10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2008 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
wow.
that was amazing!
seriously, i wish it continued!
great, great job!
9 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...your writing is seriously beautiful. I could really feel Pam's fear when she was sitting huddled all by herself...just so heartbreaking and painful. I love that Jim remembered she was scared of storms and how it all came out. Loved it.
Date: July 11, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! This was incredibly good. Although, I'm such a spoiled little fanfic reader that I was very sad we didn't get to hear their entire conversation and then see him show up on her doorstep sometime the next day with flowers and love confessions. I guess I should get out of my fluffy little fantasy world more often though, because this was fantastic! Well done!
Date: July 11, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. Because just today I wanted to read a fic involving rain (probably because it has been raining nonstop here)... and you answer without even knowing it.
This was just so wonderful and so amazing, and I am I not even done.
Oh, and rubbing a back when scared of storms. Totally happened today. Except I was rubbing a three year olds back telling her it was alright and her mommy would be home soon and she was safe, and just take a deep breath and hug baby and it would be okay. And so... um, yeah.
"The thing is, she still feels like a child sometimes."
My.. theme? motto? whatever correct word is. I always feel like a child still.
Roy isn't always bad, he does have a nice side. So, that is all kinds of greatness.
I used to love love love storms. But, sometime in the past two years or so, I have gone from loving them to being scared when they are like that. So, I totally relate to Pam in here. Except I don't have a Jim to call.
But I still love that she called Jim and he remembed that she was afraid of thunderstorms.
So I have to just reiterate that this story was all kinds of awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1
This storm of emotions between Jim and Pam is making me cry too. Pam so quietly conveys her honest feelings even though it may sound as if she only worried about the rain at times. "I can let you go." This was really beautiful to read.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, poor Pam- and poor Jim, still her back-up, still missing her. This is atmospheric and poignant and haunting.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like her struggle to be strong in the face of her fears and how Jim doesn't immediately leap into a car and drive to her rescue. I like the way you describe the thunder shaking her bones. When I grow up I want to write like you.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is so good. It made me cry. I love that the storm calmed after Pam told Jim everything she'd had bottled up inside her about them.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
UGHHHHHH. so i know i already reviewed this but SERIOUSLY. i re-read and dkjgfh. it's so poignant. like, i feel so genuinely sad for pam and and and so happy when jim says he misses her and HOW DO YOU DO THAT?! you're all kinds of awesome.
Date: July 10, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. I'm so glad you decided to post this.
8 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Pam...really enjoyed this little story. Very glad that you posted it! : )