1 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2020 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO in character.
1 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2018 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is absolutely beautiful. I just love #2, even with it being angsty. It's so real and raw, but you know that they will, in fact, work it out. And that's so realistic and lovely and scary and rewarding. The ending was absolutely perfect. Thank you for this treasure.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
"you don’t know if your heart would be for sale ever again if he moved out of it."
ugh so beautiful. this whole thing was fantastic. you write jam very very well.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2007 04:42 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW. Reading this was like a breath of fresh air. I love your style--so natural, it just flows effortlessly like a stream meandering it's way through a meadow. Simply wonderful.
I especially loved the fan letters they received once the documentary airs. It's something few people never think about within the context of the show, that someday this footage will "air," and they'll be "famous." :)
All in all, I am very impressed with your writing, and I definitely am looking forward to more from you!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a few stories backlogged and hopefully they won't disappoint!
Date: July 04, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah, having someone know you that well does make it pretty tough to surprise them. (Very cute) Makes me just giddy for S4!!
And you just KNOW there will be Jim-Hussies once the documentary airs. Damn good-looking, likeable guy...
Author's Response: I think you should coin that phrase. Jim-hussies. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 04, 2007 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved reading a new take on the Pam/Jim get together story, plus that you focused on an aspect that will hopefully be explored on the show - as much their depth of friendship will be the backbone of their romantic relationship, it also creates a whole other kind of landscape for them - and not all of it easy to navigate. Pam's character comes through vividly here, and I love how you illustrated, rather than told us, about their ups/downs with these brief scenarios. The fight one was especially poignant - very real, but also hopeful, cause it's clear there's enough between them to get past it. The last two lines are perfect. Really well written and lovely.
Author's Response: I think their underlying friendship will be an asset and a curse, something complex but hopefully having stay-power. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1
i really love this, because yeah, dating your best friend has to have some down points. awesome writing.
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1
This is wonderful. The joy and danger inherent in their deep connection is palpable here. But these five problems are the best kinds of problems to have, because they open them up to a new world. Beautiful use of details and simple, striking prose. Yay!
Author's Response: I think that the problems all have another side of the coin, how they can be a blessing and a curse. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked the second story the best. Overall though, it was great. Good job!
Date: July 04, 2007 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
This was excellent! What a great area to explore...the difficulty with being with your bestfriend. I love that all the things that were originally bad things, really turned out to be good things because we got to see how well he knew her. All except for that one where they were having a fight...which also just so poignantly delicious. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought it was important to include the fight scene, because all couples, even our seemingly perfect little Jim and Pam, have to fight.
Date: July 03, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so great! I especially loved #2, and this line from #1 "Jim can always tell when you're lying. You think maybe there's a first time for everything."
There was so much emotion and a great take on what they'll have to deal with post The Job.
Author's Response: I think I definately got the sense after The Job of "well they have their happy ending. but there's still several seasons left. so now what?" that I wanted to explore here. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 03, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Incredible. Really...just...guh.
Your title had me worried, I can't take breakup fics...haha.
I know you're new to MTT, so I'm really hoping you stick around and keep posting awesome stuff like this.
Author's Response:
I didn't even think about how the title could be taken differently... oops. It's always nerve-wracking to start someplace new, but I'll have some new stories to post soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 03, 2007 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Roy had always acted like he knew you better because he’d known you longest, as if time could cover what interest didn’t. But he didn’t know you, not really, not in more than the superficial live together, preferred side of the bed, favorite kind of ice cream way. Yet that was comforting, somewhat, at the time, like a blanket of transgression surrounding you."
I really love this description of the Pam/Roy relationship- it's so true and extremely well-written, really beautiful to read. Excellent fic, overall.
Author's Response: Yeah, that's always been the vibe I've gotten off of those two. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 03, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. I just loved this. I really enjoyed how you structured the story, and I think the difficulty of becoming more than that after being such good friends is a really interesting angle that is not quite covered in a lot of first date fics.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted a fresh angle and I'm glad it worked out.
Date: July 03, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such an interesting read. The structure was wonderful and it was a great look inside of Pam's head. Really enjoyed this.
9 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such good stuff! You know that Jim will be getting tons of love letters when the documentary does air. I hope we get to see such poignant moments like these on the actual show!
Author's Response: I can only imagine. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 03, 2007 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
There's been a severe lack of fics like this lately. I really, really loved this. Hope to see more of your stuff soon!
Date: July 03, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Golly, that was lovely. It really felt like you're in Pam's head, and it's amazing how you've made the integration of old Pam with Fancy New Beesly so seamless. And the difficulties of the relationship feel very natural with Pam's character and experience -- this is an outstanding characterization of her, and lovely work. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Wow, I've glad you liked it! Thank you being my first reviewer in The Office fandom!