10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2011 09:29 pm Title: Validation
Guh.
10 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2008 04:15 pm Title: Presentation
Awwww this was so lovely, poor Pam :(
Date: November 19, 2007 11:39 am Title: Validation
Awwww. Mixed berry! Awwww. What a lovely ending. Really, truly, smuffy. (I nearly typed "smurphy", which would probably work just as well. Heh.)
Date: November 18, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Validation
Awww. What a sweet story. It makes me so happy to see them so content to help eachother out and so secure in their relationship. Really lovely. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Validation
Awww, JAM got keyed! This whole story was so very sweet. I loved how Jim went for the self-doubt when Pam said he was distracting. The general self-doubt at the beginning of a relationship is just so realistic. I would be a little creeped out by anyone doing my laundry though. In my house, everything would end up tiny and pink. Clearly Jim is a keeper. He cooks, he does laundry, he enjoys a bubble bath. I mean really, if we weren't around to feed them and clothe them they would all be like this, right!?!
Date: November 18, 2007 02:27 pm Title: Validation
*sigh* this is lovely, as I expected. Fluffy but without sacrificing the teasing and the fun of Jim/Pam. Just lovely :)
Date: November 18, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Validation
Yeah I love a happy JAMMY packed story!
9 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:58 am Title: Validation
"What if we use a little of both?" Jim suggested. "Then it's kind of like mixed berries." So adorable : ) Fluffy as a bubble-bath, Mox. Good job.
Author's Response: heh, thanks, Nan. Maybe a bit too fluffy, but sometimes it's just what we need....
Date: November 18, 2007 07:41 am Title: Validation
AH, yes, I love The JAMMY goodness :)
Author's Response: thanks, pamalama!!!
Date: November 17, 2007 11:20 pm Title: Validation
What a great way to end this! So happy to see "the purple number" make a reprisal even if Jim did ruin it! lol. And the mixed berry shout-out was a very nice touch. This was just a lot of fun! Thanks so much for writing it!
Author's Response: well, we needed some fluff to balance out that awesome angst-fest you're currently working on!! Thanks for reviewing, LoveFool! :D
8 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 09:36 pm Title: Validation
How very sweet is a mixed berry bubblebath? And how very hot is the image of Jim in said bubblebath? Sigh.....
Author's Response: yes, I feel the need to find some mixed berry bubble bath, or else make some!! Now if I could just find a Jim to use it on.... :D
8 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Demonstration
Red Lobster biscuits..... spaghetti on spiral pasta.... Jim cooking and cleaning - the win-win-win of yumminess!!
Author's Response: so true!! Thanks for the review, kay!
Date: November 17, 2007 09:12 pm Title: Validation
Hooray for the mixed-berry bath! And, obviously, the people in it. :)
Author's Response: LOL - thanks, invis! You know I'm now going to be scouring CVS looking for mixed berry bubble bath...
Date: November 17, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Validation
Whoa! I didn't realize there was more dessert here! Nice!
I like that Jim isn't necessarily perfect, but just perfectly helpful to a stressed out Pam.
I like to imagine that Pam & Jim have exchanged keys on the show. Yeah, I'm mental. This is news?
Author's Response:
yeah, I'd like a little exchange at some point that makes it clear they have done so. You know - Jim saying something about having to pick up something from her place while she's at school. Or something. ;)
If you're mental, where does that put me??
Date: November 16, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Demonstration
Oh how I love every letter of this!
I sense a new addiction coming on. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks, bees - I'm working on it! (and where is some new stuff from you??)
Date: November 13, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Presentation
I have to say amazing job. Loves it!!!! I love how Jim's makes Pam day all better... wish he would come clean my apartment... mrh!!! :)
Author's Response:
thanks so much, mickey! Yeah, if only we could clone Mr. Halpert, the world would be a much better place.....
Date: November 12, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Demonstration
Roy would never do anything like this. *sigh* I heart JIm. And I looooved this exchange:
Her mind speeding through that memory, her resolve softened. “Do you want me come over and tuck you in?” She teased.
