Date: October 28, 2007 06:21 pm Title: All in Good Time
hahaa, i am the 100th reviewer on my all time favorite fan fic story (: i honestly love this one, it's amazing and so well-written !
i'm jealous.
Date: July 02, 2007 12:05 pm Title: All in Good Time
Oh thank god! Despite his objections a Dunder Miflin proposal was perfect. That's where their lives together truly began! Love the old guy at the jewelry store telling Jim to get over himself. And the conversation where Jim finally revealed all his attempts to Pam was so wonderfully them.
Author's Response:
I should probably put it somewhere in the chapter notes, but I always pictured the old guy in the jewelry store as Morgan Freeman. Maybe it's all the recent Evan Almighty hype. ;-)
I'm so happy you think it worked out well in the end. :-)
Date: July 02, 2007 11:00 am Title: New Year's Eve
Oh man. Harsh. But really, Jim, you're trying too hard. Pam is a simple girl and needs a simple engagement. I love that you're stringing him along like this! I hope he learns his lesson! And nice job developing the Halpert/Wallace relationship, too.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think Wallace is my new favourite character - I hope we see more of him in s4.
Date: June 29, 2007 11:32 am Title: Lighting of the Christmas Trees
Oh my god that was awesome! The trees went up in flames! Hilarious. Boy Jim, how long is it going to take you to realize that you need to stop planning the perfect proposal and just go with your gut? Shoulda done it in the alley. Heh.
Author's Response:
how long is it going to take you to realize that you need to stop planning the perfect proposal and just go with your gut?
hahaha - you are on to me, belsum! It will take approximately two more chapters. :-) So glad you are enjoying it.
Date: June 29, 2007 10:48 am Title: Autumn DM Employee Appreciation Night
Hee! Thwarted by Pam's randiness. Now that's one that I did not expect! I sure hope Jim tells Pam about all his failed attempts when he manages to finally get it right.
Author's Response:
yes, I thought it was a nice touch that Pam's lust for Jim got the better of her (and the proposal!) - I mean, he's hauling pumpkins around the farm for her, the least she can do is show her appreciation!
Thanks for reading, belsum!
Date: June 26, 2007 11:16 pm Title: All in Good Time
Oh, these were so lovely. I was dying when Jim couldn't find his shaving kit and the actual proposal was perfect. Yay, you!
Author's Response:
yay - a time when dying is a good thing! I'm glad I was able to convey Jim's (near) breakdown when he realizes what she's done. At least all the drama was worth it for him in the end, yes?
Thanks for reading, Paper Jam!! (and I agree with the current chatter on TWOP - we need more of your stories!!)
Date: June 26, 2007 10:47 pm Title: All in Good Time
oh INDEED the perfect time. Moxie how BEAUTIFUL was this!!! Ugh, suddenly I want it to be winter! lol. What a magical setting for them to finally get engaged in. THEIR parking lot of doom, turned into a winter wonderland....Pam catching snowflakes on her tongue. I could just SEE the entire moment played out. This was such a fun story! Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Yay - I'm so glad you thought the payoff was worth the 4 chapters of torture... :-) And I SOOO want to see this played out on tv - say maybe the end of season 6? or 8?
Date: June 26, 2007 10:32 pm Title: New Year's Eve
UGH!!!!!!!!! Damn it Pam,would you please let the boy shave if he wants! lol. Oh man I'm getting frustrated FOR him!!!! Ok....but here it comes right? Yay...
Author's Response:
haha - I know! The one time Pam decides to do something a little unlike herself, and the consequences are disasterous!
Lucky he loves her so much, hmm? :-)
Date: June 26, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Lighting of the Christmas Trees
OMG, poor JIM!!! I'm feeling so bad for this guy! Now freaking electricity is against him! Oy....ok, moving on to the next chapter. Sometimes it pays off to miss a day around here, because you're rewarded with multiple chapters! Yay!!!
Author's Response: Jim seems to be the modern day Job (as opposed to Gob from AD!) in this story, but it just proves that he really does want to marry her, right?? Thanks for reviewing, LoveFool!
Date: June 26, 2007 09:49 pm Title: All in Good Time
Yayyy! He finally did it! Awesome chapter! I love that he told her everything...so sweet. And I was squeeling like a little fan girl during the whole snow/proposal scene. Loved it!!
Author's Response: Awesome - fan girl squees are the best reviews ever!!! Thanks for reading, bealsa!
Date: June 26, 2007 08:09 pm Title: All in Good Time
Aw, so sweet! I admit, I was about as frustrated as Jim during #4 - it was such a well planned, extravagant event and then Pam went and ruined it! Such a waste of David Wallace's connections and money ;) But you redeemed the situation in the end. That was a wonderful moment.
