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Reviewer: a little teapot Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 17, 2023 11:01 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

This was such a fun read! I loved Dwight taking his job as lifeguard in the little pool so serious, and of course, every interaction between Jim and Pam was perfect.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2023 12:36 am Title: The Party's Over :(

That was an entertaining Office adventure and very easy to picture. Only thing I would say is just a quick post-publication edit to correct the dialogue tag punctuation. Another drunk kiss from Pam and Jim's flustered reaction was fantastic.

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2020 01:29 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

Wonderfully, relentlessly cute.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 05:24 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

Wow...happy Jim & Pam is just so refreshing to read right now.  And great job on all the THs.  They seemed very in-character!

Author's Response: And they are just as much fun to write!!  Thanks so much!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lit_glitter Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2006 02:32 am Title: The Party's Over :(

Yeah, so I just read this instead of working on an important Beowulf paper. I'll totally blame you if I fail History of English Lit.  But it'll be okay because I'm thinking about majoring in Jim/Pam instead of English.  :)

Author's Response: HA!  Well - I have a Beowulf paper you can borrow if you want.  I actually wrote it for a guy I had a crush on in college.  I'd need to find it - but it's the least I could do to support your major. ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 05:19 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

This has been such a fun little series. This line was hysterical -  "Dunder-Mifflin Paper.  We'll wipe the competition"

Author's Response: HA!  I actually was looking for something better so I'm glad you thought that worked!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 03:34 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

I couldn't wait for you to update this! And now you did, and threw in shirtless Jim as a bonus! Yay!

Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long.  I really struggled with the non-Jammy bits. :)  It's official.  ShirtlessJim is a hit.  Not that expected anything less. ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 09:11 am Title: The Party's Over :(

He's pretty confident that his greatest talent is making her smile.  

Awwww. Wonderful end to a lovely bit of fluff. I couldn't handle any more angst today!



Author's Response: It is though isn't it?  Fluff is good. :)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 08:20 am Title: The Party's Over :(

Shirtless Jim is always a good thing.  Very well done!



Author's Response: Amen to that!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 08:11 am Title: The Party's Over :(

Aw, does it HAVE to be over?? But seriously, I think you did an awesome job with this one. Ensemble fics really are tricky- and I think you got it down! Plus, any excuse to "see" Jim without his shirt is a great fic for me :)

Author's Response:

My heart - clearly - belongs to Jam but I had so much fun writing this.  ShirtlessJim rocks.  I completely agree!  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Pixel Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 07:59 am Title: The Party's Over :(

I'm so proud of you!  I knew you were the right person to adopt this idea out to and you did a great job with it.  So instead of saying how great it is again, I'll just say thanks for telling a better story than I could have!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks Julie!!!  I'm so so glad you liked it!!!!  It was a blast and I now know I can handle pre-Casino Night so YAY! 

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 04:32 am Title: The Party's Over :(

Another fun chapter - love Phyllis winking, could just see it. Also, how non-chalant Jim is about taking his shirt off - something very sexy about him being comfortable in his own skin, so to speak (I always imagine him that way in those scenes with Pam.) Two stories from you in one morning - I'm going to get greedy if you keep this up!



Author's Response: Love Phyllis.  And though I venture tentatively in the TWoP JK:WCHLAT thread I'm all about ShirtlessJim. :) 

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 10:00 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

...he wheels the grill to it's hiding spot in the corner.  It could come in handy later this summer.

Sequel!!!  And where is Pam's skirt? Hmmm, I wonder ;)

Loads of fun :)



Author's Response:

HA!  I actually had a whole other section - with the two of them going back up to the roof - but I decided that it was too much.

So.  We shall see...

PS - Pam's skirt is around.  She was just too tipsy to really look for it.  That or she had an unending desire for Jim to give her the shirt off his back.

Either or. ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 08:47 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

Wow, Krissy.  You come back from vacation, and you don't mess around! ;) Pam wearing Jim's shirt in the office?  Unbelievably sexy. 

Author's Response:

Hee!  The weather was so miserable I had a lot of time to think.

A LOT. ;)

So glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 08:35 pm Title: The Party's Over :(

His fingers fly over the buttons of his shirt and he shrugs it off casually, like it's no big deal for him to be standing bare-chested in front of her.

Season 3 wish list!  Season 3 wish list!!!!

I enjoyed this quite bit, Miss xoxoxo, and not just because of shirtless Jim. 



Author's Response: Oh please.  Tell me about it.  LOL!  The image alone had me drooling all over my keyboard.  ;)  I'm so glad you liked it!!!  This one was a blast to write.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2006 08:38 am Title: Adult Swim

LOVE THE BEAVER BURGERS. Fun to say, and icky too! Fact: WetJim rules.

Author's Response: HA!  Me too!  There might be more wet jim in the next chapter....just saying.  LOL!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:31 pm Title: Adult Swim

He seemed genuinely surprised when I told him that "my people" did not invent mayonnaise.

HA!  Really funny!  You have all the talking heads down! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!  This one is really fun to write.

Reviewer: bossofdancing Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 04:57 pm Title: Adult Swim

Aw, I likey. :)  This is such a fun and lighthearted story!  


Author's Response:

I'm glad bossofdancing.  I know.  I was getting kinda angsted out. :)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 09:26 am Title: Adult Swim

This is hilarious.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks Lissa - Me either (since I haven't written it yet!)  LOL!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 05:49 am Title: Adult Swim

Aaah, I am so loving this fic. It's got me daydreaming about having a pool party on the roof of my office with my own WetJim. Great job!!

Author's Response: You and me both pennylane!  Thanks!!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2006 05:13 am Title: Adult Swim

Hee! This is so damn cute. This made me laugh out loud: "I am so not eating that beaver."

Very Kevin. Perfect.



Author's Response: That one is all Pixel.  Well - the beaver burgers were me - but that comment came from her.  In any event - I'm glad you liked it.  And I couldn't think of anyone but Kevin delivering that line.  :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 10:25 pm Title: Adult Swim

Ah, naughty jokes and Wet Jim!  That is a pretty perfect chapter. Hee.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 09:45 pm Title: Adult Swim

This is too funny!  I love the ensemble - you've totally captured each character's voice perfectly.  And more Wet Jim, please!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. 

I'm also glad it's supposedly sweltering in the story.  I'd hate poor WetJim to catch cold.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 08:39 pm Title: Adult Swim

You definitely delivered on the ridiculousness :) I loved it...the beavers, Kevin, Oscar...all of it. You make me wish I was at this party!

Author's Response:

I'm glad!!  It worries me.  Just pretend you ARE there.  Pull up a lawnchair. ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2006 07:26 pm Title: Adult Swim

Ah, I *so* wish I was on the roof with the gang from Dunder Mifflin. Seems like so much fun!

Author's Response: I mean c'mon.  Jim in a pool?  Who wouldn't want to be there??????

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