10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 07:28 pm Title: sunday matinee
It will be hard for me to form a coherent thought so I'll just say. WOW. Hot.
Date: June 16, 2007 07:25 pm Title: sunday matinee
Guh.
Please make this a series. Please.
Date: June 16, 2007 07:14 pm Title: sunday matinee
YAY!!! You used my idea!
I suggested this to you because it actually happened to me, and it was quite an experience...and you made it into an awesome story!!! The perv goddess strikes again.
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 07:06 pm Title: sunday matinee
Wow...that's truly about the ONLY way a Nicolas Cage movie would be good! GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Date: June 16, 2007 06:51 pm Title: sunday matinee
Whoa! Good post-it idea!
9 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 06:46 pm Title: sunday matinee
I love you. For so many reasons. *sniff* Most of all, for adding another chapter. I can not get enough smut lately and this...lovely. :D
I can't wait for you to write more. Then again, I always look forward to your updates.
Date: June 16, 2007 06:46 pm Title: sunday matinee
Um. Fucking. Fuck.
That was--white hot.
More please.
10 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 06:42 pm Title: sunday matinee
hi.
um.
... hi.
so uhhhhhh. yeah. hi.
Author's Response: why hello.
Date: June 16, 2007 06:41 pm Title: sunday matinee
I am on the floor dead. And the floor is very sticky. Eww.
Date: June 16, 2007 06:41 pm Title: sunday matinee
Wow! You are too good at this writing stuff. I cannot even write a coherent review right now. You know, though, I always thought Jim would like animated movies.
Date: June 16, 2007 06:30 pm Title: holding lightly
Ah! Ah!
...ok. Now I'm going to read it and then review it coherently (if possible).
Author's Response: well, you said that I owed you, so... ;)
Date: June 16, 2007 05:59 pm Title: holding lightly
This was incredibly hot and wonderful and I completely vote for it to be made into a series. I love seeing bold!Pam.
8 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2007 05:47 pm Title: holding lightly
This is a great beginning! I must agree that Pam's request is a fairly tame one, but if you're going to make this a series, that might be for the best. I mean, you have to build to something, don't you? This leaves plenty of room for escalation. My suggestion for an upcoming Post-it would be "Would you pretend to pick me up at a night club?" That's always fun.
Date: June 16, 2007 01:00 am Title: holding lightly
This smutcake was the most delicious smutcakes of all the smutcakes. <Roy>
Date: June 15, 2007 09:14 pm Title: holding lightly
Wowza! I'm going to save all of your stories, and then after I've been married for a long time and the sex is boring I'm going to read them again. Who knows how many marriages you have/could save.
I love that you make Pam loud, dirty, and kind of kinky, because there's no way she's this mousy timid thing in bed. No way.
Date: June 15, 2007 08:19 pm Title: holding lightly
Heh, another old married lady signing in. BUT, I do remember, when I had just started, y'know, doin' it, I thought that was something I would never do.
Aaaanyways. This was delish -- your pacing and descriptions were sexy and terrific. And I could see both of them being a little shy about asking for what they want.
How about:
I want... to do it in the car.
I want... to do it in a semi-public place.
I want... to tie you up.
Date: June 15, 2007 06:36 pm Title: holding lightly
Ok, "smutcake" is now officially my new favorite word. :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 03:33 pm Title: holding lightly
This was so deliciously hot and sexy that it's going straight into my favorites. It's not passing go and it is not collecting $200. Wow. Best use of Post-it notes ever!!
Date: June 15, 2007 12:45 pm Title: holding lightly
Well, speaking as another voice from the old married lady front, I didn't think it was uh, out there either, but I did think it was hot as a very hot thing. And then some. I just figured they hadn't quite gotten around to it yet - maybe it was something Roy had made her think was kinky? In any case, Jim seemed game. And had game. Left me satisfied and smiling.
Date: June 15, 2007 11:51 am Title: holding lightly
Wow.
Yeah...that's all I got for you.
Wow.
Date: June 15, 2007 11:33 am Title: holding lightly
"Would you..."
Wow. Just. Wow.
*blinks* That. was. awesome.
Date: June 15, 2007 11:31 am Title: holding lightly
Hmm, I'll have to third what TLK wrote.
And a smutcake is exactly the kind of cake I want for my birthday. It sounds tastylicious.
Date: June 15, 2007 11:22 am Title: holding lightly
Um, and a third review to concur with Too Late Kev. We old married ladies are kinkier than we think, I guess.
Author's Response: Hmm, I think some of us could probably give you a run for your money. ;)
Date: June 15, 2007 11:21 am Title: holding lightly
Reviewing again to let you know that this:
The post-its start popping up all over: His toothpaste, the silverware drawer, his pocket, covering the odometer on his dash.
Seems to me to command an entire series of stories, each installment covering one of these post-its.
Date: June 15, 2007 11:12 am Title: holding lightly
I wouldn't think what she asked for was really out of the ordinary, was it? Of course, I'm an old married lady, so I guess I'm clueless. Although I do recall way back when I wasn't, and that doesn't seem real risque (sp?) for an established relationship.
I certainly enjoyed it, in any case! I really liked the thing about the Post-Its. And so nice of Jim to be accommodating (grin). I hope she hides the Post-Its really well at work though. Can you imagine Kevin finding one of those? The Kevin giggles would go on for weeks!!
There's one place it says 'write', where I'm pretty sure you mean 'writhe'. I mean, there's times where you just don't need to take notes, even if you're a receptionist, right?
Thanks for the lovely smut.
Author's Response:
No, not risque. Probably not even out of the ordinary. But, just, like, if I hypothetically knew of a guy that was kind of... too embarrassed to want to do that? I could see how one would be hesitant to ask again. It's one thing to be "outgoing" in the bedroom, it's another to be made to feel like you're kind of dirty for it. :(
I MEAN!!! I fixed the spelling, thanks. (I should probably just get a regular beta, but I'm too impatient
Author's Response:
Also, it's possible I was still channeling Vanilla, Tool!Jim from "it isn't wrong but still it isn't right" Maybe she just thought he'd get all weirded out and say no and go back to his life of missionary. Or something. lol