1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2022 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unconventional, but so thrilling! Thank you for posting this.
Date: February 25, 2008 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Told you I would be reading more. Plus, I planned ahead. I knew I wouldn't have internet access, so I purposely bookmarked some as offline webpages.
Hmm.... should be interesting. Normally a lot of 'bad' words makes me go all icky, but really, I was told I needed to read your stories. And this was an easy one chapter one to bookmark, so there. :)
Really, its so hard to go back once you put it all out there. My (painfully) similar experience, when we finally did talk, we only talked about measles. Measles and CPR. I mean, we went from being friends to talking about measles.
My potty mouth consists of words like shizzle and crap monkey. But, if I am upset or angry, yeah. I can curse. I remember one time I was really sick and upset and I had lost my keys and I posted an LJ entry, and like every other word was the f word.
So I think the point of that paragraph was saying that even though I can get all icky with curse words, this is at least somewhat natural. Not like the stories were it just happens because the authors likes to throw bad words in, but it works in the context of Jim being angry
HE'S KISSING JAN! Or really, JAN IS KISSING HIM!
Whoa.
Just whoa.
Date: October 25, 2006 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, ouch! Very believable anger. I kinda wanted them to get a room actually and really go at it ... I mean it's wrong but it probably feels so right ...
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is it wrong that all I could think of was that Jim was such a gentleman for protecting Jan's head from the wall?
Author's Response: ha - No, that's just what I was going for! Well, that and coming up with a reason for him to be bleeding at the end without it getting too S & M-ish. :o) I'm glad you mentioned that!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This was powerful and erotic and raw and sad. In good ways! I hope this isn't the last we see of this Jim...maybe some angry, cathartic sex with Pam is just what they need to break out of their rut.
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Um. Ouch. Very powerful, but still. Ouch.
Date: August 25, 2006 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, OUCH! I think we all agree that we can't get enough of angry/drunk/broken Jim. Why does his pain bring us such pleasure!? Loved this, by the way!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I like Angry, rough Jim more than I should. Embrace the anger, Jim! Good fic, as usual!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This was powerful. You write a very believable drunk and angry (and hurt) Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This makes my heart hurt. It is very good.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
“Yeah.” He’d said, his eyes closing for a second. “I am.”
Ack! Poor angry, broken Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, god. It's so sad. My favorite part was probably Jim putting his hand behind her head so it didn't hit the wall. Even completely destroyed, it's such a Jim thing to do. The bitter part of me wishes that Pam had seen this so that she could hurt as badly as him.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm still overjoyed this challenge wasn't for Pam and Dwight.
But good golly. AngryJim is fucking hot.
Date: August 24, 2006 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Who doesn't love angry Jim? Good job!
But do you feel a little dirty now? Do ya?
Author's Response:
Hanging my head in shame....yes, yes I do.
But it was kinda worth it. (I'm picturing Michael - a la "Sexual Harrassment" busting out a "TWSS!" in response to Jim's teases, then blowing a kiss at everyone while Jan drags him into his office.)
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Yii-icks! I'll say this works! Way to rise to the challenge, girl7!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1
is it weird that i kind of love angry, drunk jim?? loved how you made the anger more believable with the setup at the beginning.
9 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't help, but like Angry Jim. Casino Night was his breaking point in many ways. This story is really raw, but works for me.
8 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Rock on. I fucking LOVE angry Jim!
Author's Response: I kinda do, too. And hey -- thank you for the inspiration, by the way!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Not much for the pairing myself but that was really good. The anger shows through nicely and the last bit works really well.
Author's Response: Yeah, me neither. But thanks for the feedback!