7 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 12:33 am Title: Just say it!
This was cute and sweet and fluffy and just plain wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I do love fluff!
Date: July 10, 2007 06:16 pm Title: Just say it!
Hey, Azlin, you did a great job condensing this.
And, yes, Pam needs to say the magic words to Jim, too. I hope we get to see that moment on the show!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story, and I can't wait to hear her say this on the show, although, I kind of don't think we'll see the first time it happens. But maybe... who knows right?
Date: July 10, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Just say it!
This is just very sweet. Awe.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing it, even if the 55 word format is kind of a pain. Just requires a lot of careful editing I mean. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 09:13 am Title: Just say it!
aawww.. no worries! it's definitely still cute!!! ^____^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 07:59 am Title: Just say it!
aw! still cute at 55 words.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the cuteness factor is still intact
Date: July 10, 2007 07:51 am Title: Just say it!
Eeeeeeee! Nope, it's still very cute at 55 words. :)
Author's Response: Aw!!! Thanks!!! I love it when you squee! ;)
Date: July 10, 2007 07:43 am Title: Just say it!
AS much as I liked this little short story here, I think I liked your summary even more. I don't know...something about the way you strung that sentence together really resonated with me. So, if it's okay with you, can I leave a review for that one sentence? :) I think this may be the first time I've ever wanted to review a story's summary. haha. But they were both great. Good work!
Author's Response:
You can leave a review for anything you want! ;)
When I wrote the summary I was actually thinking about the original first line for the story, which sort of gave me the inspiration for the whole thing. It was: "Well, I don't think you really know what you think you know, you know?" Which as it turns out was too long and a little too confusing for a 55-word story, but I really liked it for some reason.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
Date: July 10, 2007 05:47 am Title: Just say it!
V. sweet, Azlin! I like how they manage to be jokey AND adorable in 55 words. Fine work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, McGigi! It was kind of a spur of the moment idea that wouldn't go away until I actually wrote it.
Date: July 10, 2007 05:17 am Title: Just say it!
It is still cute, but I will say your title confused me. Because there are too many fives. And so I read the title before I went down to get breakfast. And all throughout breakfast, I was adding extra fives. And so it was a mental math game. It was like, wait, five fives - thats twenty five. Five plus five is ten... but neither of those are five five.. that is eleven fives. (obviously, my brain really isn't awake). And so, I would like to congratulate you on a cute story and yell at you for making my asleep brain do math.
Wow, is my review longer than your story? Oh well. Who cares. I am a freak.
Author's Response: Thanks for the congratulations and sorry about the math! Normally I would never do anything to intentionally inflict math on someone, especially before breakfast! I'm glad you liked the story though. I've written a lot of 100 word stuff, but 55 words is super short and twice as hard! Who knew?
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 04:57 am Title: Just say it!
Oh. It's still cute. I'm sitting here just beaming.
Jim considered this. “Don’t you want to?” There is something so simultaneously hopeful and fearful here, it just got to me. Poor guy. I think this is tremenndiously moving for such a short piece, honestly.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you caught that. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to convey those emotions in so few words, so I'm really glad to see it still worked! Thanks for the review, lis.