9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2008 09:21 pm Title: In the Light
Excellent =)
Date: October 23, 2007 08:12 pm Title: In the Light
Aw, I really enjoyed this. Very sweet.
Date: October 22, 2007 06:45 pm Title: In the Light
his eyes sparkle, because he knows that tomorrow, she'll wear her hair down.
Sweet. I like his satisfaction at knowing her so well, and knowing he knows her so well, and knowing she knows it. all in one sentence. Well done.
8 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2007 12:51 pm Title: In the Light
this was really stellar. quiet and slow, and something else. just lovely. thank you!
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 04:06 pm Title: In the Light
Guess they couldn't have made a promo about how JAM spent the summer getting, ahem, acquainted, right? The writing is awesome. I think you wrote the perfect tone for this first time. Thanks for posting it!
Author's Response: Eh, yeah, guess that promo couldn't have run on network primetime ;) Glad you liked the fic!
8 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 08:18 am Title: In the Light
I really like this story. I think a lot of times when people write about this topic they focus on the smut and not so much on the fact that it's all about their love and commitment to each other... I think you did a good job balancing the two, and it's more how I would have pictured this happening than any other story I've read. Good job!! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, and glad the intimacy worked. I definitely didn't intend for this to be a smutfic; wanted to focus more on their feelings and emotional connection rather than the physical. Thanks for a great review :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 08:29 pm Title: In the Light
Really, really good. I like the comparison of dark and light, Jim and Roy.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: October 20, 2007 05:16 pm Title: In the Light
*sigh* How sweet was that.... I really should be do other things, but this really had made my nonstuding worth while. :)
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Author's Response: Hee :) Glad I could contribute to student delinquency ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2007 05:16 pm Title: In the Light
Very, very nice. This line really struck me: ...and in the midst of the heady burn there's something that feels like all the pieces of her life are finally fitting together. So well put, and I think exactly what Pam would have felt. This scene was just so tender and heartfelt and in character - and I love how you worked in the 'hypocrite' TH - I can imagine it happening just that way. Hope you'll write more Office fics!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. The line you mentioned was one of those I wrote and scrapped and re-wrote numerous times, so I'm glad it worked for you. And I'm sure I'll be writing more Office fics, as the mood/inspiration/insomnia strike!