Reviews For A Long Day
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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 09:00 pm Title: No Service

HA! you chose moses taylor hospital too! that's the hospital i'm using in my babyfic. ("it's too soon")

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 08:58 pm Title: Payback

okay, i know toby has a thing for pam, but toby would NEVER do that. he's not actually MEAN.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 08:54 pm Title: The Last Day

..... why a scheduled c-section?

i know, not much of a review, but seriously. why?

Reviewer: chipper Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2009 02:04 pm Title: Anonymous

AHHHHHH!!!! I have to know what happens next! Every cliffhanger I shake my fist!

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 06:46 pm Title: Anonymous

OMG!!!!
So intense!!!

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 06:42 pm Title: No Idea

It really is so good!

"probably banned from seeing your daughter because you sold crack to her friends or something" is my favorite line!

great work!

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 06:39 pm Title: The Last Day

YAY!
I love it so far and seriously can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cheezy316 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Anonymous

Are you gonna finish this one? I would love to read more!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2008 08:41 pm Title: Anonymous

Any updates soon that we can look forward to?

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 12:30 pm Title: Anonymous

OMG you are so mean. I love it! Update soon please :)

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 11:06 am Title: Anonymous

I like the description of the ambulance as a shaky room.

Reviewer: 09imagine09 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 09:30 am Title: Anonymous

omg, please update soon! I need to know how this ends!! He has to get there in time!!! Great job :D

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 02:13 pm Title: Crash, Bang, Boom

Gah!  They're gonna end up at the same hospital one way or another...

Lovely portrayal of Roy.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 07:03 am Title: Crash, Bang, Boom

oh wow...can't wait to find out what happened...but jim has to get there!!

Reviewer: nepats2oo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2008 03:53 pm Title: Crash, Bang, Boom

That's horrible! How the hell is Jim gonna get to the hospital now? He cannot, and I repeat,cannot miss the birth of the JAM baby.

Torture with these cliffhangers I tell you, torture!

Author's Response: It's all part of the plan *laughs maniacally*. Thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: nepats2oo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2008 06:31 am Title: Alone

Please continue ASAP!!!! I can't wait too see how this car ride with Roy is going to turn out.

Reviewer: nepats2oo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26, 2008 07:29 am Title: No Service

I'm excited for more of this. And kinda sorta pissed at Toby. Come on, Tob, Pam's having Jim's baby and Jim's missing it? Booo. But good that his guilt finally won over.

Loved it! Excited for more!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25, 2008 09:17 am Title: No Service

oh my gosh...so good...can't wait fore more!!

Reviewer: overreaction Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2007 05:46 pm Title: The Last Day

can you please finish?? :)

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2007 10:57 am Title: Payback

Oooh, Evil Toby!  Nice.  Looking forward to where you take this.  :-)

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2007 10:49 am Title: No Idea

Oh dear lord.  I really like the split shower idea and Michael's desperate attempt to keep things fun.

Did you use a beta for this story?  They can really help you clean up minor spelling and grammar issues and other typos.  I'd be happy to assist if you need one.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2007 10:42 am Title: The Last Day

HA!  I love the Pam/Michael relationship.  And the fact that Jim would actually take Dwight's cock-eyed advice is spot on.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2007 03:20 pm Title: No Idea

oh my gosh that is awful! do you really think Toby would be that evil? ouch.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2007 06:03 am Title: Payback

Wow I can't see Toby being that malicious. Well...maybe.

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Payback

That dick... I mean... what?

Great job so far, keep it up!

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