Date: January 08, 2008 01:17 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Alie kept on telling me to read this, but I was way behind on my reading. I'm finally up to this date, so I read it. All I can say is "The meta! It burns!"
10 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2007 01:28 pm Title: EMAIL
I'm sure the 300+ reviews have gotten the point across that this story is omgawesome, but here's one more voice for the chorus. Jim's "Subject: Lies I’ve told Pam" emails to himself - too perfect.
Date: November 20, 2007 12:58 pm Title: TTYL
ACK! That was so great, I have been following along as well and when I saw your note abotu the story being complete I actually did squee!!! Fantastic, I'm ready for another story by you!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Let me start by saying I am a horrible person for not reviewing every single chapter. I've been diligently following this story, so excited every time a new chapter was posted. I was completely enthralled and totally willing to follow you wherever you wanted to take me with this story. BTW, can I also ditto your final thank you to the other awesome authors here. IMHO, this story has added you to the rock star category and while I've been a fan of your other work I will for sure be tuning in from now on. I adored How Long so clearly this was not a one time thing. Great job and keep it up!
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Oh of course they went to Subway. Brilliant. Its little details like this that make this story so brilliant.
Thank you for a wonderful read :)
Author's Response: Thanks so very much. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: November 18, 2007 04:45 pm Title: FTW!!
I tried to leave a review here a few days ago but my laptop is dying a sad slow death so I don't think it posted. Apologies if this is a repeat.
I second what Pam said: aa89dpuahdui8hf
And to elaborate on that: lkdngiehr90t4njvk vergg!:fbnh943 :)
Translated from fangirl into english that says something along the lines of: you are amazing.
This was simply brilliant. i love (and I've been meaning to mention this a few times) that you've kept this tied in with the actual show to an extent, using some storylines and variations on the same lines but within your own narrative. I love that this was concluded via the chat as that really is what has brought them together throughout this story.
I adore the metaphor about looking through new lenses. Beautiful and very appropriate.
SO FANTASTIC IT DESERVES CAPSLOCK :)
Date: November 17, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Aw, I love this very apt ending, looking back over everything that got them here and how it might have been different. I also loved the pre-epilogue ending; wonderful, moving use of appropriate Office quotes, British and American.
Date: November 17, 2007 09:21 am Title: FTW!!
I thought I recognized some of her dialogue! Oh wow, I just wanted to say that fell fastly in love with this story from the get-go, and while I'm sad that there's only an epilogue left, I really enjoyed the journey. Love!
Date: November 16, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Thanks for the story!!! I totally registered just to review, I'm glad to hear I wasn't hte only one. Its been an exciting ride! Wonderful story! Can't wait for your next work... there is going to be a next work right? :)
Date: November 16, 2007 04:49 pm Title: TTYL
Thank you for writing such a fantastic story, and wow thanks for updating so quickly! Please write more!!
Date: November 16, 2007 03:40 pm Title: TTYL
I truly loved every single twist and turn of this amazing story. Thank you so much for seeing it through. It was great.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 03:26 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
I really liked how you worked in the chat room in Jim's return from Philly. It was a great melding of the show and this story.
And I would hazard that with over 300 reviews, you are a fanfic rock star too, GITC!!! :-)
Date: November 16, 2007 02:49 pm Title: TTYL
Well this is embarassing. I actually cried when I got to the end of this story. Embarassing, I realize. But, it's just, you ended it SO perfectly, and every single chapter as absolutely been wonderful, and I'm just so sad to see it go now. Thank you thank you thank you! I look forward to more of your work!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 02:35 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Wow.
I already semi-reviewed this on the message boards, but nothing's official until it's official. You did such a wonderful job with this story; I'm ever impressed by your righting. "How Long" was a revelation (I still haven't forgotten that incredible slap or the beautiful imagery of that roof scene), but this was a masterpiece. I loved every word of this story, and I'm already excited for your next story.
For the last time, I say "bravo,: but I'm sure that word will be echoed by hundreds of other readers each time you post a story or chapter on this site. -CH
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 02:05 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
I DEFINITELY think you have more stories like this in you! I love your stories! Take a break, eat some turkey, get inspired and help us all through the WGA strike!
Thanks so much for writing this. It is one of my favorite MTT stories of all time. I really enjoy how you get into so many characters' heads and how interestingly you use the chat & mail formats. Really great stuff.
Date: November 16, 2007 01:12 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
No, thank YOU for writing such an amazing story. I am so sad that I will never see this again in the "Most Recent" column but all good things must come to an end I suppose. Thanks so much for the shout-out, you have no idea what that means to me. You are a brilliant writer and I cannot wait to read more from you (so get crackin' will ya?)
Date: November 16, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
Author's Chapter Notes:
This is it.
...was the saddest thing I've read all day!
Seriously, though, this was a great journey for characters and readers alike! I'll definitely miss it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Squee!!!!!
You're welcome. Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful Pam and Jim story!
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 11:49 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Ah! I loved this so much!
I'm not ready for it to be over!
You should write a sequel...with lots of smut...
Ok I'm getting carried away.
My point is that I loved it and am sad to see it end.
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 11:46 am Title: Squee!!!!!
I can't believe it's over! But great job. I kept expecting a boring ending and I feel like you kept it going just long, and though you kept with the story of the show I kept being thrown for a loop! Which means you're brilliant, basically. Great job and I hope to see more great fics from you in the future!
Date: November 16, 2007 11:19 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Oh yeah! I loved this story, but I am glad it is over because I was seriously on the verge of getting fired from checking mtt every hour or so to see if you updated. Thanks.
Date: November 16, 2007 11:11 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Subway!! YES!! Particularly awesome because the 'famous' Cugino's is actually more of a sub shop.
And double hooray for Jim & Pam trying out the cybersex for real. Guh.
I was worried that after "Squirrel" another story with Pam & Jim taking on assumed identities in a chat room wouldn't have anything new to tell, but you really made it your own, with the added dimension of the 'observer effect' and the interaction with the documentary crew and your alternate universe approach to the storyline we've already seen.
Nicely done, Mel. Can you write us some ping-pong smut next?
10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2007 10:50 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Did it really ahve to end!?
Aww! I lovedd this! What the hell will I do in the mornings to make me late for college!? :P
It is such a brilliant fic, and I really do hope you have it in you to make another one!
Speaking about the fic - it ended brilliantly. I don't think I had enough time this morning to review on the JimPam getting togetherness - but it was really really great! I loved how it was kinda off screen right at the end. So nice. So great.
And also, first date at Subway? Genius. :P
Brilliant fic.. I could go on forever.. :P Just know that you'd made a girl in England very happy with this fic. And also, really sad it's ended. :P
Date: November 16, 2007 10:08 am Title: Squee!!!!!
A-mazing. Your story was fantastic!
I really hope you keep writing! Youre so great at it!
Date: November 16, 2007 09:53 am Title: Squee!!!!!
Lovely ending! Thanks for sharing this with us!