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Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2011 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

You do such a great job with their speech patterns and banter. And you're great at the flirting too!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2008 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was awesome :)

Reviewer: Ampay Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2007 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1

LMAO! AH! I LOVE IT! Amazing! You are a God of fanfic... No joke. Wow.. Just.. wow.
Usually in a dialogue only story, i have a hard time following who's speaking, but the way you wrote this? Not a problem- not at all. I knew exactly who was talking at any given time. (Except once, but that was my fault, I must have been distracted by something shiny or something...)
I'm off to go read more... muhaahaa!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1

I love the color blue, but I can't stand blue pens. They annoy me.

Now, I can say the alphabet backwards (no joke, I can), but would never want to do it naked. Well.... maybe if Jim asked, but until that happens, I am sticking with my never.

Such a weird second date - but between those two, I would expect nothing less. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2007 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1

So cute! I love how Jim really notices the *details* about her.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so cute, so them. I loved the S2 bantering, felt just like old times.... and future new times I hope.

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 09:47 am Title: Chapter 1

this reminded me of a discussion i had with a co-worker about how even though all my work stuff is pink, my favorite color is actually blue. except, this discussion was WAAAAY more interesting... ^_^ love!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 09:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved this!  Excellent dialogue--spot on.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1

This is like being a fly on the wall of their 2nd date. So often in fics, their dialogue seems too wordy, or overwritten, to me (the no thought unverbalized syndrome ;-) But this totally captures their flavor - snappy, subtly sexy, witty...with a nice whiff of luurve. Really fun. (And I agree re: 'panties' - it is just one of those queasy words.)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2007 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1

This was great!  Your dialogue was perfectly in character and so snappy.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

OUTSTANDING dialog!  Favorite lines?

I'm not a big fan of panties.

In general?

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute! This feels just like them. I also hate the word 'panties.' 

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