Date: May 09, 2009 05:58 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Bwahahahahahahaha!
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2009 03:55 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
I loved this! I wondered why it wasn't listed as having two authors and it all made perfect sense once I got to the end. It wasn't until Karen got hit by the bus (Yes, it did take me that long, I admit it) that I started to realize that we'd been duped, but I loved this anyway, very well-done, bravo!
Date: June 10, 2008 11:13 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Night Swept shows signs of multiple personality disorder.
This was a lot of fun, particularly the two 'authors' attempting to assign control of the good guy/bad guy label and make it stick.
I wondered in the beginning why there weren't two authors on the story; now I know.
Nice job.
6 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2007 04:44 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
LOL, wow! I was actually digging it, even with the whole writers hating each other and all ;)
8 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 12:29 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This was hysterical! I loved how the paragraphs were escalating with each author's POVs. And I truly didn't realize that Pamatosis wasn't a real author until your end notes. Brilliant!!
Date: July 12, 2007 03:17 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Wow. This made me laugh so hard, especially since I did this once with a friend and we ended up contradicting each other, just like here. Excellent job!
Date: July 10, 2007 10:28 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
haha I wanted Pamatosis to be real! Just for the "fuck you night swept!" because it made me laugh so hard! That is totally something I would do if I did tandem writing, just hate the person who keeps ruining my ideas! haha
very clever.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! (and kindly remember the laughter next time I make you want to choke me... )
Date: July 10, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This was hilarious. thanks for a good laugh :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 06:04 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Oh dear. That pretty much encapsulated all of fandom right there. I think you just won the internet.
Date: July 10, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
haha...the change in tone made me think: Oh, wow, this devolved quickly. And then yelling match at the end. he. My friend is taking creative writing right now and that kind cursing contest actually happened to her in class the other day with her partner.
Author's Response: I bet it happens a lot... I never had to do any tandem writing, but I bet it really sucks to work so hard at a nice setup only to have your partner crap all over it. I can see how it would get really mean really fast. thanks for the feedback!
Date: July 10, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Hahaha, very clever. And amusing! :)
Date: July 10, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This was hilarious. I am crying a little bit from laughing so much. Any story that can make me laugh is gold.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
Thanks, I just ruined a perfectly good pair of dress pants cuz I peed myself laughing!
Author's Response: That is seriously cool, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 10:21 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This is totally awesome. I really like how fluffy you make the Jam sided writing and how it (obviously) clashes with your usual angsty Karen-side. And I love how things escalated and the final shots were hilarious. Keep the stories coming! (These are lean times for Team Karen, but I don't have to tell you that.)
Date: July 10, 2007 06:16 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This was really hilarious. I love how it devolved into name-calling at the end.
8 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 05:14 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
LOL!!! That was awesome!!! I love how the mood made a steep but gradual change and then reminded us of what was really going on here.
I can't stop the laughing going on in my head.
Date: July 10, 2007 05:08 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
This was so great.... isn't this what all stories start out as... a great argument in writing form between the two sides of the brain? Oh well. Mine do.
And Karen dying... yeah, that is fun!
This was hilarious and such a fun read.
Date: July 10, 2007 05:02 am Title: Tandem writing: Pamatosis and Night Swept
BAHAHAHAHAA!!! You know what's scary? I have conversations in my head that sound a lot like this when I'm writing. So while others may scoff--and shame on them if they do--this actually made perfect sense to me.
I'm not sure what that says about me, personally, but there you go. Fabulous stuff, man... just fabulous.