1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2023 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Laughter is a beautiful sound, huh?
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2023 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww Jim want to be home. In Scranton. With Pam.
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2023 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww so beautiful. Their hug is so sweet. And Jim finally got to hear Pam laugh.
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2021 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Jim being grumpy about her Sudoku record even as they have their third first kiss is a really nice and funny touch.
Author's Response: Listen. You weren't supposed to find this one. This was the one I wrote as a wee teenager instead of paying attention in my math class. But I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! Hahaha
1 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2021 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
"She started to see the facial expressions coming from him that had been absent the last few months. She still remembered the names she had given to each one of them."
Oooooof. That's lovely.
1 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2020 10:57 am Title: Chapter 3
I LOVED THIS. So, so sweet and well written and just good. I loved them sitting on the tracks and getting to share their first kiss with somewhere Pam loved so much. And him just thinking about her sodoku record made me laugh. I loved this so much.
1 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2020 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I *love* the detail of the reference to Booze Cruise. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
9 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2016 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha. That comment from Jim was ... perfect.
Date: November 05, 2007 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Excellent. And I'm glad you've written 3 chapters. The best things come in threes, right? :)
Date: November 05, 2007 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I completely agree with your hug decision. It perfectly illustrates their need for each other--as friends first and foremost, and then as something more. Excellent choice!
8 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was perfect. Fluff is great for their first date. The end of chapter 2 was particularly great with them calling each other by their last names. Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: Thank you! It just seemed like them to use each other's last names. I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Phantasic!! I loveee this story too much for words. It makes me feel warm & fuzy & wish I was Pam. Pam + Jim + railroad tracks (+rainbow scarf?) = perfection. Seriously, you have talent & skills, my dear. Use them wisely...and get a new notebook!!! I'm looking forward to the next one =)
Author's Response: Oh, he's definitely wearing the rainbow scarf...hahaha
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, this was really beautiful! I hope to read more from you soon!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
ok when he grabbed her hand in the car...I definitely swooned. *sigh* I just smiled the whole way through. *sniff* My heart is very full.
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
woo!!! this is awesome & lovely!! I can't believe this is your first one! definitely no phail, ANGST or anything of the sort =) I'm weird...but you already know that. <3
Date: October 18, 2007 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice job.
Date: October 17, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
“I don't want a new life, Pam. My life is here, in Scranton, sitting across from me right now.”
Pam's not the only one a little teary-eyed after that sentence. :)
What a great job you did with this story! I feel as if we got a little bit filled in between "The Job" and "Fun Run" with this first date fic. I hope you write more because I will certainly read. Thanks!
Date: October 17, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love it !
really. (: is there more ?!
Date: October 17, 2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This was lovely. A very sweet take on what we didn't see. Your characterization is really good. If this is your first attempt it's proof that you should keep writing. :)
Date: October 17, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the hug. It doesn't overdo it too soon. It's tentative, but it's also warm and familiar. It's very Jim and Pam.
Good job! Keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet. Good job!
Date: October 17, 2007 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Hug is definitely more appropriate for this scenario. Can't wait to read more
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this story was perfect! And the hug with the kiss on the head was definately the right choice! I think you need to continue this into a full first date fic! please? lol
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1
be gentle?!? OMG that was so great. UGH. I definitely got butterflies in my stomach at the end. So cute with them hugging because it just perfectly said something, idk, that they had made it through something without even needing to say it. The hug was PERFECT. Excellent job, great first fic ;-) Also, you didn't mark the complete button I see...does that mean there's more on the way??