1 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2023 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will be using this for my headcanon of Jim Halpert! The kis between Jim and Pam in 'Money' is my favourite scene in that episode by far, and you just brought out even stronger nuances and independent ideas about Jim's feelings. Great piece!
Date: October 24, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, Ihave been saying love a lot in my reviews today, but its all true, cause I love this. I love that Jim hadn't brougt it up, you really captured his thoughts of that process, and I love that you didn't have them talk it out, about what had changed, but that something had changed, and that they will talk someday, but right now, its, enough. gah! so good!
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, god. This story. How do you manage to fit so much emotion into 649 words?
The amount of what he had been holding back, however, shocked him, and as he left Dwight that afternoon, he felt like he had been struck physically by the weight of it all.
This is my favorite line -- the look on Jim's face when he left the stairwell was so raw and you could see how much he had suffered through. That kind of longing for someone, especially when it's (in your eyes) unrequited really can take its toll.
This was beautiful and breathtaking and I am so glad you wrote it. You pack quite the punch there. :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love it so much I'm speechless. Sorry, that's about all I can muster for a review. just... GAAAAH.
Date: October 19, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
He still hasn’t told her much about the months he spent in Stamford, trying to wring love from companionship and staring at the autumn ocean so long even green eyes looked grey. That is so remarkably beautiful. Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful, traceace. I keep coming back to it because it's such a good read. You really captured the mood of those last scenes from "Money." Great job.
Date: October 19, 2007 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1
SO GOOD.