10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2009 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
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hi, this is claire, just wanted to let you now i loved this story and jim's flip-free reaction. the part at the coffeehouse is great, the conversation was so jim and pam. great job!
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Date: November 13, 2008 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
My baby is eight months old now, so I was in that foggy hormonal new pregnancy stage not that long ago. You nailed it exactly. And how swee thty are together. *sigh*
Date: November 13, 2008 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm in tears at my desk at work. Now, it's possible that may be partly due to the pregnancy hormones. But I think it's largely due to the awesomeness of this story. Wow. That, right there, is some top notch, absolutely SPOT ON writing about the insanity and bizarreness of being pregnant. Hooboy.
9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. At first I thought it was going to be a little silly, but the end? So cute. And perfect.
The best response to this challenge that I've read so far. Thanks for sharing!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god, me loved this big time =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was an amazing story. Mostly, it was hilarious. Especially the part where Pam turned 4 because of hormones.
But it was also poetic. =]
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 18, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
“… because it’s hard to go telling someone you’re pregnant if they’re having a conversation with themselves…”
ahahahaha that was perfect :]
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: November 12, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh oooh ooh! I know whats going on!!!
Pam is obviously having a mental break with reality and IS going through puberty again (the rare double puberty... its not fun!)
It really is the only explaination!
Okay, I love the entire conversation, but i love this the most:
“Bingo, that one. I suggest that we shift focus to that.”
I told my parents there was no Santa. I thought they actually believed. I was so upset I had to be the one to break the news to them.
Author's Response: LOL! Yesss! You're the only one who understands ;) Aww but that's sad about your parents. Sometimes they can just be so naive, but they grow up so fast don't they? Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet! And funny. And pitch perfect.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!
Date: November 11, 2007 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Please continue! This story was amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I might consider continuing if I get the chance. I guess I'll have a lot of time on my hands, with the strike and all :(
Date: November 11, 2007 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet and funny and warm. Love Jim's 'flip free' line and this: “I’m not freaking out because I know this is exactly where we should be” is especially apt - he's always known exactly where they should be, hasn't he? (Well, S3 emotional anarchy aside, that is.) I think he'd have that faith, despite being a little freaked out himself. Nice clean, evocative writing too - for instance: But then he kisses her, light and slow and like he could do it every day forever, which criss-crosses and cross-hatches her wiring so much that she starts to get a tad lightheaded. Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think he has always had that sense deep down that they would be perfect together, that if everything else just stepped out of their way they could be happy. And now that's happened, I think he would be pretty sure it was the right thing. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw. This is totally how Jim finding out Pam is pregnant could go. I love dialogue filled stories, I always read them twice, once like a table read, and the next as the final shoot :)
I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that it warranted a second read :)
Date: November 10, 2007 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this a lot. I liked that Pam was freaked out by the idea of being pregnant because it wasn't exactly what she had planned, and it's a scary thing to try to figure out on the spot. Glad to see Jim was supportive. I wouldn't have expected less from him.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think that Jim spends a lot of his time in reaction to other people, so if Pam was freaking out he would absolutely be supportive. Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
lady you totally knocked this out of the park! i love it. it's simple, the language is perfect, the voices are PERFECT. sigh. i wish you wrote a story every day...
Author's Response: I wish I could write everyday ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: November 10, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jam!Babies are the best. THAT is why the writers strike will end -- so there can be Jam!Babies one day.
Her and Jim are head-over-heels, moon bouncing to the sky happy. Guh. So true. That's why we love them. Nicely done.
Author's Response: That IS why the writers strike will end... now we just have to brainwash the studios into becoming Jammers so they can understand the true importance of Jam babies ;) Thank you!
Date: November 10, 2007 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is perfect from beginning to end. From Pam flipping out about the baby ducks -- complete with sailor level profanity to the network to Michael's SPOT ON CLASSIC lines for why he is not available to speak with Jan -- to Jim's reaction to the baby news....just everything about this was fantastic.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I just… really? You’re not flipping out about this?”
“I am flip-free.”
Such a cute story! I love your way with words.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
That does it. You're going on my favorite author list. :)
I absolutely LOVE the way you write. It's so honest, so real, and yet so beautiful. (Not to mention hilarious--Pam's crying speech about the baby ducks KILLED me.)
Bravo and kudos to you!
Author's Response: YAY! That really means a lot because I've always loved YOUR writing. So, double yay! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: November 10, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really cute. I love Pam in freak-out mode. We don't get much of that on the show. And it was so cute when Jim was all reassuring because of course he would be. The whole thing was just adorable.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'd like to see Pam freak out on the show ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was so cute!! very well written, funny, very in character - excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: November 10, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I looooooooooooooooooved it. Especially the bit where Jim and Pam are talking over each other. Ha. Great dialogue there. And then Jim's reaction after he stops freaking out, and Pam's smile. Squee!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I usually don't have much dialogue in my stuff, so it's good to hear that it worked out.
Date: November 10, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, Jim is such a cutie in this story!
Author's Response: I love injecting a bit of cute!Jim into my stories. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay babies! haha. this story was awsome. pam taking a pregnancy test in a target bathroom with a stolen egg timer made my day. so funny!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: November 10, 2007 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww this is great! I love how she had the revelation in Target then shoplifted an egg-timer...classic! And I loved the convo in the coffee shop, from the initial conversations with themselves to the really cute way they ended it....yay for Jam babies!
Author's Response: Yay for Jam babies indeed ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: November 10, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just perfect. I could see this happening on the show and I love Jim's reaction.
Fabulous story!
Author's Response: Thanks you! It's always nice to hear that something that came out of my head could have come out out of the writers' :)