1 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2018 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful and sexy! Those last few lines, of course, were knockouts!
Date: July 23, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh yeah, you captured the heat. and they do have fevers. just not normally the type you call in sick about (well, probably you do... but not the type you admit to having when you call in sick)
Date: July 17, 2007 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This may well be one of the most perfect one-shots I've ever read. So sexy, so hot, so very them with the banter. The last two lines are fantastic. And I love the second person technique -- hard to do, I think, but you do it amazingly well here.
Just a terrific, terrific read. Wow.
BTW: A bit of irony -- I live in the deep South, and our air conditioner went out YESTERDAY. The guys won't be able to come out to fix it until tomorrow. So here I sit in a house that's literally 85 degrees reading fanfic to distract myself. ...Oddly enough, even though the notion of heat permeates your fic, I forgot all about my irritation and having no damned air conditioning. I'd say that's a job well done. :o)
Date: July 16, 2007 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1
That's the right way to begin the week. Yep. Very hot.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
*fans self* woohoo.. HEAT is right..
Date: July 16, 2007 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1
That was just lovely! Very, very nice.
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Phew! Definitely a great way to wake up. If Pam had gotten out of that bed, I'd seriously start questioning her sanity! Punctuality is overrated!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yeah. The old call-in-naked-on-Monday-morning. Never gets old. :) Thanks, bitterpill. I am now off to take a cold shower. Is it hot in here or what?
Date: July 16, 2007 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I would call in sick all week long. Great job.
Date: July 15, 2007 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
You made me want to be Pam Beesly so badly in this story. This was great. Hot, sexy, and just delicious. Who needs to get to work on time???
Date: July 15, 2007 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sizzling. A perfectly encapsulated moment rendered so vividly - it's not like reading about heat, it actually feels like it. Love the 2nd person (a new fascination of mine) and just the right touch of humor to make it undoubtedly them. Great last line too. You are very good at this.
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow I love it. short and fantastic.
7 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that's hot. (Sorry, couldn't resist.) I love that Pam worries about her "best angle". So sweet and so real.
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whew! *fans self*