1 [Report This]Date: March 29, 2023 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww so sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
ok. "Done" is the greatest 55 words ever written. It's so cute, my brain nearly exploded.
Author's Response: Wow, can't believe you found this old thing...glad you you enjoyed - thanks, hootshot112.
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
ahhhhh!
fantastic work!!!
Date: July 12, 2007 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh--- loved these! They really "sound" like Jim & Pam, too. They feel authentic. Thanks for the smiles!
Author's Response: Great - love hearing they felt authentic! Thanks so much, Amy.
9 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woohoo! Loved both of them, but #2 just rocked!
Author's Response: Why, thank you m'am. These were fun to write...big believer in less is more. Would love to see what you'd do with 55 words!
Date: July 07, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice, Colette! I wish I could write so succinctly. I love the first one especially - it's so simple, yet perfectly sums up all things JAM.
Author's Response: Thanks so much questionforyou...'succinct' is a great compliment!
Date: July 05, 2007 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Done" was the perfect ending there.
Author's Response: Thanks, TLK...glad it worked for you.
Date: July 02, 2007 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
You always manage to bring it. That really was all kinds of awesome. Just perfect to capture the end of season 3. :)
Author's Response: Those were really fun to write...kind of little poems (but without the pressure of thinking of it that way while writing!) So glad you saw the end of S3 in them...I have a special fondness for that final episode (hmmm, why would that be?) Thanks for the review and the ribbon too, MA...always a thrill - and NEVER an expectation ;-)
Date: July 02, 2007 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Le sigh. *happy*
Thank you, Colette.
Author's Response: Glad you're happy...these little bites were like palate cleansers between writing my recent spate of smutcakes (how's that for a convoluted sentence?) Le thanks, NEJ!
Date: July 02, 2007 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh, both were perfect. I especially like the second, because it is just that simple for him.
Author's Response: Coming from the master of short and sweet, that's high praise. Thanks, nqllisi...appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That's all. Wow!
Author's Response: That's plenty! Thanks so much, feared or loved!
10 [Report This]Date: July 01, 2007 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
These were great. I especially loved "Done". Very powerful and only 55 words! Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you, Abigail. They were fun to write.
Date: July 01, 2007 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Both of these were terrific. Great job!
Author's Response: So happy you thought so. Thanks, larrymcg!
Date: July 01, 2007 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
even in 55 words, you're genius.
Author's Response: Even in six words, you are too kind. Much apppreciated, LoveFool!
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have such a huge smile on my face! So great!
Author's Response: Happy to make you smile. Thanks, aggiegurl22!
Date: June 30, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfection. It was really beautiful and to the point. Challenge or not you are a great writer.
Author's Response: What a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much, cure6199!
Date: June 30, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked that-- "done."
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks, receptionist!
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I'm often (*cringing* - more often than not) guilty of reading amazing fics but not reviewing them. (As a writer, I readily admit what blasphemy this is.)
I'm exhausted - long, rotten day, as it were - but of course I had to read this, thinking I'd review later...but I just couldn't not.
This is absolutely amazing-- would certainly stand seamlessly on its own without the challenge. But either way: succinct, poignant, and as always, so amazingly them.
Well done, my friend (as if you're even capable of doing it any other way)...
Author's Response: So sorry about your day. And you? Are a great reviewer! These things were fun to write - literally just popped into my head - SO unlike me to write and post something in fifteen minutes (or hours or days, hee.) Or to write to a command, for that matter - what was I drinking last night? I think I just needed a break from writing smutty snack cakes about undies and baked goods (though I'm not quite through with those.) Anyway, glad you liked these little bites - thanks a zillion, girl7!
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
55 words, 110 word, 1000 words - whatever. Everything you post, I love. I do especially love the second part of this.
Author's Response: I'm cyber blushing! So happy you enjoyed...and thanks, kells8995.
Date: June 30, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooo! That last conversation was perfection.
Author's Response: Why, thanks. So glad it worked for you, desert island.
Date: June 30, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
'You. Me. Us.' That certainly sums it up nicely. And in the end, it was simple....just wish it didn't take a whole other season to get there! Oh, well. Lovely work, as always.
Author's Response: You know what they say...less is more. And I hear you about it taking so excruciatingly long (hey, Greg Daniels: sometimes less pain is more!) Seriously, thank you so much for the lovely review, as always, bitterpill!
Date: June 30, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the second one best. It is amazing how short and emotional a story is when you condense it down to dialogue.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the dialogue...thanks, Ellelque.
8 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally great. Best Line Ever: It was all about her. Had always been.
Because its so true
Author's Response: It is true, and thank god they finally got their stories straight! Thanks, Emily.
10 [Report This]Date: June 30, 2007 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay for short and sweet and perfect and especially this:
'None of it means shit, if you’re not in it.'
Author's Response: Figures you'd like that line, missy.Thanks Mox - an even smaller snack cake?
Date: June 30, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am amazing that you can say so much and so beautifully with so few words...wonderful.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks flamingosinparadise - for this and for being such a great reviewer!