Date: August 18, 2006 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
I'm now totally convinced that you're trying to kill me. These are so addictive - please keep it up...can't go too long without another fix. Thanks!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
I LOVED this chapter!!! Oh! My! God! Perfect.
9 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 12: "Email Surveillance: Part II"
Wow. That was just so intense. Very very good but I actually think I held my breath through most of that last part..
Date: August 18, 2006 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
Yeah, um, part 2 please? Hurry!
Date: August 18, 2006 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Email Surveillance: part 1"
Go for it JIM!
Date: August 18, 2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 11: "Email Surveillance: part 1"
Haha! Oh man, do I want it too. And I'll just bet Pam does as well, as much as she tries to deny it. I'm so excited for the second part! This is too awesome for words so far. This whole scenario is delicious.
Date: August 18, 2006 09:43 am Title: Chapter 10: "Booze Cruise"
While I read this I was listening to "Summer in the City" by Regina Spektor, and that song combined with this made me just fall apart. The loneliness and sadness was just so thick in this chapter. Simply beautiful, once again.
9 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2006 08:50 am Title: Chapter 10: "Booze Cruise"
I love that Jim did the right thing, but this was such a sad installment.
Date: August 18, 2006 08:41 am Title: Chapter 10: "Booze Cruise"
oh wow. this one just hurt. loved it though...poor poor jim.
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2006 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
This one might be my favorite chapter yet, but I think I've said that about every chapter so far. Take it as you will.
Date: August 17, 2006 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
Loved this! What is it about drunk-Pam that makes her come on to Jim! Oh right, lack of inhibition, fueled by alcohol...no wonder she lets her guard down. And Jim, always the gentleman, even when wasted.
Date: August 17, 2006 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
That was just a wonderful combinaton of humor and romance. I loved it.
Date: August 17, 2006 11:22 am Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
This chapter was a lot of fun. Aggressive drunk Pam is always a hoot! (And of course, I wanted them to take that cab home for a "last fling"!!!)
Date: August 17, 2006 06:59 am Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
Steamy and silly. This chapter was a lot of fun!
Date: August 17, 2006 06:38 am Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
Wow. You are soooo good at doing their dialogue - the scene in the bar was masterfully done. I could vividly hear them and see them. Funny and touching too.
Love the conceit of having Pam see Jim through another woman's eyes too - I actually have a story started that sort of goes there as well (though in an extremely different way/context) so this was especially inspiring! More!!!
Date: August 17, 2006 06:01 am Title: Chapter 9: "The Christmas Party"
How can it be so hot and heartbreaking at the same time? You're amazing. This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far. Just, perfect.
Author's Response: You know, you are just THE BEST about giving me feedback - and so fast! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :o)
Date: August 15, 2006 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 8: "The Fight"
I think your interpretation was plausible. I especially liked the line about it being hard to be them. It's good that Pam sees it.
Date: August 15, 2006 08:02 am Title: Chapter 8: "The Fight"
The things they try to say to each other so clumsily... It did feel like the kind of moment they would indeed be having to smooth over what happened at the dojo. Well done! :)
Date: August 15, 2006 06:20 am Title: Chapter 8: "The Fight"
Stopped by here to see if there was anything to help me procrastinate from work and stumbled on this...and now I feel like I'm in a trance, so forget working...
Just exquisite. You really capture the Jimness of Jim. And I love what Pam says about how hard it is '..being us, I guess.' Please make many more of these!
Date: August 15, 2006 05:01 am Title: Chapter 8: "The Fight"
I can't even fully express how much I love your writing. It's really just perfect. This chapter was amazing. I love the small details, like her opening up because she can't stand for him to feel guilty. You really know all of the intricacies of their relationship. Absolutely fantastic. More, please. =]
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 12:46 am Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Love cryptic Mrs. Beasley.
Date: August 14, 2006 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 6: "The Dundees"
such a delicious dance they do, isn't it?
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
I love that you've captured that nervous, passionate energy between two people that are so attracted to each other. And yeah, I've definitely had that moment where you want someone to kiss you and it almost happens but you freak out and pull away. So well described here !!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: "Sexual Harassment"
Awesome. So now, in my own "Office world", this conversation TOTALLY happened! I've always said Pam's mom knows and I love that you have her encouraging him, indirectly.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2006 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: "The Dundees"
God, I've had those nights. In other words, you hit the nail on the head.