Date: June 08, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Bread Aisle
I love your title - how perfectly fitting! Poor Katy. Getting her hopes up for NewJim only to have them shattered with the baby, and then even better, with Pam! I loved this, can't wait to read more.
Date: June 08, 2007 11:55 am Title: Bread Aisle
I'm so glad someone else uses the word assholiness. It's like a mixture of Pope and ass.
Date: June 08, 2007 10:00 am Title: Bread Aisle
Cute story! I was working on one like it. Only got 4 of the 5 posted. Jim ran into people from work in mine. :)
Author's Response:
I seriously just read your story after posting this second chapter and dude... I was in awe of the same wavelength we are on!!
In no way did I read your story before I wrote this last chapter.
And yet... we are *likethis* about what Roy says.
I almost feel like editing mine... lol. hope you're okay with the similarities. It was not done with prior knowledge!
Date: June 08, 2007 08:53 am Title: Bread Aisle
Gah! Apparently, my computer didn't like this story as much as I did. It kept freezing as I tried to review it.
Anyways, this was really great... I loved hearing Katy's thoughts on the relationship and new Jim, and how she thought she had a chance. And then, realizing she didn't!
So, this is a WiP, and more people are going to be having meetings in SuperWalMart? Awesomeness.
Date: June 08, 2007 08:25 am Title: Bread Aisle
Wow. That was awesome. Can't wait to read more. I assume we'll see Karen, but who else? I'm looking forward to it!
Date: June 08, 2007 08:00 am Title: Bread Aisle
I think Katy needs to run into Roy at Walmart next time. ;)
Date: June 08, 2007 07:10 am Title: Bread Aisle
Ah too cute! The little family with Pam wearing Jim's shirt and the awkwardness for Katy! I love it! More, please? :) Great job!
Date: June 08, 2007 06:30 am Title: Bread Aisle
More please! Right now. I mean immediately. :) This was so sweet and just adorable. I love fics where Jim and Pam are a happy little family.
Date: June 08, 2007 06:23 am Title: Bread Aisle
aw sweet! i loved it! i bet karen is next. i i hope johnaton pukes on her.
Date: June 08, 2007 06:16 am Title: Bread Aisle
great story! i think i was as surprised as katy when jonathan was revealed...love that jim & pam didn't waste any time