Date: November 08, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
sholva> Who's Pam??
I love that. LMAO!
Date: November 07, 2007 08:37 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Delving into the world of the other chatters wasn't confusing at all. In fact, I really enjoyed this technique. It gave a fullness to the story and to the task. The parallels to Leikha life and Jim's were really illustrative. I think you're on to something here!
Date: November 06, 2007 11:03 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
That was awesome and such a funny ending.
I really enjoyed learning about Leikha and am looking forward to learning more about the other chatters.
And, again, how you intertwined the show into the story was flawless. Just really perfect.
Date: November 06, 2007 07:45 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
haha i love that in jim's distress at the end he calls her Pam! I really loved getting to learn more about the other people in the chat, and seeing how Jim and Pam have inspired Leikha to continue pursuing her dreams. I like the kind of flashback feel, and the task was, of course, preciously awesome! I can't wait to see what you have in store for/with Dwight!!!
Author's Response: I was worried the task might have seemed a bit lame, but it just tied in too well with why in the world they might have gone up to the roof that night. Thanks for the review - they really do encourage me to continue. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
This is so much fun! I love that you are delving into the lives of other characters.
Can't wait for more!
Date: November 05, 2007 07:12 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Nice tie in with the actual show!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so, bebitched! Thanks for reviewing. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Also, forgot to say I really like going into the worlds of the other chatters. Very cool.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was hoping people wouldn't mind reading about some characters that *aren't* really in the Office Universe....
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
HA! Most hilarious last line of a chapter EVER. Hee hee!
Author's Response: Wow - thanks!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I love the seamless way this fits into season 4. I am really excited to see a little more into the minds of the other chatters and their true take on the route Jim took as Squirrel McPants. Also, awesome ending. Fantastic job, as always!
Author's Response: Thanks - keeping in sync with season 4 has been both helpful and challenging! I just hope the writer's strike ends soon, or poor Squirrel will be left in limbo as well! Thanks for the review, WIL!
Date: November 05, 2007 09:57 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
ohh mannn! I love this story! I love all your stories, but I just love Squirrel McPants.. And I dont even want to know what the Dwight task is, haha.. Confronting him in the stairwell and telling him all about his love for Pam? maybe?
Author's Response: thanks for the review, AvilaGrace - glad you like it! Dwight's task will be Jim's hardest to date, that's for sure.....
Date: November 05, 2007 08:23 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Aww, I really liked learning more about Leikha/Lydia and I think it's a great idea to explore the lives of the other chatters. You're doing a great job fitting this story into the events of season four! It feels really natural. And "Who's Pam" at the end - LOL. Great stuff, as usual! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, sudzy! Having it fit in naturally with Season 4 has been the challenge - but it's made it fun! I'm so glad you think it's working.
RE: "Who's Pam?" - I couldn't resist! (Though I promise sholva is NOT Creed!!) ;-)
Date: November 05, 2007 08:08 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Amazing, Mox, as always! ;) I love that you're getting into the lives of the other chatters because I think we've all become so attached to these people that its really fun to have you fill in all the little details.
And I love that Dwight is a task. Totally fits with the current Jim/Pam/Dwight storyline. And the continuation of that scene on the roof was just genius. Basically this whole chapter was awesome, and I really hope Leikha gets everything she's been dreaming about. I'm kind of in her shoes a little bit these days, and it's really hard to go after what you want at the expense of practical things like money, and parental approval, but I guess it's something that everyone needs to do at some point in their lives, right?
Okay, sorry for the epistle! Thanks for an incredibly cool chapter! ;)
Author's Response: Epistle away, Azlin - I love to hear what you think about the story. :-) Thanks for taking the time to comment!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:59 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Funny and fantastic as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! I especially liked the ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words, abs294! I'm so glad you have enjoyed it thus far. :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 06:21 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Wow. Just wow. I love how you've constructed the backstory for Lydia/Leikha and how it relates to Jim 'balls of titanium'. And how Jim gave her an unknowing nudge to go after her dreams.
Also loved how you tied it into the episode and my mind is racing at the foreshadowing to Money & Local Ad. Nice job, Mox!
Author's Response:
Ah, Money... shall I tackle the tale of the pushed-together beds? ;-)
So glad you liked it, Lisa - you know I love praise from you!! :-D
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 06:11 am Title: The face of all the world is changed, I think
Moxie, I so enjoyed that! So great to delve into the other personalities. I have in my head what I envision the other chatters to be like, and it will be fun to see if I'm right. Very cool. Great job at tying in the story line, also.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan - you'll have to let me know if my image of the other characters matches up with yours! Thanks for reviewing, as always!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 04:33 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
I love the new approach on this one! Showing how Jim's decision had an impact on others, very cool. And your tale on the rooftop scene was so sweet! All in all, amazing chapter! Oh, and perfect ending line: "Who's Pam??" haha, love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, ISB - I was playing with the roof scene for a little bit, making sure it flowed believably from the snippet we saw on the screen. I'm so glad you thought it worked! :-)
Date: November 05, 2007 03:33 am Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
Aww...so that's why we got the Rooftop Redux, it was part of a task. So sweet. I love how we're learning about the other chatters too.
I don't know how you're doing this Mox, and NaNo too, and all the rest of the stuff in your life. You're really amazing!
Author's Response:
Yeah, don't you like how I make it look like the show is bending to *my* version of Jam reality?? :-) (And don't tell anyone but I haven't done squat with NaNo yet - looks like a few longs nights for me this month!!)
Thanks for the review, dear - I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: November 04, 2007 11:59 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
love this story.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 11:47 pm Title: Say over again, and yet once over again
You are awesome. And fantastic. And need to update this more often.
Author's Response: I shall do my best, HM! I do have NaNoWriMo this month, but my heart is never far from Squirrel. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: October 31, 2007 10:59 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
I am SO happy you are writing a sequel for Squirrel McPants. I loved the first one so much and I remember when I finished it wishing that you had continued so we could see what Jim's tasks would be and what the reactions of the chatters would be. I'm excited to read this as you write it. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, MoraDae - I appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters!
Date: October 25, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
This is so great!! I can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much - I'll try to get chapter 3 up asap! Thanks for taking the time to review - it means a lot!
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
YES YES YES YES! So glad you're writing a sequel!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! And I love your username! :D
Date: October 22, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
And a surprise to us the readers, too! Grrrr...
Nice segue into and out of the actual events of the episode. Totally unnoticable if you had missed that one.
Author's Response:
Totally unnoticable if you had missed that one.
Awesome - then I did my job right!! Chapter 3 coming soon.... thanks for reviewing, belsum!!
Date: October 21, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
oooooh. what could it be? I'm on the edge of my seat!!!
Author's Response:
All I can say is that it involves 100 pounds of dark chocolate......and a slingshot. ;-)
Thanks for reviewing, Jecks!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Yet, love, mere love, is beautiful indeed
I can't wait to see what the surprise is going to be! Nice job on incorporating the conversation about Dwangela into a larger convo on secrets. And, lunch for a year?! Jim is gonna need some tasks that end sooner than that or Pam is gonna have him worn out. Year long tasks do suggest that the relationship will be a long one, though :)
Author's Response: thank you for the review!! I have a feeling Jim will end up with a whole variety of tasks to keep him busy.....