“Not if you're going to be all condescending about it,” he replied with mock hurt. “I'll be just fine without you, thank you very much.”
And this got me too: “Hey,” his deep familiar voice answered.
Simple line, but I just imagined his voice and... I'm sorry, what was the question?
Author's Response:
LOL - yeah, he does SO MUCH with a 3 letter word, doesn't he?
Thanks for reviewing - you';re the best! :-)
Date: November 12, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Presentation
I always grin when I see a notice in my e-mail that there's a new story from Moxie! And you never disappoint. I would love to have a Jim to help out around the house. And I did not know you could buy Red Lobster's biscuits at the grocery store! That made my day! Looking forward to the next chapter (and the next chapter of "Appeasing Ms. Beesly"!)
Author's Response: yep - bisquick makes the mix, so make sure you get some!! :-) Thanks for reviewing, stampsgal - I'm working on new chapters of various things as I type this!
Date: November 12, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Demonstration
Oh, Jim is love! Though if he did my laundry without asking, I'd probably wring his neck (some things just don't go in the dryer!). There really is no better feeling than coming from a really long day and having everything already taken care of for you.
Author's Response: yeah, I might make a reference to Pam's concern over his laundry skills - but remember, this is a guy who voluntarily uses fabric softener, so I think he was pretty careful. ;-) Thanks so much for the review, Jenn!
Date: November 12, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Demonstration
Ok I have to find a way to make the smile leave my face after that---he is the cutest boyfriend ever!!
Author's Response: yes, Jim Halpert is the perfect boyfriend. If only we could bring him to life! Thanks for reading!!
Date: November 12, 2007 02:25 pm Title: Demonstration
Looooooooooove it. Seriously, where can I order a Jim? I'm sure he'd be on backorder, but I'd gladly wait.
P.S....will their be a spin-off written for Jim, Pam, and the purple number?
Author's Response:
You have been added to the list. Once the cloning process has been perfected we'll be rushing you out your very own Jim Halpert. :-) And as for your P.S. - stay tuned for our final chapter. :-D
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 12, 2007 02:09 pm Title: Demonstration
That is just so much sweetness I had to eat some leftover Halloween candy. Seriously. Reese's pieces are in front of me right now.
Author's Response: Just make sure you floss afterwards! I will not be held responsible for cavities. :-)
Date: November 12, 2007 02:00 pm Title: Demonstration
Hi, I'd like to place an order to delivery. One (1) Jim Halpert please. ASAP.
This is just lovely. Left a ridiculous smile on my face :)
This part especially was so brilliantly expressed:
How someone could manage to cram that much sadness and despair and the image of homeless orphans into a two letter word was beyond her. She was pretty sure he didn't do it on purpose, but just the way he'd let the h-sound linger in the air was like releasing a mushroom cloud of guilt on her shoulders.
It just sums up that feeling of Pam's of being completely unable to resist anything Jim does that even the word Oh has this major effect on her.
Just one typo I noticed:
Jim nodded, trying not as deflated as he felt., I'm guessing you meant not to look as deflated as he felt.
Thanks for a great read :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the typo notice - I can read something twelve times, then the minute I post it there's always one error! So glad you liked it; I shall have to put the Halpert order on backorder until we can get the cloning process perfected. I assure you it will be worth the wait, however! ;-)
Date: November 12, 2007 10:52 am Title: Presentation
Awww...of course Karen never had a key! Lovely. And let me tell you of nightmares you're going to give me with the notion of a female Michael Scott. Yikes! Nice way to play on the events of the most recent ep and Jim's managerial transformation.
Author's Response: Thanks, belsum - I really love the idea of Jim finding out this season what he really wants to do; let's hope the writer's strike gets settled soon so we don't lose the rest of the season! Thanks for reviewing, as always!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 09:28 am Title: Demonstration
Oh, they're so sweet. I could quote my favorite parts, but that would take forever, so let's just say, "the part where they're being cute together." Very nice.
Author's Response: hey - I was just thinking of you today when I was sitting here wondering where my energy to write NaNo this year has disappeared to! Thanks for the review!! :-)