Reviews For Cold Openings
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Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:56 am Title: Dummies

Love this one.  I would love to see that : )

Author's Response: Thanks! You and me both!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:51 am Title: Early

Thanks for writing some fun for Toby - goodness knows he needs it



Author's Response: Doesn't he? Poor Toby....

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:49 am Title: 300

not my favourite of the series but still very well written

Author's Response: : ( I've... failed. Jinx, how can I make it up to you?

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:47 am Title: Wacked

laughing out loud - the best thing about Dwight and what makes him so funny is his earnestness.  you capture that beautifully kgreene

Author's Response: Thanks! Dwight can be tricky... I try to remember that, although he can be a tremendous ass at times, Dwight can actually be a sympathetic, curious person. He's fun to write, though, he really is.

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:43 am Title: Ask Dwight

Love it.  Keep them coming kgreene.

Author's Response: Will do!

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:40 am Title: Dummies

That was awesome kgreene.  Believable as a possible prank/cold open.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 07:30 am Title: Early

YES! it is always sweet to see Toby one-up Michael! i know that's horrible... wait. no. Michael is horrible to Toby, so he totally deserves it. I love Toby, and I'm glad you included him in your wonderful series of Cold Opens :) great chapter!!!



Author's Response: Thanks! Initially, this was gonna be more of just Pam and Toby but I needed to have Toby win. I love his whole deal with Pam, unrequited love is always fascinating, but I needed him to end up on top for a change. Wait... that needs rephrasing... lol... thanks!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 06:49 am Title: Early

HA! These are all so awesome. Are you sure you're not one of the show's writers?!

Author's Response: Oh, please, I would murder to be one of the show's writers. THAT would be perfect. But no, I'm just some guy putting up stories when I'm supposed to be working... See, now, you just went and depressed me... {: (

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 05:19 pm Title: 300

Damn funny. This one actually made me guffaw.

Author's Response: Wow. Guffawing is great! On your personal scale of laughing, what number is guffawing? 6? 7? 8, even? Dare I aim higher?

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 01:55 pm Title: 300

Oh, you captured Jim and Pam at the end there perfectly. I love that a movie with rabid female dingoes excites Michael. Once again, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks again! Only Michael would believe that dingoes could be in 300....lol..

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Wacked

Oh, got to love Dwight's obsession with Harry Potter.

It was hilarious when Dwight called her bambina. Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Ask Dwight

Bwahahahahaaaaa! Really good. I can totally see his expressions as he looks at the camera.

Author's Response: I can imagine that too... I would kill to see it.. or at least seriously maim. Thanks!

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Ask Dwight

Oh dear God, an 'Ask Dwight' box. Genius. My favorite part was the last bit about the Ewoks. I totally love this!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Dummies

Ha! Go Pam! That was a really clever cold opening.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 11:49 am Title: Dummies

These are all very funny. You seem to like tormenting Dwight as much as Jim does. Nicely done!

Author's Response: I do.. I really do... Dwight is such a great target, I just can't help myself. Thanks!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 11:39 am Title: Ask Dwight

ok. i laughed SO HARD after i read this. first of all, german chocolate! ha! i would also like to know how Pam feels about cannibalism. can't you just imagine the look on her face? hehe. and last but not least, i am a giant star wars fan (i know, i know...) and the Ewoks? OH MY GOSH! i seriously laughed and snorted for like 5 minutes. so funny. I am really enjoying this! 

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I faded on Star Wars completely BECAUSE of the Ewoks... you stand on line for two hours and see that and you'll be bitter like me...lol... I'm glad you liked it. That would be quite a brawl, huh? And Pam can eat me anyday... wait. I probably should phrase that a little more delicately... : )

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 11:19 am Title: Wacked

It's funny how every cold open involves Dwight and Jim.  These are, of course, my favorite ones anyway, because they tend to bring the most humor.  I love Dwight's reaction to the method:  "Nice.  Very efficient."  I could totally see him saying that.  

Also:  I enjoy writing humorous stories, and I always think, if you can't make yourself laugh, how are you going to make your readers laugh?  



Author's Response: Yeah, I was thinking of diversifying it a bit and trying to get others involved, not just the main characters. And I do laugh at the dopiness I dream up sometimes.. but I find that people laugh at unexpected things sometimes. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 10:13 am Title: Wacked

haha! wow, i was laughing so hard at these, such clever pranks! :)

Author's Response: Glad I could make you laugh... That's my main focus. Thanks!

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 08:36 am Title: Ask Dwight

haha I love it.  Please post more!


Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have some more up soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 07:33 am Title: Ask Dwight

Really funny!  Love the cage-match image : )

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I would pay good money to see that... lol...

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:54 am Title: Ask Dwight

These were both very funny.  I can only imagine the look of confusion on Dwight's face when Michael walks in on the first one.  And Michael:  "Is that me in there?"  LOL.

The second one is very Dwight, by the way.  I could totally see him doing something like this.  "I'm not ... entirely certain of Pam's views on cannibalism."  Hahahaha.  And Jim's question?  Awesome.   Nice job.



Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I made my own dopey self laugh when I thought of Jim's question....lol..

Reviewer: alucier Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 06:53 am Title: Dummies

Ha these seem totally plausible, spot-on and hilarious! Great job! Keep 'em coming!


Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

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