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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I wonder who actually picked out that underwear.  As hot as Rashida is, that green was just all wrong for her complexion.   Maybe you're being too harsh on her though.  Maybe Karen has red/green colour blindness and should be getting our sympathy instead.

You didn't buy that argument, did you?  Yeah, I didn't either.



Author's Response: well, she does already have my sympathy for lots of reasons - but that set was an act against nature.  I think its design was funded by the Zero Population Growth organization.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHA!!!! Love it! and Sisterhood of Igniting Panties... THAT is gold..

Author's Response: Thanks!!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1

HEE!



Author's Response: Yep, that's the reaction I was going for!  Thanks :-)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was hilarious! (Especially the title). Mint green is a good color for ice cream but not for undies!



Author's Response: Yes, I admit I own green underwear that could be described as 'mint' - but I would never, ever consider them anything but UN-sexy.  What the hell was Karen thinking??  :-)

Reviewer: jecksia Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL. I love how you can write something in so little words, but the meaning is insurmountable...did I even spell that right?


Author's Response: Yes, you certainly did spell that right!  Thanks for the $10 word compliment!  :-D

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

So glad that Jim didn't like what Karen bought. Yuck.

Author's Response:

haha - I didn't realise how many people felt that way (which is obviously how *I* feel) until I wrote this.  I wonder if VS sales of that set bottomed out after Karen purchased them.... ;-)

Thanks for the review, gotkona

Reviewer: anne202 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved this! Very funny - especially with the title! Hehe

Author's Response: Thanks, anne - I really couldn't resist!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the UoD reference.  Niiiiice!!!  Mint ≠sexy unless a mojito is involved.

Author's Response: I love that thought!!  and I'm even more impressed you were able to put a 'not equals to' sign in your review!  What a dork I am, hmm?

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1

This made me smile because I was hoping Karen's green undies would be a turn off to Jim!

Author's Response: Glad to oblige, Abigail!  I'm pretty sure Jim's partial to pink, not mint green.  ;-)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee! God, the title alone...

Author's Response: Sorry, I couldn't resist.  ;-) 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 07:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This is many kinds of awesome.  Who didn't wonder what the heck Karen was thinking about her purchase choice?  This had me giggling for quite a while.  In a good way, of course!

Author's Response: Thanks - you were there when I got the idea, after all!!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Yowza. That image alone. See, I didn't really get that scene. Because my tv is a piece of crap, and was showing it in black and white and static and no voices. It wasn't fun!

Author's Response:

Consider yourself lucky, Emily.  And prepare yourself for when you finally see that outfit on the DVDs.  It's definitely a "what the hell is she thinking/this is NOT the girl for Jim" moment.  :-)

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee!  Underwear of Doom!  And Jim could even ignite those panties.  In fact, he should.

Author's Response: Yes, I have to admit I enjoyed a little too much the idea that Jim would see Karen in that outfit and his first reaction would be "Pam would never wear that."  See, Maximus did have his part to play in getting these kids together!  :-)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2007 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1

oooh that was GOOD! That lingerie was TRULY horrid.

Author's Response: haha - I'm so glad I am not alone in that assessment.  And thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha! That made me choke on my oreo! Oh goodness. You win with words.

Author's Response: Thanks aggie!  Next time keep all oreos out of your mouth while reading fanfic.  ;-)  We don't want to lose you.

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

hahaha! Yeah I thought they were a little...horrific too.

Author's Response: horrific is a good word for them.  Glad you approve!  :-)

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha. Too funny. I just laughed out loud and had to explain why to the roommates. I'd say that means I liked it.

Author's Response: Yay - so glad it made you laugh (even if your roommates are now convinced you're nuts)!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHA!!!! LOVED IT!!!! that was hilarious.  and you're right.  she never would wear those--they're hideous!


Author's Response: Excellent - so glad you enjoyed it, receptionist!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

So glad I'm not the only one writing fics about underwear. But leave it to you to turn those minty fresh panties into the UoD (Undies of Doom.) You, as ever, are too much, Mox.

Author's Response: haha - I'm afraid it's a bit of a stretch to compare this to your delicious snack cake - but I am pleased you liked it.  :-)

Reviewer: sherlockelly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

:(

 I LOVE KAREN!!! She'd look good in that.

Also, you're an amazing writer, but I CANNOT see Pam saying Heavens no. :

I seems too.... 60 years old for her.



Author's Response: sorry if I stepped on any toes; I am evil and I couldn't resist.  :-)  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha, love this.  I actually saw those same panties in VS a while back and made a point of shunning them!

Author's Response: Yay for the mint green shun!!  :-D  Thanks!

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

This, with the title, is one of the first fics that had me snorting in my seat. Amazing. I love this. You, Moxie, are made of awesome. 

Author's Response: and you, dear moofoot, are made of awesome for leaving such a sweet review!  so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

okay - the conversation, coupled with the title - pure gold!  You never disappoint!  

Author's Response: wow, thanks, Kells

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hahaha....that's awesome/


Author's Response: thanks!  so glad you liked it!  :-)

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