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Reviewer: JellyBeans Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2010 08:14 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

More please :)

Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: October 29, 2008 10:24 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

wait.  i love this.  where is the rest???

Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 05:40 am Title: Mr. Scott in the ballroom with the candlestick

Oh, this is fantastic! What a wonderful idea for a story! I love how nearly unhinged Jim is being! And everyone is so in character. Oh, and the kiss! I really hope you decide to continue this story because it is far, far too good to be put on the "not finished" pile.

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2008 03:14 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

This very good. I can't imagine Jim being so upset about being cheated on by Karen but you write it very convincingly. I have a few guesses on who it is so you need to update soon!

Reviewer: Catslove17 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Update soon!

Reviewer: bootyz30 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Im loving this story! Keep it comin!

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 06:59 am Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

i really liked that! i can't wait for the next chapterrrrr. please continue it soon!

Reviewer: AliLamba Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

GAH! NO! I HOOKED MYSELF ON SOMETHING THAT WASN'T FINISHED YET! ;__; Now you have to finish it immediately, and I really hope it involves Jim and Pam going to the sushi restaurant wearing fake mustaches.

:DD

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

But.... please FINISH!!! Really. You've got a great knack for the banter, most importantly, but you also.... you've kind of left us hanging here, and I'd like to know!!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

more! more!! more!!!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2007 06:12 am Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

jim is really screwing things up for himself... i mean if he's not careful, karen's gonna dump him and pam is going to be SUPER pissed. what was he thinking? boys are so dumb! nice development with kelly and ryan though... hmm... i'm still not sure if karen's cheating though. i think jim's looking really hard for a way out of the relationship. nice chapter...  can't wait for more :) 

Reviewer: naomi_dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Oooh, Jim trying to make Karen jealous perhaps?!  Love it.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Ummm, I like the Girlfriend song, I admit it.  I"ll even cop to it being a ringtone, haha!!  I am so in love with this story it's not even funny.  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

go pam! tell him hes being an ass!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Ouch.

I know this really isn't the point of commenting on chapters as interesting as this, but my brother met Survivorman just this weekend at a canoe race thingy that Discovery Canada was hosting.  He's surprisingly short.

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Mr. Scott in the ballroom with the candlestick

seriously after that AMAZING ryan/karen fic I read today on LJ I ABSOLUTELY want karen to be cheating on Jim that would so serve him right. Oh and I want him to grovel for pam's forgiveness....grovel.

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Mr. Schrute in the kitchen with the rope

Dude, Jim is an ass! I like it.

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

Gah. Poor Pam.

I've lost all verbal skill today. :) But I love your story.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 09:27 am Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

Ryan IS the man-whore of fanfic!  I think Jim's gone a little nutso... Are they really sleeping together?  Is there no one to sleep with in Scranton besides Dunder-Mifflinites?

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 08:46 am Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

Oh man, I am so intrigued by this. Really love how you're writing everyone. They're all so in character, and poor confused, neurotic, sometimes-(un)intentional-asshole Jim is really entertaining.

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 04:51 am Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

Yay for this story! I love the interlocking elements -- the snooping adds a fun tension to Michael's lunacy, and the dual search is very clever.

And, of course, Confused Bastard Jim is loads of fun to watch. (I think somebody needs a Jump to Conclusions" mat.) And poor Pam! Update soon, please!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 03:54 am Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

I can't wait to find out if Karen is really cheating on Jim...
OR maybe he with another girl who's not Karen/Kelly but Karen IS with another person who's a GIRL!
ok...
Time to stop me and my crazy imagination now..

but seriously, good chapter.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

this is getting better and better by the second...very excited for more!!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 09:39 pm Title: Mr. Scott in the ballroom with the candlestick

wow Jim sounds like he's in love with karen, I can see this ending really badly for Pam. Or maybe jim will convince Pam to try to seduce Ryan to see if he bites (I know you're having mental imagery of that right now) and then there will be another RYAM lovefest, or maybe you'll be kind to jammers this time and jim will reaize that he doesn't give a fuck as to who karen is...well fucking; I'm amazed he can kiss Pam so non-chalantly, last time I kissed someone I was in love I definitely felt something...

so this is your particular brand of genius...leaving us all wanting more! You've really created a unique mystery...mad props.

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Mr. Howard in the billiard room with the lead pipe

"And he's going to try and sleep with afterwards no less." I think you need a her in there.  Or a him.  It's all gooood!

You know I'm going to like Jim and Pam kissing under almost any situation. 

If Ryan has any sense at all, he wears condoms with Kelly since we know she "forgets" to take her pills on purpose. I prefer to think of him having an "affair" with Karen, because frankly, that's just more fun.

This line is very Kelly: "It is SO gross in there. I can't believe I went in, can you believe it? I can't believe it."

I love how Jim sent Kelly out after Ryan.  

"Karen seems like she's doing a whole hell of a lot more than that with the fucking temp."  What, what?  Karen wants 'more than that'?  Was that a deliberate MTT?

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