9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 06:56 pm Title: Jungle Fever
LOL I can see Angela just all whatever, and driving away as Pam is still saying goodbye.
Loved it :)
8 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Chez Miff
lol that was really cute, I can see Jim being all dorky like that, and with a totally serious look on his face aw!
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2008 09:39 pm Title: The Fight
I love how you turned an inanimate (sp?) object into a wonderful story. Well done! =]
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2008 09:34 pm Title: The Purple People
Love the prank idea! It seems like something that could happen on the actual show. =]
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Cleaning Up
"Okay first of all, this is not the look I would give you if I'd found porn in your fridge,"
That made me laugh so much my stomach felt like a steamroller had just gone over it. :D
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you liked it! Although, I've heard some nasty stories about those steamrollers, so I'd be careful if I were you.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Jungle Fever
"No, Dwight. I'm pretty sure I can handle three ladies at once." Michael said, raising his brows at Jim.
That was such a "That's what she said" moment! I know that Michael implied it with the eyebrow raise, but I found my self a wee dissapointed. ;)
But on a more serious note, this is really cute. Can't wait to read on, which I am doing right after I finish typing, so I won't have that long to wait...
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint. ;)
I'm really glad you're liking this, though. I love it when someone leaves reviews for older stories because it's great to hear that someone's still enjoying it. Anyway, if you're looking for cute, you found a good story. Happy reading!
Date: May 23, 2008 08:58 pm Title: Chez Miff
No grammar/spelling errors. I would have seen. ;)
Loving it so far! Reading on...
Date: January 23, 2008 03:09 pm Title: Jungle Fever
Okay, so I am only really reading this chapter, because last night I kept thinking about it and thinking about it. I couldn't get this chapter out of my head. So I just had to read it!
I love Creepy Michael! Just... so funny!
Rhymes with Halpert - Dalpert, Balpert, Kalpert, Zalpert. Yeah, nothing really.
Ya know, I do think that Michael enjoys being able to blame someone else with the parties are lame. "happy birthday jesus, sorry your partys so lame"
I love reading that time where Jim has is eyes closed and Pam is putting the presents in his hands. Makes me hold my breath with excitment. So good.
I love how you took my little suggestions and turned them into this amazing story!
This is soooooooo great. I love love love love love it. Just so you know. And now that I've read it and gotten it out of my system I can move on to more important things - like eating dinner.
Date: October 30, 2007 02:48 pm Title: The Fight
Awww, grape soda fight! Well I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And I'm really impressed that you spelled thoroughly right. For some reason I have serious issues with that and the words unfortunate, and occasionally. Anyway, thanks for the review!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 10:41 am Title: The Fight
very sweet ending! and middle, and beginning! lol. i'll never look at grape soda the same way again ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing it, and I'm with you on the grape soda thing. There are certain things in my life (grape soda, Herr's chips, Sun Chips, pretzels, grilled cheese sandwiches, etc.) that will forever be associated with The Office. Which only makes me like them more. ;)
Date: October 30, 2007 07:45 am Title: The Fight
i'm sad its over, but i really enjoyed it !
it was so cute and just like them!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really enjoyed all of your reviews! And hearing that it's just like them is pretty much the best compliment you could get, so thanks for that!
Date: October 24, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chez Miff
Azlin, this was really lovely. Nice work! I laughed when I saw your end comments for the first chapter about noticing grammar errors. You should know from beta-ing my stuff that I wouldn't dare comment on that! ha ha
Author's Response: Yeah, but even the best of betas can miss mistakes in their own stuff. And I'm certainly not the best of betas. ;) I'm really glad you liked it though!
Date: October 24, 2007 09:25 am Title: The Purple People
HAH! What a perfect prank! And finally, the mysterious Larissa Halpert alluded to back in The Fight. Well done -- I enjoyed this a lot.
Author's Response: Larissa intrigues me because it seems like such a young name, so I immediately assumed she was Jim's sister. But then we know from Safety Training that Jim's parents are still around Scranton somewhere, so I have no idea why he would use his sister as his emergency contact instead of his parents. Whatever. The point is, I still think Larissa is his sister, just because I say so. Plus I love the idea of Jim as the big brother taking care of his little sister. :)
Date: October 24, 2007 09:19 am Title: Evolution
"Getting settled. That was a good way to put it. He was settling down his brain, his nerves, his heart." -- great line.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Those are the kind of lines that seem to sneak into even my fluffiest stories, and I sometimes wonder if they're too out of place, so it's great to hear that you liked it.
