1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2023 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fun shower sex, always dicier than we think when writing HAHA! But they have managed it well.
5 [Report This]Date: September 07, 2009 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
so, i like this... but it's really not necessary to put jim's lines in italics. in fact, it's almost distracting
Date: September 10, 2008 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good smut *and* in character...nice combination! Thanks for this.
8 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
LMAO go PAM :)
Date: January 18, 2008 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
I can imagine them having those conversations. I bet they can't get enough of each other after all those years apart.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Smutt! Yay!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much:)
Date: November 19, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was exactly what my tired mind needed. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: November 19, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
<slaps a $50 on the table> I'm out, Jerry! I got nuthin!
Author's Response: I LOVE THAT YOU INCORPORATED SEINFELD!!! It's one of my favorite shows, ever, and that episode is especially great. Thanks for the laugh and the review:)
Date: November 19, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoosh....(wiping sweat from my brow) :o)
From the first few lines, this was awesome and so very real -- god, I remember well when my husband & I were just dating and having to pick those days to just finally go home and do laundry, wash dishes, clean, etc. Totally realistic, that. :o)
And wow, love the rest -- their voices are spot on, and I love it that she "lured" him over, heh. (And I can absolutely hear Jim saying, "I feel so cheap," and Pam retorting, "You should.")
This was just a fantastic little gift for a Monday evening, let me tell you. :o)
Author's Response:
Queen of Angst, thank you for your lovely review. Love to hear that you found the voices spot on....always try for that to do them any kind of justice. Appreciate it:)
Date: November 19, 2007 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the shower smut. It makes me happy. More please!
Author's Response: You are very kind. Might have something new soon:)
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Heehee.....that was delightful, to put it very,very mildly.
Author's Response:
HA! Thank you!!
Date: November 19, 2007 07:56 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL! "I feel so cheap." Jim would totally say that. Excellent smut-fest!
Author's Response: He would, wouldn't he? Thanks so much for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: November 19, 2007 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Deliciously dirty in a clean sort of way . Great smut gets an instant 10, and you have a way with smut ; )
Author's Response:
You are very kind. I like "deliciously dirty." Thanks so much for the review. Appreciate it:)
Date: November 19, 2007 04:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes! The promised shower scene! Love the title - none of that namby pamby taking 3000 words to get to the point. Ha!
As usual, this is not only hot as all get out, but how joyfully into each other they are (and I don't just mean literally) comes through in every sentence - implicitly. (Implicit=good, in the Book of Colette ;-) Too often with smut I think, ok, kinda hot, and I now have an explicit description of their various parts...but why did they want each other to begin with?
You know I love how clean (there goes another pun) and direct your writing always is - and witty and fun and...it's just not show-off writing, if you know what I mean. Ok, clearly it's too early in the a.m. for me to be coherent, so I'll close with saying that for some reason, this line cracked me up and I could really hear Jim saying (if only): “Actually, I could use a shower myself. I’m filthy.”
Author's Response:
HA! Yes, I could hear Jim say that line very clearly in my head as well. Now if he would only come over and say it in person. Thanks for the very kind review. I always worry about the technical aspect of the smut and hope that it sounds good on paper, because in my head it sounds just fine:) Thanks, again.
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whew. Nice [/Kevin].
This was hot! A perfect Sunday night read! Jim and Pam in a shower? You can't go wrong!
Author's Response: You really can't go wrong, can you? Glad you enjoyed this little trip to Smutville. Thank you very much!
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the title. I loved such a see-through excuse for Jim to come over. I love the dialogue and the smut was ... yeah. Very nice. :)
Author's Response: You are sweet. I'm the worst when it comes to titles, so I figured I would make it pretty straight forward. Thanks so much for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
awesome!! Love snarky, hot, sexy, having-sex Jim & Pam. That was hot. Yum.
Author's Response: I love them, too! If only this show were on HBO. Thanks so much for the review. Appreciate it.
Date: November 18, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I needed this. I love smut for no reason. Especially between these two... Thanks so much for making my evening better.
Author's Response: You are very sweet. I'm glad that you enjoyed this and that it could make your evening a little better. Thanks for the review:)
Date: November 18, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, bitterpill, for giving me such a lovely smuffy fix! We need lots of it to get us through the strike. That Beesly, she's a sneaky one. Love it!
Author's Response: She is a sneaky one. I have a feeling Jim doesn't mind:) Thank you so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great! "i feel so cheap" "you should" that was an awsome ending!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That ending came to me at the very last minute. Glad you enjoyed it:)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK wow - not usually this much of a fan of the smut, but I loved this! Sooo good. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: November 18, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, first of all, when I saw the title of this thing I actually went "HA!" And it was awesome. It's so weird that you came out with a new story now after I had just looked through all of your stuff and thought, "Wow I really like the way bitterpill writes."
Author's Response: That is so nice. Thank you! I figured I would cut to the chase with the title. Thanks for the review:)
8 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. You certainly gave this reader what she wanted - hot strawberry shower gel clean Jim and Pam smuff!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, sometimes all you need is some strawberry shower gel and a dirty Jim.
Date: November 18, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay, bitterpill! Because they can.
Thanks for entertaining us while the strike is going on. At least Pam & Jim are having fun....
Author's Response: HA! Yes, they are having fun, oblivious to this nasty strike. Thanks for the review:)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
And I now have a gigantic smile on my face, thanks to you. Oh how I love simple, smutty fic. This was perfect, and just what I needed to end the weekend. Loved it! :)
Author's Response: You are very kind. Thank you so much!!