8 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2016 02:44 pm Title: Splish Splash
Win! I liked Phyllis' character a lot, except for the one time they had her be catty to Jim and Pam in the breakroom about transferring calls; it seemed so out of character for her.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 12:48 pm Title: Splish Splash
As if shirtless Jim wasn't reason enough to love this, you also added great writing and cute dialogue...nice work.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2008 08:15 pm Title: Splish Splash
Guh, Jim shirtless... write more like this please =)
Date: June 14, 2008 10:56 pm Title: Splish Splash
A perve on Jim fic - perfect! What's scary is I can imagine this all very clearly. HOT!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Splish Splash
OHH my God I LOVED IT. :-D
However, I think that if Michael were invited to a pool party, he would have worn a speedo. It just sounds like a "Michael" thing to do. :-P
Date: August 04, 2007 10:24 pm Title: Splish Splash
Oh Moxie...you and your enjoyable stories. Nice situation and I love Phyllis knowing what was going on. I wonder what Pam's reaction would have been prior to "The Job"...
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Splish Splash
Warning - I am in a typative mood. Just fyi.
Jim in a swimsuit is always on my mind. However, I spend every day at the pool (for the kiddos, of course), and so i get some nice eye candy there. of course, I also get some gross people who should not be allowed in bathing suits (i am sure i am also considered one of those but whatever) I choose to focus on the eye candy.
Sunscreen is gross. Especially the good stuff that I have to use on the kiddos. Because it doesn't rub in. I swear, I try to get that stuff into their skin, but after five minutes, i give up, and they go to the pool looking like skeletons. I like my cheap brand stuff. It rubs in really easily. Actually, for myself, now I use the spray on (and for a while I had spray on tanner and spray on sunscreen. it was some really interesting tan lines... but after about a week, the tan won).
Why did you have to go and ruin it by mentioning dwight in a swimsuit. Now I am going to have to bleach my brain, thank you very much.
Jim and Pam have more fun at the pool than I do. Last time I was at the pool, lets see, I played drag three kids to the deep end, with them kicking me (trying to swim), dealing with one of them acting like i was their own personal diving board, oh yeah, and jumping in and out of the pool with a 3,4,4,8 year old on me. No where as much fun as Jim and Pam. I need to change pools.
“Yeah, he's okay,” very Pam-ish.
Haha, this was such a great story. And yeah I told you I was in a typative mood. What can I say (that I haven't already said in this review). :P
Date: July 17, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Splish Splash
VERY CUTE!!! wonderful!
Date: July 17, 2007 10:31 am Title: Splish Splash
Phyllis rules! That was so fun. I can totally see everything enfolding on the show. Except, of course, we likely wouldn't get any cameras in the guest room. Heh.
Author's Response:
hmm...maybe a peek through the blinds? Or at least a hidden microphone? We can dream, right?? ;-)
Thanks for the reviews, belsum - you rock!
Date: July 16, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Splish Splash
heheeee. So cuteee. I love the end I was grinning like fool yay phyllis!
Author's Response:
yay for happy endings! :-)
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review, collardgreens!
Date: July 16, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Splish Splash
Nice work, Mox. I loved this. Yay for Shirtless!Jim!!! I think as fans we definitely deserve to see more chest hair on the show, but I suppose that's not really the kind of show that The Office chooses to be. Sadly enough.
Author's Response:
I hate so much about what The Office chooses to be. (You knew that was coming, right?) Actually, I hate that NBC isn't partnered with Cinemax... ;-)
Still, we can dream. Thanks for the review, Azlin!
Date: July 16, 2007 10:29 am Title: Splish Splash
hahahaha! i love how you provide fluff, Jim's hotness, and hilarity all at the same time :) i LOVE this. maybe b/c you've uncovered something we're all dying to see... Jim shirtless... ok... i need to go spend some time with that mental image now. thanks. bye!
Author's Response: anything to do to help, rulesofjinx! Glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: July 16, 2007 10:18 am Title: Splish Splash
Go Phyllis! We "mature" women know hotness when we see it! Nice job as per usual, Mox! Why couldn't we have seen the swimtrunks/sunglasses combo in LtW? Egregious!
