10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 01:18 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
OH HEY GUESS WHAT
YOU SINGLEHANDEDLY JUST MADE MY SHITTY DAY LIKE TEN TIMES BETTER
[SINGLEHANDEDLY. heeee handporn.]
Author's Response: VICTORY!!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 01:09 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
AND ONCE AGAIN SJGHFDKJFHGKJDFHGKDJFHG. AND THE VISUAL AID HELPED QUITE A LOT. AND AND AND THAT LAST LINE OH MANNNNNNNN.
Author's Response:
Visuals are important! And since Pam got awful friendly with fingers similar to that, I thought I'd just...
well, you know how it goes. Supply and demand, right? KEYMASHING FTW!
Date: May 24, 2007 12:32 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
OMGOMGOMG
Your visual aide made me laugh my ass off. God, I'm still laughing.
DAMN. Just, DAMN. PERFECT use of that photo. Seriously, I don't even know you, but I love you for that.
Anywho, back to the story. So freaking hot. Every chapter is unbelievable. And I love that its not just PWP. That there are emotions involved.
Favorite parts?
he wanted to file every part of this moment away because no one would ever be better than this, than her
and
“I love Roy,” it sounded like a question, but he kept it to himself. “Why do I not feel guilty?”
It just all feels so real, like it really could have happened this way. Very well done.
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 12:27 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
Okay, first, I should've learned my lesson with the previous chapters and NOT read this while at work. Second, your visual aide made me snort diet green tea out of my nose, so we're almost even for the coffee incident yesterday morning. ;) Third, DEAR SWEET JESUS, WOMAN. That was ridiculously hot. And...hot. And did I mention it was really hot?
Author's Response: We are now officially even. :D
Date: May 24, 2007 12:25 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
Gah. Hot and very real. Excellent.
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 12:18 pm Title: or has it ever come down to do or die
I think that's the first time I've ever read a story where Pam finishes off Jim when it comes to oral. Very nicely done ::golf clap::
I want to see where you're going to go with the next chapter because I think that you could successfully get away with ending it here (please don't though :) haha).
And yes. Visual aide. Yes please.
Date: May 24, 2007 11:31 am Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
dude, update NOW i need more!
Date: May 24, 2007 11:25 am Title: you need a strength most don't possess
WHOA. Dude, you get me like this EVERY TIME you write something! Too bad I'm at work... this is great, and very plotty, it's true! Can't wait to see what happens next!
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 10:05 am Title: you need a strength most don't possess
Marry me. We can have Office loving, smut-writing babies (even though I'm pretty sure that you're a girl, and I'm not sure how that would work with me being female as well...but I don't care, we can figure out the logistics afterwards, haha).
Seriously though...HOT. :) I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter throughout the afternoon, evening and night. This story is kick-tush awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 09:25 am Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
ksgkjsdfhaghd Kelly. You're killing me here. Pls to update again before I get home from work tonight (around 6-7pm EST, ftr) so I can be a happy Mare. :3333
Author's Response: For you? Yes. You know, since you're not feeling well. Keep an eye out. ;)
9 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2007 06:18 am Title: you need a strength most don't possess
Um...I need some alone time...
Wowza. That was just...damn. Have I told you how I love you for writing this? Because I do. And I'll totally put in a good word for you with Rashida. ;)
Date: May 24, 2007 06:03 am Title: you need a strength most don't possess
This is where I would write a review if I could think. But I can't, and I blame you. And the Sexaholics.
P.S. I like that you have written Jim as a 'guy-guy'. With needs.
Date: May 23, 2007 11:18 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
this is seriously awesome. way too often in fanfic when I get to scenes where characters are a) drinking or b) getting frisky...even in good fanfic...there is usually some kind of glaring inconsistency between the way the characters act/talk/think in the fic and what those characters would actually think/say/do in real life that it completely takes me out of the story. this is so...not that fic. Everything about this is so spot on and perfect. And I have to say I LOVE the way you write Jim (not only in this fic, but in your others as well). He's got that sensitivity that sets him apart, but he's also got that guy sex drive, but then at the same time...the way you write him (also the way I think the writers on the show write him) is that neither of those things are the stereotypical guy sensitivity or guy sex drive. This is just...I could keep going on, but I won't. Maybe next chapter. This is excellent though.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 11:08 pm Title: you need a strength most don't possess
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Date: May 23, 2007 10:57 pm Title: you need a strength most don't possess
Hi, I love you. This is the hottest thing maybe ever AND THEY HAVEN'T EVEN DONE IT YETTTT. OMG. MORE PLEAASSEEE.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 10:40 pm Title: you need a strength most don't possess
Whaaaaaaaaat? Oh, man. How could you leave it like that? Dammit. You must update immediately, or I will pass away from the torturous wait.
Date: May 23, 2007 10:33 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
Okay, this is so fabulous. Seriously. And so realistic. I have totally been in this kind of hazy after-party cuddling-with-someone-you-want-so-bad kind of moment. I mean, not in years, but I could still picture it. :)
Date: May 23, 2007 09:49 pm Title: you need a strength most don't possess
You already know what I think of this fic. >> :D
More plz? Yesss.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 09:42 pm Title: you need a strength most don't possess
holy....tease! update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 04:09 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
Wowwwwwwwwwwwww.
You deserve all the Stanley nickels.
Date: May 23, 2007 03:58 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
Ok I want more of this soon. It sounds very promising already.;)
Date: May 23, 2007 02:30 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
OMGGGG. Ditto to what Emily saidddd. LKAJFljkfas. Epic smut is exactly what's been missing from my life.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 01:25 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
sdfkhkjgfhkdjhgkjdfhg. MOAR NOW PLS. KAY. in other words, hi, this was way too hot and well. would it be crass to say that i need resolution as badly as pam does? SCREW IT, I'LL BE CRASS. because it's true.
9 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2007 01:12 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
HOLY SHIT, KELLY. I should not have followed that link til I was...not at work. More soon, plz! You are AMAZING. And that was just...GUH. Double GUH.
Date: May 23, 2007 12:18 pm Title: have you ever had the odds stacked up so high
Holy crap, that was hot. Pre-casino night J/P smut is a special kink of mine, so this is right up my alley. He could smell her on his hand and had to cross his legs immediately. OMG, that killed me. *deep breaths*
Plus drink recipes! Woot!
More, more, more!