Author's Response: Yes, I have this image in my mind of Jim ducking Wallace's calls for the first couple of days, then sending an apologetic email to which Wallace calls and teases him. No doubt one of the first people to find out it finally happened will be him. (No, I know this isn't reality. Honestly.) ;-) Thanks for the review, Semby!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 01:29 pm Title: All in Good Time
What a nice, sweet ending. You did this perfectly. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, larry - I appreciate the comments!!
Date: June 26, 2007 08:52 am Title: All in Good Time
well moxie, you've done it again. this was such a charming, cute, funny story :P
Author's Response: More importantly, Jim's finally done it! So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 08:31 am Title: All in Good Time
PERFECT. you know, because it actually wasn't. took the guy long enough to figure it out! loved, loved loved loved LOVED it!!!!
Author's Response: You've encapsulated my moral perfectly!! So so so so so glad you liked it! (and happy early birthday!!)
Date: June 26, 2007 06:14 am Title: All in Good Time
*Happy, happy sigh* This is so pretty. So perfect. So funny, too (and I was glad Pam was properly mortified and apologetic about messing with his stuff). So romantic, so simple, and so them. (And so "you"- because you always manage to capture all of that about them).
Author's Response: awww...you're the best, nqllisi! (and you've got blue ribbons to prove it!!) Yes, I have to admit I was thinking about your comments when I had Jim confess to the 4 proposal mishaps. Maybe because it was the most recent one, but he still thinks she's deserves a spanking for messing with his stuff. But I guess that's the plot of a different type of fanfic altogether! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2007 05:48 am Title: All in Good Time
What a great story! I love that while his first 4 attempts were elaborate and outlandish, the one that stuck was quiet, low-key, private and just lovely. Way to make something nice happen in the parking lot too, very appropriate. Awesome ring too.
Author's Response: ....and thanks for the great review!! :-)
Date: June 26, 2007 04:10 am Title: All in Good Time
Way to break the curse Ms. Moxie. Well done you!!
Proposing!Jim is uber sweet - just like I like him. :) Thank you so much for giving us such a lovely glimpse of what might be.
Author's Response: Thank you - I should feel more guilty for stringing Jim along like that, but I don't. :-) It made the actual event even sweeter, I think. (not that he's not a dork!) Thanks for all the cheerleading you do!
Date: June 26, 2007 01:27 am Title: All in Good Time
YAY!!!!! He finally told her, and he finally did it!
(That ring is freaking amazing, btw. Now I totally want one just like it. lol)
This was adorable, and had such a great ending. I loved it. :)
Author's Response: yeah, I imagine he probably was saying "Finally!!!" in his head about a million times that night... So glad you liked the story! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review.
Date: June 25, 2007 11:06 pm Title: All in Good Time
I was really saddened by Jim's attempts... as he continued to fail, I just got sadder and sadder for him. I love how you had so much hope and happiness but with a bit of frustration.
And the end made all the frustration worth it. Nice work!
Author's Response: Sorry there was so much happening against Jim - but at least he did figure it all out in the end. :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!!
Date: June 25, 2007 10:51 pm Title: All in Good Time
What a beautiful proposal!! I'm crying. Seriously! You did a wonderful job of capturing the scene. I felt like I was standing in the middle of the parking lot right with Jim and Pam! Ahhh!!!!
Author's Response: *hands missmargaret a tissue* Aww...thanks so much!!
9 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 09:54 pm Title: All in Good Time
BIG SIGH
That was lovely.
Author's Response: *bigger sigh* Thanks, jinx!! :-)
Date: June 25, 2007 09:51 pm Title: All in Good Time
Aww he finally got to doit!!! I'm so sad to see this story go, Jim's failed attempts at a proposal have been heartbreaking and hilarious at the same time...but I have to say I think that bringing it all back to the parking lot when they're just being Jim and Pam was the best way to do it...awesome story!
Author's Response: thank you!! Now to just see this on the show - maybe sometime in season 8? ;-)
Date: June 25, 2007 09:24 pm Title: All in Good Time
Awe. That was just so sweet. Proposing in the snow! Yes, I will marry you, Jim Halpert. ;)
Author's Response:
She did almost forget to say that part - but can you blame her? It's 85 degrees here right now, but all I can think of is snow...
Thanks for the review!
Date: June 25, 2007 08:49 pm Title: All in Good Time
another great one from moxie... and I loved the ring! it's gorgeous! loved it, moxie... I really did! it's very.... THEM.
Author's Response: thanks so much, receptionist! I so love happy Jam. :-)
Date: June 25, 2007 08:25 pm Title: All in Good Time
Oh that was so cute! Totally lived up to the hype. I can't believe we got two of these in one day! What a great night for fanfic. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! So glad you enjoyed it!