Date: October 23, 2007 06:05 pm Title: TTYL
This is so so so amazing. I just read the whole thing in one sitting, and I'm horribly depressed there isn't more to read.
And, uh, I'm going to agree with the previous comment that you should just quit your day job and devote all your time to updating this story. I can offer Halloween candy as a payment. Intriguing, no?
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 07:57 am Title: THX
I think that it's quite believable that they won't figure out the truth for a while - mostly because each would find that truth too incredible to believe. But it will be fun when they do! I hope you are having as much fun writing this as I am reading it! :)
Date: October 23, 2007 12:00 am Title: THX
Still amazing!! This is such a unique piece.
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 07:50 pm Title: THX
Absolutely loving this! Hope you post the next chapter soon!
Date: October 22, 2007 07:46 pm Title: TTYL
Im loving this so far! I love how you use Guiding Light names!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 06:52 pm Title: TTYL
Wow. Really gripping story! I like it.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:27 pm Title: THX
I was going to post a comment a couple chapters ago about how much I'm loving this story, but then MTT was all down so I didn't get to.
I was giddy with how much I was loving this story last time, but now you've got me all depressed. I was hopeful that the line "...there are other funny, sweet, smart women out there. He just needs to try to find a way locate one in his real life." (from J/K) meant that he wasn't gonna date Karen, because while Karen's plenty smart and I don't hate her the way some do, I don't think "funny" or "sweet" are words I would use to describe her.
But now you've gone and made him date her and he's all "there's no way JIM would give PAM another chance" and I just...waaah! :(
I want to tell someone how depressed I am about it, like I do with tv shows, but those people are not fanfic readers and will just look at me funny. *sigh*
I also totally have a scene in my head for how Jim and Pam could figure out they're talking to each other. That's right: I'm creating fanfiction fanfiction.
So that's an extremely long way of saying this story rocks. But also I'm sad so can you give me some glimmer of hope please? Also, write, like, three chapters a day, ok? Or maybe ten. Or twelve. WANT MORE.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:21 pm Title: THX
Ok, sorry to be so late in commenting, but you are blowing my mind.
When I started reading, I was worried this would be very similar to "Squirrel", but you have uncovered some new and very different territory with the both of them assuming new identities, and actually discussing the show. I'm pretty sure you are breaking the space-time continuum or some other science fiction principle.
And even pretending to be someone else, it is only natural that they still find each other and connect as nobody else can. (BTW, the story with Cindy is freaking hilarous.)
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 06:16 pm Title: TTYL
Here is my short but extremely heartfelt review: This is my absolute favorite WIP at the moment. I'm always excited to see a new chapter, and always wish for more. I love how you're using the combination of the (short) time delay between events and the show, and the anonymity of the Internet (plus the craziness of some fans) to explore the characters and their relationship. This is just grand, really.
Date: October 22, 2007 05:59 pm Title: THX
Omg i love this story... everytime i hit most recent im so happy to see this story updated so please keep it up.... I know its always annoying when reviewers try to guide the story but i really think it would be awesome if jim found out who pam was but pam didnt know who jim was... it would add a great dynamic and some new story arcs! Keep up the great writing
Date: October 22, 2007 05:15 pm Title: THX
every time i finish reading a chapter i just want to scream at both of them!!!!!! ahhhh! more please!
<3
Date: October 22, 2007 11:25 am Title: EMAIL
This is a really great story - very interesting! Can't wait to see if/how they discover each other out!
Date: October 22, 2007 08:20 am Title: EMAIL
I'm floored at how thought-out this whole thing is...MORE PLEASE!!! ^_______^
Date: October 22, 2007 08:01 am Title: EMAIL
You know what, GodInThisChilis? I am hating you now, because I've just read all these chapters in a row like a little piglet turned loose on a pint of ice cream, and now... there is no "Next" button at the bottom of the page, only "Previous"!! Can you quit your job or something, so you can work on this endlessly and be updating with new chapters every 20 minutes or so?!? I cannot believe how addicted I am to this.
A season THREE STORY, and we're in season 4. And I'm all, hanging on.
Please hurrrrrrrry!
Date: October 22, 2007 07:25 am Title: EMAIL
Aaaahhhh! I'm so sucked into this. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:08 am Title: EMAIL
Love it. love it love it love it
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 05:12 am Title: EMAIL
Oh. My. God. This story KILLS me, but in a good way. Geez, I want them to figure it out already. How long is it going to take? What will it take for them to realize who they're talking to??? Sigh, update and update sooooon. Please?
Date: October 21, 2007 10:49 pm Title: EMAIL
This story is so great - I'm really getting wrapped up in it!
Date: October 21, 2007 10:36 pm Title: EMAIL
Really, really good stuff, Mel - so looking forward to more! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 09:39 pm Title: EMAIL
This just keeps getting better and better. I loved this whole email correspondence and the formatting was fine. I can't wait for the next chapter with some chat room stuff.
Date: October 21, 2007 09:28 pm Title: EMAIL
6. The sun will come up tomorrow.
Poor Jim. That sentence broke my heart.
Ooh interesting. What will Jim say when Pam spills her guts about getting shot done..... intriguing. Hee. :) I love this story. It's so great and I'm truly interested in seeing how it all pans out. Your Jim/Pam friendship is so true. And I love the 'lies i've told pam' e-mails Jim sends to himself as a kind of reminder of everything that he's being doing wrong and whatnot. I wonder how long that list would be if Jim made one in his real.... ficitonal life?
Stopping rambling now to say great chapter and as always, can't wait for more :D It's seriously like a drug addiction.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 10:04 am Title: TTYL
I still love this! Of course if I think about the whole Jim/JIM/Pam/PAM thing, it makes me feel like I need a drink, too! Obviously, they're not going to realize who the other is for awhile, and I like it that way! Also this really stuck out for me:
In a way, he wishes he could be here with her…with Pam. Talking with her (he doesn’t let himself imagine the possibility that in reality she could be a man) online has helped him work through some of his issues with PAM…has made him see that there are other funny, sweet, smart women out there. He just needs to try to find a way locate one in his real life.
Because yeah...too bad it's PAM he's talking to! Hee, I'm hoping the next chapter is in Pam's POV. It is, right?? Please tell me it is! (Gosh, this is long...sorry :-[)
Date: October 18, 2007 06:56 am Title: J/K
i cant wait until they figure out that they've been talking to each other the whole time! update faster! pretty please!?!?!??!
<3
Date: October 18, 2007 04:58 am Title: J/K
I love this. There are no other words...just love.
Date: October 17, 2007 11:28 pm Title: J/K
those two are soooo silly! loving this... and if i think too hard about fake jim and real JIM... i'd probably need a drink too..