1 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2018 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
So good! One of my favorite episodes and love the picture you paint here.
Date: October 27, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! I love the ending.
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
and MY heart aches with the promise of another story from you... and quickly!
Date: October 23, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sheer brilliance.
Author's Response: wow! thanks so much.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
You didn’t care that all feeling in your feet would be gone by morning, you couldn’t remember a time that you were happier.
Awwwwwwwwww, Jim. So sweet. Such a cute reminder of big, gangly Jim in those little (not traditional size!) beds with the homemade mattresses. And I loved the idea of Jim thinking ahead to kids and his future with Pam. So, sweet. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: Poor Jim, I'd imagine he doesn't "conform to the traditional mattress" size... hey, all the more reason to push the beds together! More surface area, right? ;) I think we always knew that Jim would be an amazing boyfriend it's nice that we're finally getting to see that on screen. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: October 22, 2007 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
So sweet! I liked it a bunch!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: October 21, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Such an awesome mix of their humor and passion for one another! I was wanting a great missing scene and this is just the ticket!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the comment! (I'm glad you found some parts funny, too) ;)
8 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just loved the scene of them cuddling in bed while Dwight read to them. Thanks for showing us the steamy hotness that followed!
Author's Response: That scene was so natural and lovely. (except for Mose, ha ha!) ;) I had fun writing about what might have followed. Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: October 21, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful!
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Date: October 21, 2007 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
So nice, so sexy. My favorite part of the story is that Jim is gathering all these memories for the future, which he can now so easily envision with Pam. Great job.
Author's Response: I'd like to think that he is cataloging all this stuff for future reference... glad you enjoyed it.
9 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW. Loved it. Jim and Pam are so lucky. So nice to read about and see true love.
Author's Response: they really are. after all this time, it's a relief to see them finally be happy. I'm glad I could help flesh out that story a little bit. thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
love love love this story! thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: yay!thanks for the sweet comment! :)
7 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
well this is just lovely! i like the POV you chose, i think it allowed for a dreamy, sweet kind of story. thank you!
Author's Response: thanks so much! this is the first time I've done a second person story so I was a little nervous about posting it, but it seemed to work okay from Jim's POV... thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: October 20, 2007 05:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story. It was steamy and funny and charming all at once.
Oh, and any story that even hints at the possibility of JAM babies is high on my list.
Author's Response: i'm glad you enjoyed! thank you so much :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1
So good. Really lovely.
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: October 20, 2007 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so good! I was also reminded of kids when Pam said, "Your turn" so I'm really glad you used that as an inspiration. It worked very well. Unusual getaway but they made the most of it. ;)
Author's Response: Who knew that the beet farm could be so romantic? Thanks for the review! :)
Date: October 19, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
When I heard Pam say "your turn" I totally thought of Jam babies and it filled my heart with love and joy...
as did this story
*sigh* I love those two crazy kids
Author's Response: *sigh* me too... thanks for reading/reviewing!!!!! :D
8 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I usually avoid stories written in the second person but this really drew me in. Probably because 'Money' really demonstrated just how much Jim loves Pam, how much he has been aching for her, and your story mirrors that very well. I loved this!
Author's Response: This was my first 2nd person story as well, I just really wanted to get inside Jim's head for a while. He had a real breakthrough/honest moment in this episode. It's been a long time coming! I'm glad you enjoyed.
Date: October 19, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Immediately, you knew two things:
One: that this is the story you will tell your children the first time they turn their nose up to a plate full of vegetables.
Two: those children will also be hers.
...Wow.
favorite lines EVER, maybe?
loved loved loved this!!
Author's Response: I didn't eat vegetables (willingly) until about age 14, I kid you not! hopefully their kids won't be such brats. What a comment! thank you so much ! :)
Date: October 19, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done, well done. Excellent work! -CH
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: October 19, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. Those were some seriously wrinkled sheets. Yum.
Author's Response: I know, right? the shot with Pam at the door with her slightly-messed up hair, this story just came to me pretty easily. Not that I'm complaining! Glad you enjoyed it ! :)
Date: October 19, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
the promise of it all
Yes. Exactly. This is so, so lovely and has just the right balance of steam and heart and humor to make it the perfect compliment to the episode. I'm going to pretend it's canon from now on ;-) (And educational too - nifty Finland factoids to boot, lol.)
Author's Response:
RE: Finland - thanks Wikipedia! ;) (anyone in the world can edit it, so you know you're getting the best possible information;) YOU are my favorite, so thanks for the review! so flattered to be a part of your "Money" canon! thanks again.
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2007 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well done. I could completely realistically see these thoughts going through his head. So so great.
Author's Response: thanks so much for that! I have never written a second person story, but once I started going it all just went along pretty easily. thanks for reading:)
Date: October 19, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! The "your turn" line made me think of switching off to answer the cries of a baby too. This: Immediately, you knew two things: One: that this is the story you will tell your children the first time they turn their nose up to a plate full of vegetables. Two: those children will also be hers. is just so full of perfection that I can't even dissect it. Great job!
Author's Response: This review made me squee a little bit, not gonna lie. Thanks so much!