10 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 02:27 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Well played, my friend. Well played. And your Creed and Phyllis? Nailed them. Another great chapter in an incredibly fun story, Mox.
Date: August 09, 2007 01:53 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
What a treat to find this updated...was not expecting that now. Just adorable and sexy and Jim/Kevin? Horrifying yet too funny. Really looking forward to Pam 'demonstrating' her lingerie choices...better than fashion show at lunch any day.
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! This is a little more of what I would expect Jim and (mainly from) Pam when they (are probably destined to) fight. I don't want to get into it here, but I was trying to start a discussion about it on the NBC fanfic messageboard thread. But mainly, I needed to see Pam being patient and compassionate and I think you portrayed that. Bravo!! :mwah:
9 [Report This]Date: August 09, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
I was just starting to miss you! Yet another fine chapter. Still very curious...
Date: August 09, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Oh, I'm so glad they're talking again. Love how Jim called Pam "the bravest person he knew."
And Pam? Just so ya know....we wouldn't mind seeing Jim pose in Playgirl either. So maybe you could work on that idea, ok? :)
Thanks for sending us a chapter from "across the pond", Mox!
Date: August 09, 2007 12:53 pm Title: Walk on the Wild Side
Can I just say that possessive cave-man Jim is really hot? Well, I just did.
Also -- how adorable that neither of them can sleep very well without the other -- already. And I'm glad that they came up with a compromise. The man-thread will probably throw something at me, but I'm glad Pam won't pose completely nude.
Date: August 03, 2007 10:17 am Title: I Want You to Want Me
Oooh ouchies. Jim's trying so damn hard to do the "honorable" thing that he's not doing the *right* thing. I did love how Pam convinced Michael and how Meredith put the possibility into Angela's mind. I hope we get a peak at Dwight and Angela's discussion if she does consider it!
Author's Response:
I do wonder if on some level Dwight wouldn't see anything wrong with Angela doing it. I'm sure to him she's the most beautiuful one in the office, and I could hear him talking about how Shrute women are not ashamed of their bodies...
Thanks for reading!
Date: August 03, 2007 09:07 am Title: I Want You to Want Me
I've just read all of this straight through, and it is great so far. I think you've caught everyone's reaction perfectly- from Kevin's leering to Dwight's outrage to Jim's anguish. I mean, how does the perfect boyfriend react in this situation? It's a tough situation. The humor, the dialog, and the characterizations are all spot-on. Bravo, as usual!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I am at a crossroads about how much longer this story will be, and I appreciate the encouragement so far!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2007 05:25 am Title: I Want You to Want Me
Ouch! Jim still has so much to learn. Apparently he is not quite as quick at learning from the past as Pam is. And how much is he going to hate it when Pam tells Jim at some point she had to use Michael to try and figure out what he was thinking. Double Ouch!
Author's Response: Well, I'm assuming that once the air is cleared, Jim will insist she kiss away any lingering 'ouches'... :-D
Date: August 01, 2007 11:47 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Yow, Jim had the cojones to tell her he loves her a few weeks before her wedding but he can't verbalize discomfort. Come on Jim. Just tell her.
As you can tell by my involvment in this story you are doing really good as usual.
Author's Response: haha - thanks, blueturfbronco! I have hopes he'll figure it out eventually....
9 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 06:55 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Kudos on the Mer-Ang conversation. Leave it to an alcoholic to be an excellent manipulator. Where I come from 'doing the laundry' is a euphemism. Let's hope there's some 'laundry' in the future for our currently perturbed couple.
Author's Response: haha - I wonder if 'doing the laundry' means the same thing as 'doing my taxes' means here. Either way, all will be well with Jim and Pam eventually!! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: August 01, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
I am totally loving this...espcially the Angela / Meredith scene. Can't wait to see how Jim and Pam will resolve their issues.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, GITC!! I can assure you that Jim and Pam do work things out - I'm incapable of any other type of resolution!!
Date: August 01, 2007 05:00 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Poor Jim and Poor Pam. Pam feeling confident enough to even consider this is amazing. And Jim. Poor boy. I just want to hug him and tell him it'll all be OK.
Well. That's a daily occurance - but you know what I mean. :)
Great job Ms. Mox.
