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Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2007 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1

this was super hot, and managed to break my heart.

on a smaller note, (that im sure you passed over so quickly...) I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees Pam in simple underwear, like the kind that comes in packs of five.  as silly as it is, that made this story uber-awesome to me. :) 

Reviewer: I Know This Much Is True Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2007 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1

You are seriously, my favorite smutty writer on this site. My goodness! You are eons of awesome. :) Really, truly.

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2007 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

<cough>   Ahem.  

 Yes.   Very nice little tale.   <cough.>   Veeeeeerrrrrry niiiiiice.     <cough>   Hot, and yet still in character and on plot.   <cough>   

Did I say hot?   Cause, yeah.   

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2007 08:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap, that was hot. *wipes brow* And I loved that it really wasn't PWP, because the love bit at the end was just perfect. I can imagine this happening (and him having that realization) once he got home from the dojo. Great peek behind the scenes.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2007 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1

It's nice to see Jim lusting over Pam every once in a while. Mostly it Jim with moon eyes over Pam. Great job

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2007 05:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Love this part: "How can you be embarrassed about something that only you know about? Fucking grow up, Halpert!"  Gah! 

I hope your "Queen of the Universe" crown is comfortable, you're going to be wearing it a while...

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay, so you KNOW that i love this. (hi, you wrote it half for me.) BUT HOLY CRAP I'LL BET YOU DIDN'T KNOW JUST HOW MUCH I'D LOVE IT. seriously. just. dfkgjhkdjfhg. thank you.

Author's Response:

Why are you AWAKE WOMAN?!?!

Glad you liked it since, yes, half for you and all. ;)

 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  That was very nice. 

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