1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2020 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Much as I love the Exit 17 Proposal, this would have been an amazing one.
Date: March 07, 2008 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1
So wonderful...I love how you brought up some problems that we'll probably see in the upcoming future. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Really, really nice. And I think you touched on a future problem for our favorite couple...
Date: November 08, 2007 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Ending the fight with a marriage proposal. Pretty ballsy! Good story so far. I'll keep an eye on this one.
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Here I am sitting at work, reading your story, and crying. So beautiful. Thank you for this great story.
Date: November 07, 2007 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD. loooooooooooooooooooove it.
Date: November 06, 2007 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeeee! This is so cute!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh ny god! This is so wonderful I don't even know where to start. I'm so in love with the whole idea of this fic. God, this was the fluffiest, most wonderful thing ever. Great work!
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Squeeee!!!!! That was such a surprise! I thought he maybe wrote, "Pam" but didn't even think of marriage. And I like how he ran his fingers over the children's names. So sweet!
Date: November 05, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story makes me very happy. I love how you adknowledge that they have problems, but in the end there's just something between them that can't be ignored. I actually gasped out loud when I read the last line... even though I sorta saw where you were going with it, so kudos! I'm in a very good mood now, thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad I put you in a good mood for a while! It's been a depressing day with the strike and all. :( Perhaps I am naive, but I just think that theirs is that kind of unique love that will only grow as time goes on and each realize that they are better people just for knowing the other.
8 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was very cute. It made me so happy when Jim said his favorite band was Death Cab For Cutie. Yay, they're the best. =D Again, great story.
Author's Response: They're one of my faves too (and John's, of course). I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: November 05, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is so incredibly sweet and perfect. i absolutly love it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love how the dynamic between Toby and Jim as changed now that Jim is dating Pam.... very interesting...
Her answer is yes. I say so.
And I like the girls name :)
And... yeah, I love this. Its so its... like... okay, words aren't coming, but best I can do is its a realistic argument, its something they needed to discuss, but you made it in such a jammy way it works and it feels like them even when it feels like a universal truth and yeah.....*shuts up now*
Author's Response:
I figured you'd like the girl's name! It is a good one. :) I appreciate you trying to make a longer review but believe me I appreciate every review you write. I'm glad you enjoyed, and thanks for taking the time. :)
Date: November 05, 2007 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I seriously got chills at the end of this, Excellent story!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
Date: November 05, 2007 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Well that was just lovely. I was surprised that I was surprised - if I'm making any sense. I'd love to see them both with some ambitions - but Jim just seemed to simplify things down to the the one thing that he wanted most. Thank you for this. Made me smile. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad I could give you a smile and a small surprise. And I agree wholeheartedly :)
Date: November 05, 2007 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome Blossom, extra Awesome. That is all.
Author's Response: Thanks for the vote of confidence! :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwwwwww. this was so sweet! thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: November 05, 2007 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Well, Jim is the finest thing of all, isn't he? I loved how in that final FTC scene Pam was all he may be a lunkhead, but he's my lunkhead - and I think you've riffed on that really well here. Just as she wants for herself, she clearly loves him without question. And need I tell you that Jim's note is the sweetest thing ever? Thanks for the big aaawwwww.
Author's Response: Glad that I gave you a big awwwwww, Colette :) Pam definitely gave me an idea with that look to Oscar. I had fun exploring what Pam and Jim's biggest conflict may be within their relationship: not how they feel about each other but how they can live separately as they have begun to live together. Thanks for the read and the comment :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1
sigh. jim halpert is such a catch.
Author's Response: I know! Why aren't there more guys out there like him? Siiiiigh.
Date: November 05, 2007 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwwww...that is absolutely adorable! It is very in character of Jim and Pam! Great job. I love hoe Jim only had one thing on his list, and it only took him 6 months to propose! So sweet! Great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think he's probably been contemplating when he was going to do it for a while... I figured it would be more spontaneous than anything, because he's kind of an all or nothing guy. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: November 04, 2007 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
BEST. WAY. TO. ASK. THAT. QUESTION.
EVER.
You win. Great job!
This is an excellent look at a (totally believable) Jim being threatened by Toby. Thank you for throwing that dynamic in the mix!
Author's Response: I win? YAY! ;) I really think the Jim jealousy of Toby will be played up a bit this year... I can't wait to see that little chat! ha ha!
Date: November 04, 2007 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I so wasn't expecting that--I thought maybe "You" would be his list...but that was sooooooo much better!
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Nice! Glad I surprised you! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gah. So, so very lovely. The ending left me with the hugest smile. Gorgeous job. :)
Author's Response: Your review made me smile. Thanks so much!
Date: November 04, 2007 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love that they have this conversation that so desperately needs to be had. And then their lists - great job!
Author's Response: When I saw the tag to last week's episode, I had a feeling he was going to be in a little bit of trouble at home. It was fun/interesting playing that out. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: November 04, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww! Of course, all Jim wants is Pam. Sigh. While I am looking forward to Jam!Wedding, I am also looking forward to Jim figuring out what else goes on his list.
Author's Response: I am too. I hope that now that Jim has Pam, like a forever thing, he can turn his passion and attention to getting whatever else he wants out of life. Figure out what you're good at, Jim!