10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 03:03 pm Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
"And he’s really honestly getting tired of the way subtext tastes on the tip of his tongue."
That's it. Game over. Best single line of JamFic I have read EVAH! My GOD does that capture Jim Halpert!
7 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 02:58 pm Title: Basketball Redux: Saving Big
"They just hold hands and don’t really pay attention to any of the stores."
Oooo. Chills. Love this. Too JAM!
Date: October 19, 2006 02:53 pm Title: The Alliance: Party Hat
"...trapped in one of those moments that they aren’t allowed to be trapped in."
I envy you this phrase. Perfect.
9 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 07:38 am Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
Poor, poor Jim. I couldn't believe Pam in this episode. Oh, well, I'll comfort him! ;-P
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 06:22 am Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
I'm glad you're continuing this. Don't beat yourself up over your Michael - I think you've captured him well.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 05:41 am Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
This precisely captures the tone and substance of that scene - Jim's sad, hopeless, resignation about Pam; how sweetly he wants to reassure Michael of their friendship; his attraction/repulsion about confiding in Michael...just perfect. So poignant. And I think Michael's voice reads loud and clear.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 09:29 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
I was so excited to see that you had updated.
I always love the moments that you create because they feel so true to the characters and the show--like they really could have been moments that the camera just didn't catch.
This one was so gorgeously sad. Loved the way you wrote Jim's thoughts--and you shouldn't worry about the way you write Michael because I could definitely hear him saying the things you wrote in my head.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 07:41 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
This sounds just like Michael - you really got him down:“No, Jim. She isn’t happy. She’s just a big, mopey blob…thing,” he finally says, sticking his tongue out in disgust." I'm so glad you are continuing this - I love these stories!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 07:35 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
Heartbreaking. And beautifully done.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 07:18 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
Maybe she’s sleeping alone in her new apartment with shadows from the window creeping along her skin.
What a lovely image. It's great to read this series again!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 06:12 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
Oh, poor sad Jim. I can totally see this, as the alcohol and the company wear down the facade he's projecting. So honest. I wish you could promise us a happy ending!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 06:07 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
I love your Michael and your Jim. I think they are both spot-on. Poor angsty Jim.
Date: September 29, 2006 05:47 pm Title: The Convention: Cosmos and Mango Stuff
He closes his eyes, falls asleep, and doesn’t dream of her.
A small triumph, eh?
Fantastic, as usual. Couldn't wait to click on this one!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Booze Cruise: Life Preservers
Jim's promise at the end of this chapter physically hurts me.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Casino Night: Something Different
This is definitely one of my favorite moments from your story. It was sweet, sexy, tense, cute...all sort of wonderful things and fits in so well with a buildup to the confession & the kiss.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:31 pm Title: Michael's Birthday: A Long Stoplight
Loved this conversation--Jim's gentle pushing is exactly what Pam needs and you wrote it beautifully. Really liked the way you tied it back into the episode at the end in a way that made perfect sense.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 07:28 pm Title: Dwight's Speech: Curved Bottoms and Koala Bears
I could really see Pam going through this thought process...just wish she would wake up a bit! Great paragraph about her memory of Jim's house.
Date: September 04, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight
This chapter made my skin tingle--loved the subtle sexual tension running throughout the whole conversation and loved the Dwight card.
Date: September 04, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Boys and Girls: Pizza, the Great Equalizer
As with all of your "unseen" moments--I can actually see this one playing out in my head. You stay so true to the show and to the characters but manage to show us an added layer of depth in the Jim & Pam relationship. Just wonderful :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 06:16 pm Title: Casino Night: Something Different
Just him.
You know it, Pam baby.
What a wonderful series. I selfishly hope you continue, but even if you don't- this has been a wonderful journey behind the scenes.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 08:23 am Title: Casino Night: Something Different
It makes me want more. Can't wait for next season.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 07:57 am Title: Casino Night: Something Different
You did a great job with all of these. Your short and sweet approach really works with these types of vignettes, and of course here I loved the idea that Pam wore the dress for Jim. Awhile back, I read a fic wherein Pam blamed the dress for what happened after. This chapter was like a foreword for it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 07:50 am Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight
Valentine's Day made me feel as though something (a little Jim and Pam interaction, perhaps?) was missing, so this completed the episode well.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2006 05:54 am Title: Casino Night: Something Different
I know I've said before but it bears repeating. This was amazing. I adored every single chapter. Every single one rang incredibly true and are now my make believe canon. On to S3!!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2006 11:47 pm Title: Casino Night: Something Different
You know, I lived for this story. Glad you finished it. Now all I have to look forward to is the next seson. Bravo!