9 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 06:57 am Title: The Purple People
Loved it : )
Author's Response: Thank you! ;)
Date: October 24, 2007 04:22 am Title: The Purple People
i love ittt (: this is hilarious. i could really see this happening on the show. you are an amazing writerr (: keep it up !
Author's Response: Aw, that's such a sweet thing to say! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for your reviews, they're a really big deal to authors. Seriously. Reviewers like you are the best! :)
Date: October 24, 2007 12:16 am Title: The Purple People
That was so awesome! Great prank and great Jim/Pam stuff too ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I came up with this prank idea awhile ago and then I wasn't sure if I could pull it off, so I'm glad to see it worked for you!
Date: October 19, 2007 09:28 am Title: Cleaning Up
Aww! Nice one, Azlin! I especially like this sentence: "The fact that Pam, of all people, had thought she needed to come up with something like this just to get his attention, was just wrong"
And it's funny, but when Jim found something, I had no idea what he found until Pam said soda. So as I read a chapter, I'm not thinking "where's the grape soda reference going to come in"? I think that's a good thing; I don't even remember that grape soda will come in somewhere. ;)
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm glad to hear that you didn't suspect grape soda. That was the whole idea! I love these later chapters because it was so fun to write them together. I didn't think I'd have anything left to say since I've spent so many months writing them apart, but it turned out to be even more fun than my earlier stories! Apparently I'm a sucker for happy endings, and happy middles, and happy beginnings! ;)
Date: October 19, 2007 09:23 am Title: Evolution
Wow, I think this is my favorite chapter of all. For me, you turned around the angst-fest of the Merger, by putting it in Jim's perspective at the time, and surrounding it with the "now".
Author's Response: You know it's funny, I hated Jim in this scene the first time I saw it because I just thought he was being so stupid, but the more I watched it, the more I became intrigued by trying to figure out what would make him act that way. So I think that's what inspired this version of the scene.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Cleaning Up
this chapter was so sweet! like grape soda, har har har
seriously though, well done! can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yep. Super-sweetness is always on the menu around here! I just hope it wasn't too sweet for you, because if so you might want to skip the rest of the story. It's like sugar over-load!
Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Cleaning Up
I love this chapter so much. It's so touching. It really made me smile. I always look forward to your work, Azlin.
Author's Response: Aw! That's such a sweet thing to say! Thank you so much! I'm glad I could provide smiles. And your reviews make me smile, so smiles all around! :D
Date: October 14, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Evolution
Oh Jim, there's nothing wrong with grape soda :)
Another cute chapter- thanks for the dedication!
GS
xxx
Author's Response: Yeah, good thing he figured that out, huh? I'm glad you liked this chapter, but if you're looking for cute, try the next three! Turns out happy!Jam is even more fun to write now that it's canon and not just fanon!
Date: October 14, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Jungle Fever
" For some reason, with his eyes closed like this, it was easy to pretend that something else was about to happen. Like instead of putting something in his hands, she was about to put her own arms around him, or kiss him or something. "
I loved this thought, the whole chapter made me feel all woozy right along with them. I'm so glad we have Canon Jam! I'm very much looking forward to the rest...
Author's Response: Thanks, McGigi! I really liked that scene too. Woozy is a fun feeling sometimes, especially when there's finally canon to back up that feeling. ;) Thanks for your support over at TwoP too! You're the best!
Date: October 13, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Partners in Crime
Azlin,
I am totally in love with this story. Love how they managed their escape with the assistance of Dwight.
So now we go into the bottled water phase for awhile? Ok, I'll accept it for a bit, only because we're into S4 now.
Author's Response: Thanks, EH! Dwight does come in handy sometimes, doesn't he? And don't worry, the bottled water phase only lasts for a chapter. Did that give too much away? Oh well.
Date: October 13, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Chez Miff
It's like a screenplay...starring myself... :)
Angst is good by me :)
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hahaha! I'll let you do the matching illustrations. How good are you at drawing soda cans? Enjoy chapter 4 it's all yours!