Author's Response:
because the screen would have caught fire? They did, after all, stop putting asbestos in movie screens some years back.... ;-)
Some day, EH....some day. *sigh* (Thanks for reviewing!!)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 09:45 am Title: Splish Splash
Oh phyllis.. you are a true hussy indeed! love, love, love! well, Mox, if your mind focuses more on John/Jim's happy trail more than his intellect, at least you're putting those thoughts to good use! ^_^
Author's Response:
haha - well, the visuals ARE a lot prettier, that's for sure.... :-D
Thanks for the review StarShine!
Date: July 16, 2007 07:59 am Title: Splish Splash
Hee! I love Phyllis. And, obviously, the idea of Jim in swim trunks. :)
Author's Response: well, of course - who doesn't love the idea of that!!! Talk about going to your happy place....
Date: July 16, 2007 06:52 am Title: Splish Splash
Ah, the happiest of all the trails...and leave it to you to celebrate it in a fic! (Says the woman who based an entire story on undie pants.) Wet Jim in a bathing suit - works for me - and Phyllis, apparently. How funny would it be if it turns out to be her, instead of Kelly, who ends up pumping Pam for details on the hotness's bedside manner in S4?
Author's Response:
I think that would be the funniest way to do it. After all, Phyllis is a married woman now, but who could resist living vicariously through Pam? And i think Pam might be surprised enough to actually let some details spill....
Thanks for the review - you're the best!
Date: July 16, 2007 06:27 am Title: Splish Splash
That was a very fun story. I could use another chapter though!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you - I'm glad you liked it enough to want more! :-)
Date: July 16, 2007 05:26 am Title: Splish Splash
What can I say? I've read all your work! You are consistantly excellent! Jim & Pam just flow from you!
Wonderful please keep it coming!
B
Author's Response: I'll do what I can - thanks for all the encouragement, batman29!
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 04:34 am Title: Splish Splash
Loved it! Such a fun little story : )
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, NanReg - thanks for the review!
Date: July 16, 2007 04:04 am Title: Splish Splash
Phyllis rules, and I'm totally with her on all counts in this one! I wish I had that kind of eye candy at my pool parties...
Author's Response: I know - how much fun would that be???? Thanks for reading and reviewing, Semby!
Date: July 15, 2007 11:58 pm Title: Splish Splash
Niiiice. I would love to see a shirtless Jim, escpecially in the pool. This was a great oneshot. I love how Phyllis knew what they did. Naughy but nice.
Author's Response: thanks - sometimes it's more fun to leave most of the action to the reader's imagination....! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: July 15, 2007 11:29 pm Title: Splish Splash
oh man, you are feeling prolific lately! And I'm LOVING IT. This was fun and sexy and just so them. The dialogue was beyond perfect. This is exactly how i would imagine them being at a pool party.
Author's Response:
What I wouldn't give for a pool party episode in s4, right? Our luck it would be held in January though.....
Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: July 15, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Splish Splash
I really wish we saw more Phyllis on the show because she would totally be just like the way you've written her. Great work on the characters as always. Loved it, just like everything else you write. :) Also, when I first saw the title, I thought "Moxie is writing a cowboy story now??" And I still didn't get it until several minutes later. Good grief, what is wrong with me?! Time to go to bed.
Author's Response: haha - at least you understood it in the end, right? And thanks so much for all the kind words - you are so sweet!! I really appreciate you taking the time to review.
Date: July 15, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Splish Splash
Excellent Phyllis throughout - from not wanting to un-invite people to her conversation with Pam.
And Pam and Jim were too cute in the pool (and guest bedroom, too!).
It has been so fun to have so much new work to read from you lately, Moxie! Loving it all. Thanks!
Author's Response: thanks, desert - I try to run with my muse when it happens; too often I want to write but nothing appears!!
7 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Splish Splash
It must be getting late - when I saw the series name I swear I thought it said "more than the sum of his PANTS."
Question: Does the title have anything to do with "on ramps"?
Now to the review - This was such a sweet and romantic story. I love how playful they were, and I love how Phyllis, too, appreciates the body parts that make up JH. Sigh....
Author's Response:
Answer: oh yes, most definitely. It's the lovely little path right down the middle. :-)
So pleased you like it, kay!!!