Date: December 10, 2007 03:23 pm Title: No One But You
its different, but I like it. I really liked Toby's little crush on Pam, and if I wasn't so diehard Jim/Pam, I would totally be all Toby/Pam. He is so sweet and he just really likes her.
Date: May 28, 2007 04:10 am Title: No One But You
Aw, this is sad, but sweet. Both of them connecting based on how alone they are. Nicely done!
Date: May 26, 2007 08:04 am Title: No One But You
The second-person writing made me wonder a few times who was talking, but other than that I thought it was really sweet. Just a tiny little glimpse without being overt--or even kind of creepy, like it could be with Toby...he has such a strange demeanor around Pam sometimes, because of the crush. It almost...squicks me out a little. So I really liked this fic because it's so short and sweet and simple. :)
Date: May 25, 2007 09:38 pm Title: No One But You
Aww, I think this is lovely. It's sweet to see this little friendship and that they have someone to talk to a little bit each day.
I thought you really had the voices down; I can just hear Pam saying "a little lonely".
Remember Pam talking Toby about his marathon? She was so interested and supportive. This story really fits.
Date: May 25, 2007 08:42 pm Title: No One But You
Aw. I needed this. Especially this: I can almost forgive Susan for what she did when I look at you...because no one deserves to be unhappy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2007 06:50 pm Title: No One But You
Awww...that was sweet. Really sweet. It's nice to see Pam through Toby's eyes - it's refreshing. I'd also like to know more about Toby because he seems like he's just a really good person, you know?
Also - love 30 Rock so I totally saw that reference - too funny. Don't forget about falling in the tub either ;)
Date: May 25, 2007 05:09 pm Title: No One But You
Aw....I never thought about it before, but their lonliness really was a shared bond with Pam and Toby, wasn't it?
Great job. Very true to character.