1 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2020 02:50 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Love the story!!Would love to see the story continue and see maybe how the kids react to them being together in like a Brady Bunch type situation.
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2010 08:15 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
I know this was written a while ago, but I love more!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2010 11:01 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Oh my god. That was incredible! Great job and I know you wrote this AGES ago, but please - if you have the time keep going! I loved this, it was so well written, this is by far awesome with a lot of extra blossom!
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 08:23 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
are you kidding, this is the end:( UPDATE
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 08:08 pm Title: Part 2- Reunited and It Feels So Good...
So wrong that I find Daddy Jim SO sexy.
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2009 08:03 pm Title: Part 1- Age Really Ain't Nothin' But a Number
O.M.G LOVE IT
Date: February 09, 2008 09:44 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Aww sweet fluffy goodness. =)
Date: February 09, 2008 09:39 am Title: Part 3- What Better Place than Adventure Zone?
They have such adorable kids...and such a painful past. I am just loving this little story. =)
Date: February 09, 2008 09:33 am Title: Part 2- Reunited and It Feels So Good...
Aww, so good. =)
Date: February 09, 2008 09:28 am Title: Part 1- Age Really Ain't Nothin' But a Number
Awww what a great start!
10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 04:45 am Title: Part 1- Age Really Ain't Nothin' But a Number
I got so excited when I saw that Alex's dad was Mr.Halpert!! This story is soo cute and I can't wait to start the next chapter!! :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
OMG...what a sweet story! I love it!
Date: June 08, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Part 1- Age Really Ain't Nothin' But a Number
This is a great story. I had quite the backlog of stories that I'm just catching up with. I really enjoyed this. It is interesting to read Pam and Jim in the future, trying to reconnect because they parted. It is nice to see them with all those kids. Nice story! :)
Date: June 04, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
I've been meaning to review this for a very long time. I really fell in love with this story. Your descriptions are great, and I love them rediscovering their youth within each other.
Also, his speech about pretending to strip furniture just so he could remember her smell just floored me. My breath literally caught in my chest, and I swear I teared up.
I apologize for taking so long to review. This is really wonderful.
Date: May 17, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Except it isn’t really a first kiss at all because the moment their lips meet, her skin is young and dewy again and all the gray has vanished from his hair. They aren’t standing in a mini mall alleyway, but in a dimly lit office building and they’re just Jim and Pam again. She’s not entirely sure how he’s built a time machine for the two of them with his kiss, but Pam is desperate for another chance to turn back the clock that she kisses him again.
That was amazing! As I'm reading it I can see the characters going from their 40's and like a scene in a movie changing into the Pam and Jim we know. Wow you are an awesome writer!
Date: May 17, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Ug! Please keep writing, I love this!
Date: May 17, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
definitely keep going!
Date: May 17, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
How is it that I get completely sucked into whatever AU you create for these two? I heart this story so much. As a mom of two little kids, I can totally relate to important moments happening in Chuck-e-Cheese and the like. Plus I just LOVED their hot steamy kisses in front of the mini-mall...*sigh* Real life. Awesome.
So, yeah, I would love more of this story!
Date: May 17, 2007 11:49 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
One more chapter! Give the people what they want :D
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2007 11:17 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!
THis is so great....
Date: May 17, 2007 11:15 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Aw, this story is so cute! I just read the whole thing and I really enjoyed all of it. I thought it was so funny that Pam's kids were so impressed by her invention of 'Flonkerton'...that's awesome. Great job with all of the chapters!
And, as far as continuing this part goes, I'd love to read more about Jim/Pam in this part of the story, but this ending is great also...So, I guess that wasn't much help on my part (lol).
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2007 11:09 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
Awww!! such a sweet chapter!!
This part made me lose it: “How is it that you’re more beautiful than I remember?” he asks softly.
plus that whole kissing part outside.
The end was so perfect, with Jim having remembered her birthday.
Date: May 17, 2007 11:03 am Title: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For
This is so sweet. Happy Birthday Pam!
Date: May 16, 2007 11:12 pm Title: Part 1- Age Really Ain't Nothin' But a Number
*Chants* Series! Series! Series!
Date: May 13, 2007 03:06 pm Title: Part 3- What Better Place than Adventure Zone?
If you keep writing this, I'll keep reading this. I just love it.
"You’re trying to date nostalgia and she doesn’t put out." Is that an expression? If you made that up, that's awesome. What a great line.
Their whole conversation about their lives and their loves (of each other and his of Karen) is just wonderful.
Seriously, if you are interested in continuing, please, please do. I mean, don't you think that this group could somehow form a family? (And that's the way they became the Halpert Bunch.)