Date: June 24, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Jackpot (sherlockelly)
best smut EVAR.
Date: June 24, 2007 03:19 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
........
I am so ridiculously incoherent right now. Wow. Just...wow.
Is it sad after reading the hot I still squeed at the last line? -facepalm- Lulz.
10 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 02:35 pm Title: Jackpot (sherlockelly)
*thud*
That is the sound of me dying. I'm dead. Game over!
You (both of you) are my hero. :D You write the prettiest (I don't think that's the right word) smut of all the smut.
Date: June 21, 2007 10:13 am Title: Movie Night (beruco)
Ahhhhhh! Please finish this soon!
Date: June 21, 2007 08:39 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
*thud*
I'm dead. In a good way.
Date: June 21, 2007 02:45 am Title: Movie Night (beruco)
Whew! (Fans self). That was HOT. You gals rock; I mean, really, whatta collaboration, you're smooth like Santana and Rob Thomas, no less. Can't wait for the final chapter;-)
Date: June 20, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Hoooly crap.
Again.
Jeeez, you guys. Just...lkjlkgjlkjgljkfd ngh. ngggh.
Date: June 20, 2007 11:22 pm Title: Movie Night (beruco)
Hot. Hot. Hot. *sings*
I like the junior year story.. de-ja-vu? Hahahahahahahaha
You (and your partner in smut crime) are amazing.
=D
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Movie Night (beruco)
GAH! And my boyfriend is in Boston!!!! *cries*
Words cannot describe how much I love this story and how freaking hot it is!
However, fists pounding on the keyboard can...perejfj;awa;dsfjksadf;as;dlkjfqopwuier;vjnvnaiopu
I can't wait for the last chapter. :D
Date: June 20, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Movie Night (beruco)
Yes! I love it. I loved the added Pam-ness of it all, I was starting to worry about her with her unexplained pervy thoughts...tee hee. God I love this story. I was honored to be able to help out :)
Date: June 20, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Movie Night (beruco)
Ha! What a great last line! You guys are really doing a good job with this. Wow, who could predict what might happen in the next chapter? Hmmm...I think it's gonna be zoppity.
beruco and sherlockelly, I see your blood. It's red, just like mine.
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Movie Night (beruco)
kj;fagadlhfg the last line = winnings for all. s;lkgahlkghaslkgh slka;hdgh
Date: June 20, 2007 05:19 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NEW CHAPTER.
Date: June 19, 2007 09:53 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
I need a cigarette! And I gave up smoking!
Date: June 19, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
How, exactly, do you guys do well-written, tasteful-yet-COMPLETELY DIRTY fic so well? I have no idea, but, jesus, please, more. If you could just do this for the rest of your lives, um... that would be okay with me. Probably not my boss, but... definitely my husband. Wow.
Date: June 19, 2007 11:42 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
My favorite Office smut ever? Quite possibly. I can't tell you how pleasantly surprised I was by the type of smut, to boot.
And as everyone has said, your characterization ring completely true. There is nothing finer than hot sexing and well-developed characters.
8 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 10:53 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
HI. UM. WOWEE WEEWA, KELLY.
That? Was fucking amazing. I cannot wait for more.
Date: June 19, 2007 06:02 am Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
The reason you may not be getting all the reserves you two deserve is probably the fact that none of us readers are able to speak in coherent sentences for the next hour or so. I spoke gobbledegook only ten minutes after reading this [to my mother, no less, good God], so I learnt my lesson. the hard way. hee.
the characterisation [especially in the first chapter, of course] was freaking perfect, and - seriously, that was easily one of the most hottest things I have ever read. ever. ever. ever. ever.
ever.
Date: June 19, 2007 05:21 am Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
I would bang the keyboard incoherently, but I feel that's probably been done. So, I'll just quote Pam:
“That? Was fucking amazing,”
Oh, and when we were saying that in some ways, Pam would have more sexual experience than Jim? This is one of the things I was thinking about. I mean, Jim would totally be too freaked to ask a girl to do.....well, anything ass related. And, Roy? Well, I bet he also has a copy of Grand Theft Anal, except he didn't keep it in a Tupperware container under the bed, he probably left it out on the shelf next to Pam's copy of the Princess Bride.
Author's Response:
Yes! This is totally something that Roy was probably completely open out! "Here is my girlfriend, here is our porn," because it was totally THEIR porn.
Date: June 18, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
Way to rock the shocker, Jim!! I totally said that last chap juteux....hehe
Since my last review had a sex anecdote, I must do the same for this one. That pic of JKras and Will Arnet rockin shockers is my LJ icon along with the words "fuck me please" my boyfriend was like "what the hell? you don't even want me to do that." and I was like, "You're not john krasinski..." yeah...I was in a little trouble that night...haha.
god I love this story.
Date: June 18, 2007 11:21 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
You guys are doing such a good job writing this; just awesome. Love how FNB is making Jim feel at ease with trying something new with her; their deep emotional intimacy allows them to explore boundaries of physical intimacy too.
Looking foward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
I tell you.. there's something about Pam and the f-word. Maybe something about the anal, too. But, damn. ashdkgsdlghdg
Date: June 18, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
Yeah, um, this is pretty good stuff. I don't know what else to say.
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Go Fish (sherlockelly)
Way to rock the shocker, Jim!!
Date: June 18, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Con el Dedo (beruco)
Oh so hot. Deliciously so. I love the image of Jim in a sombrero, greeting Pam when she enters the kitchen as "senorita" and saying "graciass" in response to her teasing him-- it's just the way they'd be together.
I think this also really works because Pam is a sex goddess! But really -- I think since she found Jim's stash and got an idea that he might be into this, she wasn't really surprised by his roving... uhhhh... bits and it was perfectly in character that she wouldn't just bring it up to him as something to try, she'd just be passive -- exactly as you had her!
Anyway, all this to say -- not only is this really really REALLY hot, but it's very much in character and I'm really looking forward to the next part! Please put me out of my misery soon.