10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2010 03:45 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG!!! All the fics I have read about Beach Games and finally FINALLY one that i written the way I would have loved for it to have gone! I seriously wondered if my thinking was SO off that not one other person felt like I did so please let me say a great big THANK YOU!!!!
Date: March 30, 2008 12:51 am Title: Chapter 3
cute..i wish this happened, karen sux....
Date: November 11, 2007 06:55 am Title: Chapter 2
gahhh! i loved it... jim seemed like a creeper in this chapter with whole pepper spray but nice idea i like where its going! =]
Date: October 20, 2007 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
loved this soooo much!
8 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Your first fan fic - I'm impressed! I truly enjoyed it and have no suggestions for improvement at all. Just like Almond Joy and Mounds - sometimes you feel like a nut, sometimes you don't. (Guess that is an old analogy, you've probably never heard of that commercial) but anyway - sometimes you want fast fluff and other times you want slower fluff. I just want JAM fluff any way I can get it! Hope to see something from you again soon!!
Date: May 15, 2007 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ahh that was definitely the most delicious post-Beach Games fic I've read. I'm sure it won't be that easy on the real show, but this was a delightful read to hold me over.
Date: May 15, 2007 08:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, great job! I agree with a previous comment about the pacing...and I only mention it because back after CN, my very first fics were really rushed. It was all "Oh, you love me? Great! Let's make out!" Hee. This actually doesn't feel like that- it feels like Jim and Pam and joy. Wonderful debut!
Date: May 15, 2007 06:38 am Title: Chapter 3
If it could only happen like that I would be so happy. But NBC won't let it. Darn
Date: May 15, 2007 06:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Welcome, welcome, to the Benevolent Order of Fluff Lovers. We're glad to have you with us. That was a great debut which I very much enjoyed. I don't have any complaints about that one but next time you might try to do one with a little slower pacing, maybe letting a little more drama seep in. But that was great fluffy goodness.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, and the suggestion. I guess after this loooong, frustrating season of JAM-drought, I didn't want to be patient anymore, so I had them dive right in. :)
Date: May 15, 2007 05:55 am Title: Chapter 3
I like your version of the aftermath of Beach Games...I'm glad you shared it!
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you read it!
Date: May 14, 2007 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay. Love it. Finally a fic that lets them be together right away. Again with a round of Yay's.
Author's Response: Thanks! It might not be realistic, but it's what I wanted to see happen. Just once. Heh.