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Reviewer: Hotdog Fingers Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:47 am Title: Toe Socks

Oh, that's hilariously adorable! Great job!

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:31 am Title: Toe Socks

I couldn't possibly love this more.  So perfectly them.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 06:23 am Title: Toe Socks

These little vignettes are absolutely fabulous - hope the OP writers have as much imagination for Jim and Pam together as you do.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 05:45 am Title: Toe Socks

He fidgeted oddly in her arms, "Uh....no...see...you gotta take the socks off first...then...you know. That's when this," he said gesturing between them, "Is fine."

That line just killed me! So funny! Jim's irrational fear of Pam's socks--though they are a little odd, I'll admit--might be the funniest thing I've read in a while. And Pam's solution to the problem? Well, that's just the extra icing on the cake! :) 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 05:41 am Title: Film Critic

Heh....that scene was a little weird. :)

I just love these little vignettes! They're so realistic sounding, as though they're deleted scenes from the show. Excellent! 

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 05:24 am Title: Toe Socks

Creepier than Angela's baby poster, LOL! How do you ALWAYS manage to make these two so adorable and funny and sexy...but never once break character or cross the line into the dreaded cutesy zone?

"Jim...We'll do this together...you don't have to deal with this problem on your own anymore. You have me now."

Fantastic. You always make these scenes so natural, with such believable dialog and without lots of description or 'tellling' - it's just so them that the explaining part goes without saying. Love that. You should see the stupid grin on my face ;-)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 05:06 am Title: Toe Socks

I have to agree with Jim.  Toe socks are annoying.  And actually uncomfortable for those of us who have really little pinky toes.  But this, was definitely not annoying.  Several times over.

Reviewer: Sevian Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2007 01:34 am Title: Toe Socks

Loving this FUN story!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 11:31 pm Title: Film Critic

Wow... these are SO funny! I couldn't stop giggling it is SO cute! Every single one is awesome... I think its my new favourite story! I love it!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Household Pets

Wow. Jim/Pam Dialogue? You have got it DOWN! Awesome job with this chapter. The cat story was hilarious, as was Jim attempting to tell Pam.

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 12:30 pm Title: Old Friends - The Thing That Makes Everyone Happy

Wow. This chapter was really good! Love the way their conversation flows... they're so comfortable with each other!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Domestic God

:)

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Kelly Clarkson

OMG those last few lines... SO CUTE!!! :)

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Pillow Talk

Oh, I just love this.  I laughed so hard.  I can just picture Pam laughing until she cries and Jim trying hard not to laugh with her.  All the chapters are great, but this one had me laughing out loud.

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 10:12 am Title: Film Critic

*giggle snorts*

i thought that scene was weird too. another reason jim and i belong together 

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2007 08:25 am Title: Film Critic

HA! I *totally* had the same reaction as Jim during that scene. They were making out on top of their robot friend! That's *weird*! Clearly Jim and I are meant to be *cough*

Very cute chapter :) 

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 11:40 pm Title: Film Critic

“All I’m saying is it was weird for them to be making out on the hood of a car that was alive seconds before. And equally weird that all the other Autobots were watching…auto voyeurism…"

OMG! Are you me? Because during that scene I actually said "Ew!" out loud, causing several people sitting near me to laugh.

Great Jim/Pam, as always, and I hope the Saab hood sex is on its way. ;) 

 

Reviewer: BaraJam Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 11:30 pm Title: Film Critic

Now that ou mention it...it did make my eyebrows go up to see sam and Makela making out ON Bublebee. 0.0

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2007 10:16 pm Title: Film Critic

haha....can you please get a job on the writer's staff??  I desperately want to see this come September

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 12:28 pm Title: Household Pets

aawww... this gave me warm fuzzies all over! loved every word! 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Pillow Talk

that last joke was very lame. which is exactly why i loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 11:57 am Title: Domestic God

I like that Fancy New Beesely says what she thinks without censor. Yay for her. Can I have a Jim to move in with me?

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2007 11:53 am Title: Kelly Clarkson

*GIGGLESNORT* I'll bet my next paycheck that john krasinski has "Miss Independent" on his iPod. LOVE THIS!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 03:48 am Title: Household Pets

Very sweet - and a great, funny, story!  And yay for continuing the Jonathan mythology!!!  :D

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2007 07:38 pm Title: Pillow Talk

This is great, too!  You are one funny writer!  Not sure how you even think these scenarious up but I love 'em!

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