10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2008 06:59 pm Title: The Future Mother in Law
This is such a beautiful story, CONTINUE!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2008 01:06 am Title: The Ex-Files
I don't know why, but I so love it when Pam gets all excited about being a Halpert =) I loved how Jim got all grrrrr but then she talked to him and calmed him down, sexy :)
8 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 08:02 pm Title: The Argument
This chapter had so much going on. I remember stinky Jim and laughing at his thoughts on women's bath products and then feeling badly for their fight, but then I got to the amazing sex and I don't remember anything else. Wow. So, so HOT. You truly have a way with words and feelings and, um, you know. And this line is the best line of all the lines: "Beads of sweat formed along his brow as the inevitable Making Out With Pam Raging Hard On made its intentions known."
Date: December 31, 2007 10:17 am Title: The Ex-Files
Wahoo!
So lovely... i still love that jim misses pam and likes to use her bathroom stuff. So cute. :)
If I wasn't so sick and congested, that might make more sense (originally, instaed of missed, I put passed *rolls eyes*) :) Great job shariep! Cant wait to read more ;)
Author's Response: haha thanks Beta Buddy, for everything, as use. I hope you feel better :)
Date: December 31, 2007 09:49 am Title: The Argument
awhhh ! this was perfect ! :)
Author's Response: hehe thanks so much for reading! :)
Date: December 31, 2007 09:08 am Title: The Argument
Woot! Makeup sex!
It is freaking adorable how much Jim misses Pam when they are apart for a few hours. I imagine he does sleep pretty soundly now.
Author's Response: thanks for the review, lisahoo ;) haha that rhymed.
Date: December 09, 2007 12:55 am Title: The Ex-Files
I really like the light, almost jaunty feel of this story. ;) Pam is bouncy and happy, as she deserves to be. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you! I like Happy!Pam. Season 4 reinforced that for me and I think we should see even more of her. And I find Happy!Pam a little easier to write than Emo!Pam. Anyway, thanks so much for reading!
8 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2007 09:41 pm Title: The Future Mother in Law
Beautiful ring. This was a sweet chapter - I love Pam's relationship with Jim's mom, and the fact that the Mom's are becoming friends, too. And I was green with envy at this line: "It didn’t hurt that he was the best sex she’d ever had, either."
Author's Response: haha, yah I'm a little jealous too. But good for our ol' Pammy, she deserves it! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: December 08, 2007 12:47 am Title: The Ex-Files
I abosolutly LOVE this story!! It's refreshing to see them so in love and things just falling into place! The dialogue is beautifuly written and shows the time and care that you put into this story. Once of the things that did hook me in was that it's very in character. Just like McDonalds, I'm loving it!!! More please!!!
Author's Response: thank you!!! it really means a lot to know you believe its in character because that's the thing I find the hardest when writing Jim & Pam. Knowing what words they would say and what one's they wouldn't. How would they react to a certain situation, etc. I'm trying! LOL. Thanks for reading! :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:57 pm Title: The Ex-Files
"He forced himself to remember that when it all came crashing back to him that she’d had another life, another fiancé, another lover, before him, and he wasn’t as completely and totally beyond it as he’d hoped." Beautiful line. I love jealous and possesive Jim!
Author's Response: teehee I do too. I feel like there should be a whole Genre section for Jealous/Possessive Jim. I think he's kind of hot. I'd like to see alot more of him. :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:31 pm Title: The Ex-Files
I love coming to MTT and seeing a story by you! What a great way to spend a Sunday evening.
First of all, I love that this is fluff. A little bit of drama filled with a ton of cute moments that make me wish we didn't have to wait until who knows how long for the next Office episode.
And all of it, the insecurity, the fear, the anger, it all left. With those three words, Old Jim was gone and New Jim fully took hold. Mine, he thought as he slanted his eyes down to look into her pretty face. Mine.
I love this part, mainly because I love seeing Possesive!Jim. Pam is his, and he deserves being a little selfish.
Great job, Shari...and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: awww thanks Laur!! I plan for a slight bit of .. well, I won't even say angst, but, you know, planning a wedding is stressful so there will be... disagreements, I'll say. haha. but this is fluff. I don't have the discipline to do angst unless I literally have every sentence plotted, otherwise I lose my nerve. I hope to see some more stories from you in the future too!!
Date: November 18, 2007 05:51 pm Title: The Ex-Files
“I just want you,” he whispered, his eyes darkening as he took in her familiar, pretty features. “I’ve always wanted you.”
*dies*
That still gets me. :) And the ending? And middle? And beginning?
WEll I just like it all. Lovely, lovely job!! I'm so glad I could help you out ;) You cannot give me credit for 99% b/c you m'dear wrote this awesomeness!! :) Great job!
Author's Response: haha aww thanks beta ol' buddy ol pal'. No, I must give you credit b/c you pointed out so many things I think I would have ignored/missed/convinced myself were okay and its just so nice to have another set of eyes from a person who loves & knows the PB&J as much as - if not more ;) - than I do. YAY for you! And yah, I love that line too. I mean, I wrote it, but still, I think it sums up Jim's feelings for Pam pretty neatly.
Date: November 18, 2007 05:35 pm Title: The Ex-Files
Oh, I adore this; it's quiet and normal and completely in-character, yet it has a new kind of life to it that I can probably credit to the way you write this as well as the way they are. We don't see much of this on the show, and we certainly don't see much of them being engaged and in love on the show, and I love getting this chance - I really, really love it.
Loved Jim's thought processes and the fact that not liking Roy is more of a reflex than it is something he really wants; he knows he has Pam but there's still the automatic reaction that gets him. And I adore Pam, too - especially since I can see in love in practically every mode of action of hers. It's nice. I really wish I saw more of this on the show [and the thing is if they do get more Jim/Pam on the show, I can imagine them quoting this fic, because it's that realistic and in-character - am I getting repetitive? I feel like I'm getting repetitive.]
Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: wow, thanks so much. I love reviews like yours because it really kind of even makes me think differently about my own writing. Its so nice to see how other people interpret what you put on the page. These are the kind of moments I long to see from PB&J but it being a faux doc & those two being so private at work I think makes it doubtful we'll see alot of them so that's where the world of fic comes into play!!! :)
Date: November 18, 2007 05:05 pm Title: The Ex-Files
Really enjoyed this. Low-key and very true to the characters. Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: thanks. that means a lot. I kind of agonized over every word that they spoke, desperate to make certain they were things Pam or Jim would say/think/feel and I think, for me anyway, I did a pretty okay job but I could be in total denial about it, so thanks so much for those words, I reaaaallly appreciate them!!
Date: November 18, 2007 04:37 pm Title: The Ex-Files
So lovely! I can't wait to read a story that actually goes through Jim & Pams wedding :). I can't wait to continue reading more :).
Author's Response: awww thanks. I don't plan a conventional big bash at allllll for those two but they will of course tie the knot. Thanks for reading and I can't wait for you to read more too!!