Date: June 17, 2007 05:59 am Title: Showdown
I have to say that I sincerely hope that nobody ever tries to make your life difficult. From this story, your vengeance would be swift, brutal, and devastatingly efficient. So well done.
Date: June 16, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Showdown
This is just the right touch of nastiness. So awesome. I LOVE LOVE LOVED the Lonny/Darryl scene and Karen & Dwight. And AndyKelly. WOO! I just loved the whole thing. Sequel, please?
Date: June 16, 2007 04:36 am Title: Showdown
*BOOM* The paramedics kick in Mose's front door. He's slumped over in his chair.
"Quick" one of them yells, "Get some oxygen! I'm starting compressions!"
"V-tac!!" the other yells, handing the paddles over. "Charge 250...CLEAR!!"
zzzzzap! "Anything?"
"No! charge 300... CLEAR!!"
zzzzzzap! "Check it again."
"Nothing...he's gone... flatline..."
"What is this on his computer? Looks like some kind of story."
"Let's read it."
*few moments later*
BAHAHAAAHAHA!!!
*thump.....thump* <------sound of both paramedics hitting the floor after dying of laughter as well.
See what you've done here? :)
Author's Response: This has to be the most creative review ever written on this site, and I'm honored that one of my stories was on the receiving end of it. Thanks a lot!
Date: June 16, 2007 02:35 am Title: Showdown
So....Pam isn't really fired???
9 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 06:32 am Title: The New Order
I love all of this. Just when you think Ryan's day won't get any worse, it does. And in such a fantastically calculated way, too. Nice work.
8 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 08:48 pm Title: The New Order
Michael having Jan listening in on speakerphone was brilliant. And a dildo glued to the hood ornament was hilarious! What goes around really does come around.
Date: June 14, 2007 06:52 pm Title: The New Order
BAHAHA!! you're killing me over here, Night Swept!! Do you hear me?? They're going to find me asphyxiated from laughing to death in my chair, my lap top still open to this story... :) I hope you can live with that.
Author's Response: This has to be the coolest thing anyone has ever written about a story of mine. Thanks a bunch.
9 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2007 06:17 pm Title: The New Order
How many more ways can Ryan eat it? I can't wait to find out.
Date: June 14, 2007 06:54 am Title: The Office
I'm not a big fan of the "Karen is devastated by the breakup with Jim" theory, mostly because I really think she'll be relieved to be rid of his emo slackerness. However, Kelly could conceivably go completely ballistic on Ryan, and I am loving what you are doing with her campaign of revenge. The bit with Stanley is perfect, and now you have me hoping that Canon Kelly does something similar.
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 08:50 pm Title: The Office
This is going to be good. I love seeing a cocky ass get humbled. I also like how my girl Karen is done taking crap from Jim, Ryan, and Dunder Mifflin too. I'm assuming its only going to get worse since he hasn't even made it to Kelly yet. Keep this one rolling!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:03 pm Title: The Office
I sure love to see Ryan eat it.
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 07:02 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
Ryan certainly deserves some crap for that stupid e-mail.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:53 pm Title: The Office
Wow, they don't teach you how to run like hell, and they don't teach you how to operate a toaster oven. It seems the only thing they do teach you in B-school is how to leapfrog over other employees who will make your life a living hell. Niiice.
Good chapter. The Karen-Dwight alliance against Jim and Pam is a nice touch.
At first, with Stanley, I thought, what the heck? But Kelly telling Stanley that Ryan yelled out Melissa's name? WOW! Dawesome.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:52 pm Title: The Office
I loved the way you have everyone in the office ready to kill Ryan. I'm sad for Jim and Pam, but thats just me and my love for Jim/Pam happily ever after stories. :) I definitely can't wait to see where this goes. :)
Author's Response: Jim and Pam are going to be just fine -- they're just going to have to work a lot harder in their prank war now that Dwight has re-armed!
Date: June 13, 2007 06:47 pm Title: The Office
I love the idea of Karen & Dwight in a real secret alliance... and Kelly also filtering some of that hate through the office as well. It looks like Ryan is in for some fresh hell from DM Scranton.
When Stanley grabbed Ryan by the neck I seriously laughed out loud. Great work!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:46 pm Title: The Office
I really like the Dwight-Karen pranking team and I think you should consider making that a separate story. If only Ryan would stop being a cocky a$$, I might start to feel sorry for him for the multi-phase attack he appears to be under. I think you are writing him very well. Please continue.
Date: June 13, 2007 06:37 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
You know what else is best served cold? Yeah. Gazpacho. (Sorry.)
Excellent! Karen kind of wiped up the floor with Ryan, didn't she? I would never have thought of using the email against him. Wow!
Who's up at bat next? This is looking so good (well, not for Ryan, but for us!)
Date: June 13, 2007 06:36 pm Title: The Office
Y'know...I had been kicking around writing a "Ryan as boss" story, but I've since given up. This is just too good!!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 06:11 pm Title: The Office
Karen taking the guest chair out of Michael's office was hysterical! And her teaming up with Dwight as payback for Jim and Pam seemed very spot on.
Author's Response: I am so glad you commented on the chair. I love the sheer, unabashed pettiness of that gesture.
7 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 09:32 am Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
woah. someone seriously has some resentment towards ryan, and it's not necessarily any of the show's characters. :) I want to feel bad for him, but you just won't let me!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 05:54 am Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
Um can you say, FALLGUY! Wow, awesome Karen in this one. I can only imagine that Ryan's day gets much, much worse.
Date: June 12, 2007 08:20 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
hehehe give the temp what he got coming ot him!
Date: June 12, 2007 07:34 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
Well, I already knew ahead of time where you were going with this. Let's see if you can live up to expectations and crush poor Ryan mercilessly and repeatedly. Good fun.
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 07:31 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
BAHAHAHAAA!!! <---an amalgamation of various snorts, snickers, and outright guffaws all packed into one nonsensical word.
I can't believe I'm about to write this next sentence, but... I LOVE KAREN!! That was perhaps the coolest thing I've seen all day long. Ah, if only she'd acted more like that on the show, I would have been a little more sympathetic towards her. But probably not. :) I will definitely be following this one...
Date: June 12, 2007 07:19 pm Title: The Parking Lot and the Elevator
This story is fun! I cannot wait for the next chapter!