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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2022 03:48 pm Title: Two Scoops

Always love a good Kelly taken seriously fic...

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:49 pm Title: The Vampire Scott

Yay! Halloween!Michael is one of my favorite sides to him! He's all about the kids that day, in the sweetest way. Thanks for the reminder!

Author's Response:

OK - so holy crap - when you review you don't joke around!  I had like 8 new emails!

Thanks so much for reading and letting me know what you think.  I really love this side of Michael.  After S3, I wonder if it's a bit out of character for him, but I truly hope not!  Thanks again for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:48 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain

I like the evocation of Angela's "silky blonde hair". I hadn't thought of it in quite that way. And there's a certain Jane Austen-ish quality about your minister (in a good way) I can't quite put my finger on, but I like him. Poor guy. 

Author's Response: Thanks - I was actually surprised by this one - I originally wanted a choir boy to be the one with a crush on her, but this is how it worked out.  The hair was my starting point for this piece, so I'm glad you picked up on that description. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Drip

Woohoo! Sign me up with the Alzheimer's ladies! I'll be the one with the camera...I love your description of Wet!Jim getting out of the pool, and his totally oblivious take on their interest. *snerk*

Author's Response: I cannot tell a lie.  This one was totally for the treehouse.  100%. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:44 pm Title: Two Scoops

What a poignant little scene. We so rarely get a glimpse of Kelly's more somber side. It's so in character for her to hide that side from the world and instead reveal it in little rituals of remembrance like this. Well done, well done!

Author's Response: Thanks - I'm really glad that you got this - this was the first fic I ever used a beta for because it was so much more about showing Kelly than the ice cream guy. I wanted to make sure it wasn't creepy, and from what people have said here I think it succeeded, which makes me happy.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:41 pm Title: Silver

*sob*  Poor Creed. I had never considered him a sad character, but this was quite convincing!

Author's Response: Thanks.  I love Creed.  I think they make him so outrageous on the show that I wanted to make him more.. human?  Anyways, thanks again for taking the time out to read and review! 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Manure

Ah, the earthiest of love. :) Nicely done.


Author's Response: I wrote about poo.  You read and left a review.  ;) 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Badgered

Whoa! What a great idea! Kelly's sister!  And how nice that you gave us a glimpse of young Ryan, insecure about his braces. This is very original. I liked it.

Author's Response: Yeah - I loved that whole scene in Diwali where they compared him to Zach Braff.  Of course her sisters are going to have a crush on him!  I miss you old Ryan! 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:37 pm Title: Red

Awwwwwww. "See ya Tuesday, beautiful." Awwwww. Love it.


Author's Response: Thanks!  I want Meredith to find a good man who will make her happy.  I think that's more a hope based on my like of Kate instead of Meredith though.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2008 02:36 pm Title: Cross

Cool! A new look at Stanley. I wonder if Kiosk Lady would consider stocking pretzels at her kiosk? She might get to see Stanley a little more often! :) Well done!

Author's Response:

This was the one that started it all.  I think had the 55 words challenge been on my radar when I wrote this then this would have just been a one shot.  I love me some Stanley!  Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain

This was beautifully written. I enjoyed the twist too, at least to me it was a twist as first I thought it was Andy, and then Dwight. But when I realized it was the priest I thought, duh! That's why it's called "unrequited"!



Author's Response: Oh wow - thank you so much!  This chapter was bouncing around in my head since the beginning, I'm so happy you liked the way it came out!  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Drip

This was precious and rather hot, or as hot as a story about old ladies watching dripping. muscular Jim can be. Sigh....

Author's Response: Thanks.  I had so much fun writing it, you have no idea!  I'm so glad that you enjoyed!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 10:38 am Title: Two Scoops

Oh wow. So sad! You give such a different feeling to Kelly's loss of her sister. I always thought it was funny that she thought of her sister's funeral being the saddest funeral ever as an afterthought. This makes it so much more real.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I really wanted to add some depth to Kelly, but still keep her true to the Kelly Kapoor that we all know and love.  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 10:34 am Title: Silver

Wow, this one is so sweet and sad.

Author's Response: Oh thanks!  I really wanted to go for the sweet with Creed.  It's not something we usually associate with him.

Reviewer: hamrensel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Drip

OMG I loved that chapter. That would defintely be me. I wish I could wander around the men's showers.

Author's Response: Thanks - it was a lot of fun to write!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:00 pm Title: Go Tell it on the Mountain

These are all marvelous. Every one a gem.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Drip

Haha, was this the Scranton Community Center or the MTT Boards? Niiiiice. I loved how you held the reveal until the very end! Also the fact that he had a lunch date to get to. Good stuff!

Author's Response: You say tomato, I say tomahto..... :)  This one was DEFINITELY written with the boards in mind!!!!!  I am glad that you enjoyed it though - thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Drip

HAHAHAHAHA! i've been liking this series up till now, but seriously? this is one of the funniest things i've ever read. of course old ladies think Jim is hot!!! i love how you kept us guessing until the Nana Halpert clue :) this is seriously precious and funny and i love the mental image of Jim swimming. and the reference to his date. and now my review is longer than your fic. but i love it. 

Author's Response: Hee - I'm glad that you liked it... I can't help it, I'm only a couple of years older than the boy, but I DO feel like a skeevy old perv some days!  Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Drip

This is such a great series of little moments! That last one really made me laugh.

Author's Response: Cool - I'm glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Drip

Now that was adorable.  Loved it.

Author's Response: :)  I'm glad that you liked it! 

Reviewer: Token Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Two Scoops

What a refreshing series--I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Two Scoops

This was so sad that it truly brought tears to my eyes. It's nice to see another side of Kelly. It's almost as if this profound childhood sadness makes her the loud, outgoing person she is today.  Good job.

Author's Response: Ooooh - don't cry - it's OK.  I love Kelly, she's one of my fav characters - I really just wanted to do something that made us see another side of her.  Thank you very much for taking the time out to read and letting me know your thoughts! 

Reviewer: mamzalini Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2007 11:10 am Title: Silver

Aww.

Author's Response: :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Joni24 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Silver

What a great idea for a story! I love that Creed has a soft side to him. Keep going!!

Author's Response: Oh thanks!  I am glad that you are enjoying it... I am having some fun with some of the other characters..... expect more soon.  Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Silver

This really seemed like something Creed would do - to reach out to someone on some basic level. The last line was such a perfect description of him.



Author's Response:

Aw - thanks.  I'm really glad with the reaction I've been getting to this chapter.  I love Creed and his quirks, but I like to think of him having a whole lot more going on than what we see...

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

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