Date: December 12, 2007 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Outing
ohhhhhh boy. I feel so bad for Jim. stupid Ryan. Binxbaby you rock at life! This is sucha great story with some great development and I can totally picture this being a s4 storyline.... that is if we were having a s4 storyline..... *sigh* Anyways, lovely chapter, again!! can't wait to see more (But I understand, new Harry Potter DVDs definitely come first! :) )
10 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
I love this story. Everyone is so perfectly in character!
9 [Report This]Date: December 12, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 7: The Outing
Binx, how is it that you always know when I've been thinking about this story?! Really fine update! I was wondering how the office would find out about Pam's pregnancy.
Date: December 05, 2007 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 6: Meet the Halperts
Loved the last two chapters! I love them as a couple dealing withall these things thrown at them and how they haven't lost the "them" factor (I don't know that that makes sense)...anyway, you have me desperate for all that is to come...the dr appointments, and baby belly rubbing especially (not so much the fighting, but aslong as baby belly rubbing follows it I think I'll be ok)
More soon!
Date: December 04, 2007 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 6: Meet the Halperts
This story is such a treat. You are certainly entertaining the troops while our beloved Office writers are off to war.
Can't wait for more!
Date: December 04, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: Meet the Halperts
Keep it up! You've got an eager audience right here.
Date: December 04, 2007 10:17 am Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
Excellent writing! I'm really enjoying your story, Please continue! Great Job with Chapter 4!
B
10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
Stories like this are usually so cheesy but this one is a perfect balance of the cheesy and realistic. So basically I love it!
8 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
We. We'll miss you while you're gone today.
wonderful portrayal of the pam+jim perspective on having a baby. it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :)
also, not to be nitpicky, but borneo is in southeast asia. is mark doing his thesis on cultural assimilation in southeast asia?
Date: December 03, 2007 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
this is AMAZING ! it's completely precious :) great job !
Date: December 03, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
Binxbaby! So happy to see an update--and a good one at that. REALLY good. More soon PLEASE???? Will we have the pleasure of meeting the Halperts?
Date: December 03, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions
"Did you cheat on Karen with her?" Or was it like some threesome gone wrong or something?"
LOL! Ohmygod, I'm laughing so hard right now I'm actually crying!
Date: December 03, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: That Swirl means something
I'm pretty sure that if Jim came over to my house, walked in, punched me in the face and left, I would still love him because of things like this: "He was going to have to grow up, replace his Lucky Charms with a box of Corn Flakes, and start implementing curfews."
(I realize he fictional and that I sound psychotic.)
Date: November 28, 2007 11:02 am Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
I'm so so happy that you've updated! This story is perfect -- it's sweet and adorable and wonderful and realistic. Keep those creative juices flowing; I'm so excited to see what happens next!
10 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
All he could think was that she was so beautiful at the moment. He then realized whatever the situation, whatever he had to do; rob, steal, cheat, or take Dwight's client list, he would take care of her.
haha... that that, dwight!
9 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 08:36 am Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
awww! like father, like daughter!
Date: November 21, 2007 07:56 am Title: Chapter 2: Confirmation of some sort would be nice
Oh, I love the babyfic! Continue :).
Date: November 20, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
Aaah I only just found this story today and a few hours later there's a new chapter :)
This was wonderful, very well expressed, so much so that I felt nervous for them at that dinner table.
My favourite part:
Her smile was bright like Pam's, and Jim caught himself doing that thing again, where he willed the baby to possess that trait. She whispered ‘Finally' to him as she hugged him and he closed his eyes and exhaled because it sounded like ‘Welcome Home' and he wanted that to be so true
Ok favourite partS would be more appropriate because I have to add this too:
He looked at Pam sadly in a way to say ‘Name the baby after me if I go missing', and then walked out behind Ron onto the porch.
I can totally imagine that look :)
Just a quick typo I noticed: Her mother, upon meeting Jim, hugged him and he noticed up close she could see was looked very young for her years I guess you changed the sentence around but left in an extra word.
Thanks for a great read!
Date: November 20, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
"He looked at Pam sadly in a way to say ‘Name the baby after me if I go missing', and then walked out behind Ron onto the porch."
Ha!! what a great description! loved it all (especially ron calling roy a douche--ha!!!)
hope these creative juices keep flowing, i love this story
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
Suck it Halpert!! Ha, that must be hereditary. I love this story~!!!!
Date: November 20, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Beasleys
This:
"I haven't asked you correctly yet. So redact that."
made me giggle. And this:
"I have loved her for so long, so deep...I-I honestly don't know if I can do anything else with more conviction."
made me sigh.
Great job so far. Looking foward to more.
Date: November 20, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: That Swirl means something
I am constantly amazed that anyone can make sense of the swirls and blobs on an ultrasound.
And btw, holy carp! Jim hasn't met the parents yet? Great googly moogly he is in for quite the adventure.
Date: November 20, 2007 08:42 am Title: Chapter 3: That Swirl means something
No idea how I missed this but I'm glad I've spotted it now. This story is wonderful, a realistic, honest look at a Jim/Pam pregnancy. You've got the perfect balance between their happiness and their fears. For some reason I can't quite fathom, I adored this line:
Then, if time permitted, he wanted to run up to the roof top and kinda shout it into the universe.
I was so disappointed when I realised I'd caught up and there were no more chapters to read. Can't wait for more :)
Date: November 20, 2007 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
Hey! Welcome back! Funny thing--I was just thinking about this story over the weekend and wondering where it went. Really good chapter. More soon, pretty please?
Date: November 20, 2007 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1: Life Changes
I really like this so far! I like that even though they're in love, it's not all rainbows and puppies. This partwas particularly wonderful:
He was sure there were a few nights where they had just given into the moment and sought out each other, years of denial and distance can do that to you. You just collide, consequences be damned. But now, they were reeling from the results of their actions, the uncertainty of their future...on their 30 minute lunch break.
Nice job, binxbaby! I can't wait to read the rest!