Author's Response:
Yes, Jim really benefit from daily hugs from all of us. I know I would. ;-) And while Pam is certainly exuding confidence with this new adventure, I think we'll find it's a bit of a facade..... but maybe she does want to do it anyway?
Date: August 01, 2007 04:10 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Ouch. Oh, dear Jim. Those who cannot remember the past are doomed to repeat it.
BTW -- I love the chapter titles/cheesy song titles. They scare me. And then I have these reallllly annoying earwigs for the rest of the day.
Author's Response: Yes, that is so true. Until Jim starts to believe he can disagree with Pam and still have them be okay, he's going to cause more trouble than he's trying to avoid!! I'll try to make the next chapter title as earwiggy as possible, just for you LisaHoo! :D
Date: August 01, 2007 03:35 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Oh, that's so sad! Poor Jim and Pam; that's a really tough issue you've created for them, Moxie. But I am thoroughly enjoying it.
I love your Kevin voice. And, this? “Do you think they really would photograph me with my cats?” Made me laugh out loud. Nice!
Oh, and I like the chapter title. Very fitting.
Author's Response:
thanks, di!! I admit that with any other couple the stress might seem far-fetched, but I think those two will take some time before they really believe that can step on each other's toes without their world falling apart, you know? But I suspect they'll work it out. :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: August 01, 2007 02:43 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
“He can't fire me,” Toby said to no one in particular.
BWAHA! Man, I can so see Toby saying that! Hilarious!
Great job with the voices - this almost seems plausible!
Author's Response: thanks! I have to admit I'd love to see this much scandal hit the office sometime! :-) Thanks for your review!
Date: August 01, 2007 02:27 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
What's wrong with you? You're turning a delightful little story about nudity for monetary compensation, and turning it into something angsty and dramatic. For shame.
Hee! Kevin!
Author's Response:
LOL - yeah, that human interaction stuff spoils it all the time. People suck.
:-)
9 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 02:22 pm Title: I Want You to Want Me
Ooooo! Tense! Hurry, hurry...I need another chapter...QUICK!!!
Author's Response: I shall try to post another chapter before I leave on vacation this Saturday! Thanks for reading!
Date: July 30, 2007 08:35 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Sorry if I gave you a heart-attack with the wording of my first comment. I just meant that I was already loving the story and then you managed to make it even better. Quite the trick. Heh.
I really like your use of Jim's apparent prudishness. We get bits of that in the show and it just fits perfectly here. Loved the Andy and Dwight exchange. But I'm most looking forward to the Jan ramifications. Yeehaw that's got potential! WHEE!
Author's Response:
thanks - I'm looking forward to Jan's reaction, too!
Date: July 29, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Woah, Moxie, pulling out the big guns. That totally just upped the seriousness factor. I am really excited to see where you take this.
In addition to your always superb Jim and Pam voices, I really enjoyed the other characters here as well: Kelly was hilarious: 'I haven't told my parents, but they don't read Playboy anyway, so who cares, right?' Toby and Jim's conversation was really nice; I love their friendliness and frankness. And Schrute and Bernard! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks - it's always so much harder writing ensemble pieces; I've got Jan and Michael to tackle next chapter!!
Date: July 29, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Creepy Toby is so... so... eager.
Author's Response: How many copies of the issue do you think he'll end up buying??
Date: July 29, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
Aw, I feel for Jim but a part of me still wants Pam to take it all off! I'm sure she'll do the right thing!
Author's Response: It's just a matter if Pam lets the excitement (and all that money) go to her head or not..... thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 12:58 pm Title: Hot Child in the City
Ha! Love the awkward scene with Toby. This is great. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Yeah, I expect we'll see some envious glances from toby headed Jim's way in s4! ;-)
Date: July 29, 2007 09:17 am Title: Hot Child in the City
I'm running out of things to say about your writing...Terrific! Smashing, Fantastic!
Author's Response:
As long as I know you like it, I don't care how repetitive you think you are getting. :-)
Thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 29, 2007 07:00 am Title: Hot Child in the City
Poor Jim. He's trying so hard to be what he considers the "perfect" boyfriend. Apparently he still has a lot to learn about their lack of communication in the past, eh? Great job, Mox.
Author's Response:
Oh yes. He definitely has to learn that being the "perfect" boyfriend is not at all what it's about....
Thanks for the awesome editing skills....!!