don't want to talk about it. We're certainly not going to whine on and on to our wives and therapists about it. I really think Jim is too proud, too stoic, too much of a guy to say stuff like "He tried to amputate me!"
Date: April 29, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Oh Brother!
HAAA just read this from the beginning and it is such a great fun angsty hilarious fic
Can't wait to read more
Date: April 29, 2007 03:57 pm Title: Oh Brother!
"Jim, you also have to extend an olive branch to your brother in law."
"I did, and he tried to break it."
Hehe. Snarky!Jim is hilarious. I think this might be my favorite chapter. I really like the idea of certain members of Pam's family not liking Jim- it's not something I've ever thought about, but it makes perfect sense that Pam's family would grow attached to Roy after 10 years and wouldn't be very eager to get to know Jim. And I love how they turned the scavenger hunt into a competition- reminds me of 'The Fire' and their Deserted Island game. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 01:49 pm Title: The Trust Bubble
Very enjoyable so far. I love how you've captured their feelings for each other and how it's very easy to imagine. Not so sure about the Roy thing, I feel like he's able to let her move on and wouldn't react in such ways, but ot each his own. Nice!
Author's Response:
oh no, roy didn't do anything really. Most of it was on Paul, cause he's an ass. In the chapter, I never actually blamed Roy, Jim was mostly pissed because of Roy's presence, but I never really said why Roy was there.
I think he would let her move on, but her brother Paul is an ass, and maybe in a way Roy might like the fact Jim doesn't get to have that part of Pam. And I actually set this in the near future because I still wanted wounds to kind of be opened. Thanks for the imput though!
Date: April 29, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Oh Brother!
Awww...stupid Paul & Roy. How could anyone not love Jim? Especially with Pam? I love reading about them having real issues...makes it very real.
Date: April 29, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Nothing to talk about
Hahahaha...best chapter ending. I love how well Pam & Jim play off each other. And the office sounds super crazy when having to explain it to someone else.
8 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Oh Brother!
Great chapter! Love the conversation regarding Jim's injury and the banter from Jim and Pam throughout the chapter, especially at the end. I laughed when Pam asked what the winner received and they turned the simple excersise into a competition. That sounds exactly like something they would do. Cant wait for more.
Date: April 29, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Half off
I liked that part about Pam having said "I do" once in reference to Jim being tired of the "I can't"s and "I don't"s. Perfect line for the therapist.
Date: April 29, 2007 12:32 pm Title: Redact that!
That Happy Feet line was hilarious. I love how their "hate" lists showed how much they really love each other. Very true.
Date: April 29, 2007 11:58 am Title: Oh Brother!
I am loving this story! It is so believable. Every fight they have seems like a something they would naturally fight over, but you've balanced it out with what makes them so great together! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: April 29, 2007 11:56 am Title: The Trust Bubble
I'm really enjoying this story. I was worried at first because I'm a happily ever after type of person, but I really like it! :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 11:56 am Title: Oh Brother!
Too cute! I love competitive JAM. Keep 'em coming!
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 11:54 am Title: The Trust Bubble
This story is incredibly fun and I am enjoying it immensely. Looking forward to more :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 29, 2007 11:44 am Title: Oh Brother!
Another really fun chapter. See how much material there would be for the writers if GD let the writers finally put them together???? Looking forward to more, more, more!!!!
heheheh.....he said 'butt munch'. ;-D
Date: April 29, 2007 11:39 am Title: Oh Brother!
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! That's totally them. They'd definitely turn it into a game. And I LOL'ed at Jim being a "butt munch." Ha!!
One tiny little punctuation nitpick: make sure to set off a person's name with a comma when someone's addressing them. Like this: "Maybe he'll understand, Jim." Otherwise it sounds like Pam's talking to someone else about her brother understanding Jim--the way you can understand Spanish or something. :)
Date: April 29, 2007 11:37 am Title: Oh Brother!
Gotta tell you. You could keep on writing this forever and I'll be right there for the entire ride. So like them to become competitive over a simple assignment.
Adore...adore...ADORE!!