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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2007 12:52 pm Title: High School

Jim's best friend was named Drew?  And now that name is tainted for him forever... *sniff*.

Author's Response: Why, what's wrong with the name Drew?

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 08:40 am Title: High School

I think you developed this premise in an interesting fashion.  It could have been very silly, but it looks like it will be interesting to know more about Jim Halpert's past.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you think it has potential!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 04:08 am Title: High School

Aww, Jim.  I have a feeling you're going to get a lot of reviews like that... I like how you're doing the flashbacks, BTW.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you like the flashback approach!

Reviewer: lesslikeyou Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 02:15 am Title: High School

Yeah, Jim!  What about college?  Can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 09:34 pm Title: High School

That's a good description of noncommittal high school dating. Nice job. Totally believable. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot that it's believable!

Reviewer: receptionist Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

hahaha... wait, should I be laughing?  hmmm... poor jim!  but that's sweet... and pretty frickin funny!

Author's Response: Awww, don't laugh at Jim! Hehe. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Had he previously been a woman or something?

A) HAHA!   B) that'd have been a big ass lady.

I can kind of see this...it's dubious, but you're a good writer, so I'm into it anyway :)



Author's Response: hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed that. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 07:40 pm Title: High School

Well, this is certainly an idea I never thought of! I loved the high school story - so sweet. I am waiting to see how you explain how Jim didn't have sex with Karen :-)


Author's Response: Thanks so much! The Karen thing was definitely a challenge, but stay tuned!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 07:29 pm Title: High School

I'm loving this story and can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it! I like that Jim is the inexperienced one in this story! Oh, I can't wait for young Jim!



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad you are writing this, and am really looking foward to hearing Jim's "history." Pam is being such a sweetheart about it too.

Good job so far.  Next chapter?



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I never imagined Pam being aything other than a sweetheart about it. I mean, she's known Jim long enough to not have to wonder if he's still a virgin because he's a weirdo or something. So I just figured she'd be surprised, but curious and accepting.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2007 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm glad you are writing this, and am really looking foward to hearing Jim's "history." Pam is being such a sweetheart about it too.

Good job so far.  Next chapter?

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yougot me interested in this after your question about it on the boards...I definitely agree that it is possible and I'm very anxious to read what you came up with for his reasons!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Cassandra Mulder Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2007 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1

hee! Interesting. I like it.

Actually, if it hadn't been for Karen, I might have wondered about this very thing myself. Jim never had any serious girlfriends post-meeting Pam until her, and we have no idea about before, so it could have been possible.

Good news? I have no right to laugh at him or throw garbage at you. 25 right here. lol Not a guy, but still.

I'll be following this one for sure, and it's good to see a new story by you. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
And me? Same as you- 25yo virgin... though I think it's different with girls. I think you'll find more girls our age than guys who are virgins. Which is why even though I'd totally love this aspect of Jim if it were 'true', I didn't know if people would believe it was possible, with him being a guy and all. So I'm really glad and surprised that people are responding to this story well!
Thanks for reading, and the second chapter should be up soon. Maybe today or tomorrow.

Reviewer: chiquiti Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

No way! And yet... I am compelled to believe you anyway. It's an interesting twist, please hurry and write more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter 2 is almost done!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm going to agree with other comments and say that I find this... very unlikely, but not impossible. In any case, a very interesting and original idea, and I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Mua ha ha ha.  Laughing all the way through at Pam's unease, me knowing full well what was happening.  I wonder how you're going to skirt the Karen issue, but definitely looking forward to the embarrassments of dorky young Jim.  Oh, Young Jim.  There's just so much I need to warn you about, and yet, tragically, I cannot.

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now THIS is an unusual premise!  Most stories have Jim being a master of satisfaction.  I will look for more chapters.  Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: questionforyou Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow... this story is so cute. I agree that while it's improbable, it's definitely not impossible. I can't wait to hear about all of his awkward memories. Aww... poor Jim! Hope it's worth the wait for him!


Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JamGirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for writing this. I love knowing that he and Karen never had sex (at least in this world). I want so badly for this to be true for the show as well. Love it! Can't wait for an update.


Author's Response: Oh, I love the idea that he never had sex with Karen, too. hehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1

"Just get on with it, Halpert!"  truer words were never spoken...  I am so glad you decided to jump in and write this!!!

Looking forward to Jim's deflowering, BTW. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much!
And I'm a bit nervous about the actual "deflowering" chapter. hehe.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the tone of this. Yes, it may be improbable (if only because I can't imagine Karen would have stood for it!), but since you're going to be explaining it, I trust you. And I just adore the loving Pam you've created, who is of course so good to him about it. Can't wait for more (although apparently Jim could!).

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like the time. I was afraid it was getting a little too angsty in the middle, and then went back to being too lighthearted. And of course Pam would handle it well. She totally loves him, so I think she would be comforting towards him about it, and feel kind of special that she gets to be his first.

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

If anyone wants to throw flaming garbage at this I'll lob a used burning diaper at them. I think this is a really sweet idea. so much potential to explore, espescially in the katy/karen arena

Author's Response: Hehehe. Thanks so much! Yeah, I got some really good ideas, with help from others at the MTT boards, about what to do about the Karen situation. :o) Stay tuned.

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1

HAHA this was begging to be written!! I've always had that little thought in the back of my head "what if..." Unlikely? Of course. But I've never actually heard Jim fess up to having sex, so...maybe? Anyway I am looking forward to the rest of this like a kid waiting for Santa.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2007 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1

This is great. I think you're doing a great job with it so far. I am one of the non-believers... but your Jim feels like Jim and I also think his trepidation here felt really real.
Good job. And, I am glad you're doing this! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's so great to hear that my characterization is working!

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